Woman With Down Syndrome Left a Note on Every Biker’s Windshield That Said “Please Don’t Go” — Transcript
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- 0:00The water hit the road before I heard
- 0:02it. One second I was leaning into a
- 0:04curve in Spearfish Canyon, 14 [music]
- 0:07bikes rumbling behind me. The next, the
- 0:09creek was across the pavement, brown and
- 0:12fast, dragging branches and gravel
- 0:14toward the edge. Ahead, [music] Tyler's
- 0:17engine screamed once and went silent.
- 0:20In my vest pocket, a folded square of
- 0:22notebook paper was soaking through. Two
- 0:25hours earlier, a woman in a yellow coat
- 0:27had [music] begged me not to go.
- 0:29I patted her shoulder and called her
- 0:30sweetheart.
- 0:32I never even read the back. [music] Now,
- 0:34the rain came sideways. My phone showed
- 0:37one bar, and somewhere behind me, Carl
- 0:40was shouting my name. The first note was
- 0:42tucked under the wiper blade of a black
- 0:44Road King, and Douglas Hollis almost
- 0:47crumpled it without reading it.
- 0:49It was the sixth day of the rally in
- 0:52Sturgis, [music]
- 0:52South Dakota, and the heat had settled
- 0:55over the gravel lot behind Linda's Diner
- 0:57like a wet blanket.
- 0:59Hundreds of motorcycles ticked and
- 1:01shimmered in the sun.
- 1:03Leather creaked.
- 1:05Somewhere a speaker played classic rock
- 1:07too loud, and the air smelled of
- 1:09exhaust, fried onions, and sunscreen.
- 1:12Douglas was 52, tall and broad, with a
- 1:16gray beard gone wiry in the dry air, and
- 1:19an eagle tattooed across his left
- 1:21forearm.
- 1:22He had ridden to Sturgis every August
- 1:24for 22 years. He knew the sounds of the
- 1:27rally the way other men know the sounds
- 1:30of their own kitchens, and a scrap of
- 1:32paper under a wiper was not part of that
- 1:34music. He pulled it free.
- 1:37The paper had been torn from a spiral
- 1:39notebook, the edge still fringed. Across
- 1:43the front in thick blue marker, someone
- 1:45had written in careful block letters,
- 1:48"Please don't go."
- 1:50"Huh," he said.
- 1:52He looked down the row. Every
- 1:54windshield, every handlebar, every
- 1:57bar in the first three rows had a small
- 1:59white square fluttering against it. 40
- 2:02bikes, maybe 50. Whoever had done it had
- 2:06been busy.
- 2:07"Somebody's lonely." said Carl Ridgeway
- 2:10swinging a leg off the Ultra Glide
- 2:12beside him.
- 2:13Carl was 58, president of the Black
- 2:16Hills Iron Brothers with a voice like a
- 2:19gravel truck backing up.
- 2:21He held his own note at arm's length,
- 2:23squinted, and snorted.
- 2:26"Please don't go."
- 2:28"What are we? A boyfriend?"
- 2:30Then Douglas saw her. She stood near the
- 2:33dumpsters at the far end of the lot, a
- 2:35small woman in a bright yellow rain
- 2:37jacket despite the 90° heat.
- 2:40Light brown hair hung in a long braid
- 2:42down her back.
- 2:44She wore round glasses and she hugged a
- 2:46spiral notebook against her chest with
- 2:48one arm while the other hand gripped a
- 2:51marker like a tool she could not afford
- 2:53to drop.
- 2:55She moved from bike to bike with quick,
- 2:57nervous steps and every few seconds her
- 3:00eyes lifted to the sky. The sky was
- 3:03blue, not a single cloud in it. "That's
- 3:06Anna." Carl said following his gaze.
- 3:08"Hangs around the lot years now. Linda
- 3:11feeds her. Harmless."
- 3:14He said the last word the way a man says
- 3:16it about a stray dog.
- 3:18Douglas watched her slide another note
- 3:20under a wiper on a chrome-covered
- 3:22Softail. She stepped back and checked
- 3:25her wristwatch. She looked at the sky
- 3:27again. Her lips moved as if she were
- 3:29counting something.
- 3:31"Is she okay?" Douglas asked. "She's
- 3:34Anna." Carl said as though that
- 3:36explained everything.
- 3:38Tyler Boone drifted over from the next
- 3:40row, 24 years old, shaved head, a brand
- 3:44new patch on his vest still stiff at the
- 3:46corners.
- 3:47He waved his note over his head.
- 3:50"Check it out, boys.
- 3:52I got a love letter.
- 3:53He laughed loud, and a few riders
- 3:56laughed with him. Then he cupped his
- 3:58hands around his mouth. "Hey, yellow
- 4:01coat, you want a ride? I'll take you
- 4:03around the block."
- 4:05Anna flinched. Her shoulders went up
- 4:07around her ears, and she took one step
- 4:10back. But she did not run. That was the
- 4:13first thing Douglas noticed, and for
- 4:15some reason it stuck with him. She
- 4:17planted her feet and kept her marker
- 4:19moving. A door banged open behind the
- 4:22diner.
- 4:23Walt Haynes, the lot security guard,
- 4:26crossed the gravel at a fast, heavy walk
- 4:28with one hand on his radio. He was 67
- 4:31with a mustache like a push broom and a
- 4:34belly straining against his reflective
- 4:36vest.
- 4:37"Anna, what did I tell you? Away from
- 4:40the bikes. Every day, the same thing."
- 4:43"I'm not touching them," Anna said. Her
- 4:46voice was high and clear, a little
- 4:48slurred on the hard consonants, and it
- 4:50carried across the whole lot. "I'm only
- 4:53putting the paper."
- 4:54"You're bothering folks."
- 4:56Walt took her by the elbow gently, the
- 4:59way you steer a child away from a
- 5:00street. "Come on, back to your moms."
- 5:04"Mom is at work, and they can't go,
- 5:06Walt." "Nobody's going anywhere, hon."
- 5:09"They are going, at 2:00. The canyon."
- 5:13"Okay, okay."
- 5:15Walt turned her toward the diner's back
- 5:16door. "Let's get you some pie."
- 5:19Douglas should have let it go. A man
- 5:21with 22 August behind him does not step
- 5:24into other people's business. But he
- 5:26looked at the paper in his hand, and
- 5:28without quite knowing why, turned it
- 5:30over. The back was covered in smaller
- 5:33writing, crowded, the letters leaning on
- 5:35each other as if they were afraid of
- 5:37running out of room. He caught the first
- 5:40few words. Then a Harley two rows over
- 5:42roared to life. Someone shouted his
- 5:45name, and the moment broke apart like a
- 5:47plate on concrete.
- 5:49He folded the note once and slid it into
- 5:51his vest pocket.
- 5:53He would read it later.
- 5:55That was what he told himself.
- 5:57Carl clapped him on the back. "2:00,
- 6:00brothers. Spearfish Canyon. Best curves
- 6:02in the Black Hills, and I'm buying the
- 6:04first round when we're back."
- 6:06A cheer went up from the Iron Brothers,
- 6:08and engines coughed and caught one after
- 6:11another across the lot.
- 6:12Douglas glanced at his watch. 1:20.
- 6:16At the diner window, Linda Pruitt stood
- 6:19with a dish towel twisted in her hands,
- 6:21watching Anna disappear through the back
- 6:23door.
- 6:24It was not the look of a woman watching
- 6:26something harmless.
- 6:28It was the look of someone who had been
- 6:30told, over and over, to mind her own
- 6:33business, and who had begun to wonder
- 6:36what that business had cost.
- 6:38Inside Linda's diner, the air
- 6:40conditioner fought a losing battle with
- 6:42the heat.
- 6:44Anna Whittaker sat on the last stool at
- 6:46the counter with a slice of cherry pie
- 6:48in front of her that she had not
- 6:50touched.
- 6:51Besides the plate, lay a small black
- 6:54radio with a bent antenna and a crank on
- 6:56the side, and she kept one finger
- 6:59resting on the volume knob.
- 7:01Every few minutes it crackled, and a
- 7:03flat mechanical voice read out numbers.
- 7:07Anna listened to each one with her whole
- 7:09face.
- 7:10"Eat your pie, honey," Linda Pruitt
- 7:13said, refilling a mug two stools down.
- 7:17Linda was 61 with silver hair cropped
- 7:19short for the kitchen and forearms
- 7:22scarred by 30 years of fryers.
- 7:25"Walt means well. He just doesn't know
- 7:27how to say it."
- 7:29"Walt says it the same way every day,"
- 7:32Anna said.
- 7:33"Go away, Anna. Stay back, Anna. I'm not
- 7:36in the way. I stand by the dumpsters."
- 7:39"I know you do. The radio says the storm
- 7:42is building over the Wyoming line and
- 7:44Anna turned the knob so Linda could hear
- 7:46the monotone voice. See, dew point 72.
- 7:51That is very wet air. Hot on the ground,
- 7:54cold up high, it makes a big cloud. Then
- 7:56the cloud comes east. It will be in the
- 7:59canyon by 3:00, maybe 3:15.
- 8:02Linda set the coffee pot down.
- 8:04She looked through the front window at
- 8:05the clear blue sky. Then she looked at
- 8:08Anna, really looked. The way she had
- 8:10been looking at her for 6 years, ever
- 8:13since a quiet young woman in a yellow
- 8:15coat first wandered into the lot after
- 8:18her father's funeral and asked if she
- 8:20could watch the motorcycles.
- 8:22"The forecast this morning said sunny."
- 8:25Linda said gently. "The forecast is for
- 8:27Sturgis. The canyon is different. Daddy
- 8:31said the canyon makes its own weather."
- 8:33Anna's voice wobbled, then steadied.
- 8:37"Daddy was a spotter.
- 8:39He watched clouds for the weather
- 8:40service. He taught me how to read the
- 8:42numbers. I wrote it all down. I'm not
- 8:45making it up, Linda.
- 8:47I didn't say you were."
- 8:49"Everybody thinks I am."
- 8:51Linda had no answer for that because it
- 8:54was true.
- 8:55Over the years she had heard plenty of
- 8:57people say that Anna was a sweet girl
- 8:59who got ideas.
- 9:01She had said it herself once or twice
- 9:04and the memory sat in her stomach like a
- 9:06stone.
- 9:07Anna slid the spiral notebook across the
- 9:10counter.
- 9:11Linda turned the pages slowly.
- 9:14Dates in blue marker, columns of
- 9:16numbers, small careful drawings of
- 9:18clouds with arrows beside them. A page
- 9:21from June read, "Hail by 5:00. Wrong.
- 9:25Hail at 4:40." A page from last August
- 9:28read, "Wind at 4:30. Tents fall." Linda
- 9:33remembered that afternoon. The vendor
- 9:35tents on Main Street had come down at
- 9:37exactly half past four and nobody had
- 9:40thanked the girl by the dumpsters
- 9:42because nobody had known she had said
- 9:43it. The bell above the door jingled. A
- 9:47wave of heat and leather swept in with
- 9:49Douglas Hollis who ducked under the
- 9:51frame. Carl Ridgeway and Tyler Boone
- 9:53followed along with half a dozen others
- 9:56in vests with the Iron Brothers patch.
- 9:59They filled the booths by the window
- 10:01loud and sunburned and the waitress went
- 10:03scrambling for menus.
- 10:05Douglas did not sit.
- 10:07He stood for a moment looking at the end
- 10:09of the counter at the yellow coat and
- 10:11the long braid and something tightened
- 10:14in his chest.
- 10:15He had a daughter Kelsey 31 who lived in
- 10:18Denver and called every Sunday. He could
- 10:21not have said why the sight of a
- 10:22stranger's braid made him think of her.
- 10:26He walked over with his cap in his hand
- 10:28and used the voice a person uses for a
- 10:31small child bright and slow.
- 10:34Hey there, you're Anna, right? I'm
- 10:37Douglas. Thanks for the note. That was
- 10:39real kind of you.
- 10:40Anna turned on the stool. Up close her
- 10:43eyes were hazel and very direct. Did you
- 10:46read the back?
- 10:47Well, I
- 10:49Douglas touched his vest pocket. I got
- 10:51the front, please don't go. That's
- 10:53sweet, sweetheart, but we've got a ride
- 10:55planned. We do it every year. We'll be
- 10:57back by supper and I'll come tell you
- 10:59all about it.
- 11:01I am not a sweetheart, Anna said. I am
- 11:04Anna.
- 11:05In the booth Tyler snickered. Heat
- 11:08climbed up Douglas's neck. Anna. Sorry.
- 11:11Yes. He patted her shoulder twice quick
- 11:14and awkward the way you would pat a
- 11:15nervous horse. You're a good girl. Don't
- 11:19you worry about us.
- 11:21I am 29.
- 11:23Yes, ma'am.
- 11:24The back of the note has the numbers,
- 11:26Anna said.
- 11:28She spoke slowly now each word set down
- 11:30carefully as if she were stacking
- 11:32plates.
- 11:34The storm, the creek, the second bridge.
- 11:37Please read it, Douglas. Please, before
- 11:40you go.
- 11:41"I will." he said, and he meant it the
- 11:44way a man means a thing when he already
- 11:46has 12 other things on [snorts] his
- 11:47mind.
- 11:48"I promise."
- 11:50She studied him for a long moment.
- 11:52Then she nodded, and the nod was the
- 11:54saddest thing he had seen all week
- 11:56because it was not the nod of a person
- 11:58who believed him. It was the nod of a
- 12:00person who had been promised things
- 12:02before.
- 12:04Behind him, Tyler's voice carried across
- 12:06the diner.
- 12:08"Yellow coats got a weather report,
- 12:10boys. Better cancel the rally."
- 12:12A few of them laughed. Carl did not
- 12:15laugh, exactly, but he did not stop it,
- 12:18either.
- 12:19He stirred his coffee and looked at the
- 12:21menu.
- 12:22Anna's hand tightened around the radio.
- 12:26Douglas turned toward the booth and
- 12:27said, sharper than he intended, "Tyler,
- 12:30enough. I'm just kidding around."
- 12:33"Enough."
- 12:34It was not much.
- 12:35It was less than he should have done,
- 12:37but Anna's eyes flicked up to him,
- 12:39surprised, and for 1 second he almost
- 12:42pulled out the stool beside her and
- 12:44asked her to explain everything from the
- 12:46beginning.
- 12:47Then Carl's phone buzzed on the table,
- 12:49and Carl glanced at it and said,
- 12:52"Weather app says clear skies all day.
- 12:550% chance of anything.
- 12:58Heat up, boys. We roll at 2." And the
- 13:01moment slid away like a coin down a
- 13:03drain. Walt Haynes came through the back
- 13:05door just then, red in the face, and
- 13:08took Anna by the elbow again. "That's
- 13:10it, Anna. I told you. You're done for
- 13:13today. No more in this lot. Go on home."
- 13:16"Walt, they can't go."
- 13:18"I'll call your mother." "Please don't
- 13:20call my mother." But he already had the
- 13:22phone out. Linda stepped around the
- 13:24counter.
- 13:25"Walt, let her sit. She's not hurting
- 13:27anyone."
- 13:29"She's upsetting customers, Linda."
- 13:32"Is she?"
- 13:33Linda looked at the booths, and for the
- 13:35first time in 6 years, her voice had an
- 13:37edge. "Seems to me she's the only one in
- 13:41this room paying attention."
- 13:43Nobody answered.
- 13:44In the silence, the radio on the counter
- 13:47crackled again, and a flat voice read
- 13:49out a new set of numbers. Nobody was
- 13:52listening to it. Anna, who was
- 13:54listening, went completely still.
- 13:56By a quarter to 2:00, Anna was standing
- 13:58outside the chain-link fence at the edge
- 14:00of the lot with her notebook in both
- 14:03hands, watching the Iron Brothers
- 14:05kick-start their engines one by one.
- 14:08A dented gray Subaru pulled up beside
- 14:11her and stopped hard.
- 14:13Janet Odom climbed out, still wearing
- 14:15her county library name tag. She was 55
- 14:19with tired eyes and a gray streak she
- 14:21had stopped covering years ago, and she
- 14:24looked as though she had run the last
- 14:26block, even though she had driven it.
- 14:28"Walt called," Janet said. "Anna, what
- 14:31have you done?" "I put notes on the
- 14:33motorcycles."
- 14:34"Baby."
- 14:35Janet closed her eyes briefly.
- 14:38"We talked about this. After the 4th of
- 14:40July parade, after what those boys said
- 14:44to you at the fairgrounds, people are
- 14:46not always kind. I can't be everywhere.
- 14:49I can't keep picking you up off the
- 14:51ground." "I know, Mom." "Then why?" Anna
- 14:54lifted her chin. "Because nobody else is
- 14:57going to say it."
- 14:58Janet looked at her daughter, and
- 15:00something old and painful moved across
- 15:03her face. She had spent 29 years
- 15:05building a fence around Anna, one
- 15:08careful board at a time,
- 15:10and she had always told herself it was
- 15:12love.
- 15:13It was love.
- 15:15But standing there,
- 15:17with the engines revving behind the
- 15:19chain-link, she wondered for the first
- 15:21time how many things she had stopped her
- 15:23daughter from saying because she was
- 15:24afraid of how the world would answer.
- 15:27The radio in Anna's hand beeped three
- 15:29times, a high ugly tone. Both women went
- 15:32quiet. A recorded voice announced a
- 15:35flash flood warning for Lawrence County
- 15:37issued at 2:41, effective immediately
- 15:40for the Spearfish Canyon area.
- 15:42"That's what I told them." Anna
- 15:44whispered. Her hands shook. "That is
- 15:46what I said. It's real, Mom. It's on the
- 15:49radio now. It's real."
- 15:52Janet stared at the little black
- 15:54speaker. Then she opened the car door.
- 15:57"Get in."
- 15:58"Where are we going?" "To fix this."
- 16:01She turned the key. "You tell me what to
- 16:03do and I'll do it." As Janet drove, Anna
- 16:07dialed the number she had written inside
- 16:09the cover of her notebook two summers
- 16:11ago, the Lawrence County dispatch line.
- 16:14A woman answered, polite and brisk.
- 16:17"Ma'am, we're aware of the warning. We
- 16:19have crews staged. Thank you for
- 16:21calling."
- 16:23"There are motorcycles in the canyon."
- 16:25Anna said.
- 16:26"A lot of them."
- 16:27"They're going to stop at the second
- 16:29bridge pullout. They always stop there.
- 16:32The man with the gray beard in the vest
- 16:34says it every year. He says it is the
- 16:37best place for a picture. It is low. The
- 16:39water comes up fast there."
- 16:42"Mom, how do you know they'll stop
- 16:44there?" "Because I listen."
- 16:47Anna's voice cracked, but she kept
- 16:49going.
- 16:50"Please write it down. Second bridge, 15
- 16:53motorcycles, 3:00. My name is Anna
- 16:55Whitaker."
- 16:57There was a pause and the sound of
- 16:58typing.
- 16:59"I have it, Ms. Whitaker. I'm sending it
- 17:02to the deputy on the byway now."
- 17:04"Thank you." Anna said and hung up and
- 17:07let out a breath that shook her whole
- 17:09body. 23 miles away, the Iron Brothers
- 17:12had stretched into a long rumbling line
- 17:16through the pines of the Black Hills.
- 17:18The sky to the west was changing.
- 17:21At first, it was only a smudge, a
- 17:23thickening at the horizon, but by the
- 17:25time the group reached the mouth of the
- 17:27canyon at 10:00 to 3:00, it had turned
- 17:29the color of an old bruise. The air
- 17:32smelled like pennies and wet stone.
- 17:35The temperature dropped 10° in a mile.
- 17:38"Perfect riding weather," Carl shouted
- 17:40over the engines grinning. "Nice and
- 17:42cool."
- 17:44Douglas did not grin. He rode at the
- 17:46middle of the pack with his jaw tight
- 17:49and his eyes on the sky. And in his vest
- 17:51pocket, the folded square of paper
- 17:54pressed against his ribs like a hand.
- 17:56The canyon walls rose around them,
- 17:58limestone cliffs streaked with gold,
- 18:01pines crowding the edge of the road.
- 18:04Spearfish Creek ran alongside, clear and
- 18:06shallow and bright over its stones. It
- 18:09was one of the most beautiful roads in
- 18:11America, and Douglas had ridden it a
- 18:13dozen times. Today, the beauty felt like
- 18:17a held breath.
- 18:19At 5:05 Carl signaled and swung into the
- 18:22second bridge pullout, a wide gravel
- 18:25shelf just above the creek. The riders
- 18:27spilled off their bikes, stretching,
- 18:29laughing, pulling out phones. Carl lined
- 18:32them up along the rail for the annual
- 18:34photograph.
- 18:35Wind swept down the canyon and rattled
- 18:38the pines. A cold gust slapped Douglas's
- 18:41face. He looked at the creek and noticed
- 18:43something he could not explain. The
- 18:45water, which had been clear a mile back,
- 18:47had a faint brownish tint, like tea.
- 18:51"Doug, get in the picture."
- 18:53He didn't move. His hand had gone to his
- 18:55pocket on its own.
- 18:57He unfolded the note, and this time,
- 19:00with the wind pulling at the corners,
- 19:02he read the back.
- 19:04It was written in careful, crowded blue
- 19:06letters, with some words pressed so hard
- 19:09the marker had nearly torn the paper.
- 19:12Storm over Wyoming at 2:00. It comes to
- 19:15the canyon by 3:00.
- 19:17The creek gets brown first, then the
- 19:19water comes fast. The second bridge is
- 19:22low. I know because my daddy was a
- 19:24spotter and he taught me. I am not
- 19:27making it up. Please go home now. If the
- 19:29water is brown, call 911.
- 19:32Thank you.
- 19:33Anna Whitaker.
- 19:35Douglas read it twice. The words did not
- 19:38change.
- 19:39Then thunder rolled down the canyon long
- 19:41and low, and the first fat drops of rain
- 19:44struck the gravel like thrown coins.
- 19:47Carl!
- 19:48Douglas's voice cracked across the
- 19:50pullout. Carl, get everybody on their
- 19:52bikes. Now!
- 19:54Carl lowered his phone, annoyed. Doug,
- 19:57it's one photo.
- 19:59The creek's going brown.
- 20:01Douglas shoved the note into his
- 20:02friend's hand.
- 20:04She wrote it down. The girl in the
- 20:06diner. She said the second bridge. We're
- 20:08standing on it.
- 20:10Carl read the note.
- 20:12His smile slid off his face in stages.
- 20:15He read it again, and Douglas watched a
- 20:17man of 58 confront every dismissive
- 20:20thing he had said that morning.
- 20:23Then they both heard it.
- 20:24It began as a low rumble up the canyon
- 20:26so deep that Douglas felt it in his
- 20:29boots before his ears caught it, like a
- 20:31freight train a long way off.
- 20:33The pines began to shake.
- 20:36Brown water appeared around the upstream
- 20:38bend carrying branches and foam and a
- 20:41whole pale log that rolled over and over
- 20:44like a toy.
- 20:45Move!
- 20:47Carl roared, and his voice for the first
- 20:49time in 22 years held no joke.
- 20:53Everybody up! Leave the bikes! Climb!
- 20:56There was an old forest service road cut
- 20:58into the slope behind the pullout, a
- 21:01gravel switchback that climbed 40 ft
- 21:03above the creek. The Iron brothers
- 21:05scrambled for it, boots slipping, riders
- 21:08helping riders. The first brown wave hit
- 21:11the base of the pullout where the bikes
- 21:12were parked and rolled three Harleys
- 21:15onto their sides.
- 21:16Douglas counted heads as they climbed.
- 21:1911, 12, 13. Carl made 14. He counted
- 21:24again. 14. They had come with 15.
- 21:28"Where's Tyler?" he shouted. Nobody had
- 21:31seen him since the bridge. Douglas
- 21:33remembered now. Tyler had refused to
- 21:35stop for the photo and had cranked the
- 21:37throttle laughing saying he wanted to
- 21:39open it up on the curves. He was
- 21:42somewhere ahead on the low stretch of
- 21:44road beyond the pullout.
- 21:46Douglas ran.
- 21:48Carl shouted after him, but he was
- 21:50already sliding down the gravel, rain
- 21:52hammering his shoulders, the water
- 21:54boiling brown against the rail.
- 21:5750 yd past the bridge, the road dipped
- 22:00into a low spot where the creek had
- 22:01begun to flow across the pavement.
- 22:04And there, against the guardrail half in
- 22:07the current, lay Tyler Boone's bike, its
- 22:09back wheel still spinning.
- 22:12Tyler was pinned beneath it. His face
- 22:14was white. The water was already at his
- 22:17waist, tugging at him with a patient
- 22:19terrible strength.
- 22:21"Doug!" Tyler screamed. "My leg! I can't
- 22:23get my leg out!"
- 22:25"I'm here, kid. I'm here." Douglas
- 22:27dropped to his knees in the current. The
- 22:29cold shocked the breath out of him. He
- 22:32braced his shoulder under the frame and
- 22:33heaved and the bike did not move. Carl
- 22:36arrived beside him, then two others,
- 22:38then four. They grabbed the handlebars
- 22:41and the frame together.
- 22:43Someone counted. One.
- 22:45Two. Three.
- 22:48And they lifted as the water surged.
- 22:51The bike shifted 6 in and Tyler yanked
- 22:54his leg out with a scream. They dragged
- 22:57him up the bank between them, his boot
- 22:59gone, his shin bent wrong, his teeth
- 23:02chattering.
- 23:03"I'm sorry." Tyler gasped over and over,
- 23:07though nobody could tell whom he was
- 23:08apologizing to. "I'm sorry. I'm sorry."
- 23:12They hauled him up the forest service
- 23:14road and laid him under a pine while the
- 23:17creek swallowed the pullout behind them.
- 23:1911 motorcycles disappeared under the
- 23:22water within minutes.
- 23:24The roar of the flood filled the canyon
- 23:26like the inside of a drum. Douglas
- 23:29fumbled out his phone. One bar. He
- 23:31dialed 911 and it rang and rang and
- 23:34connected. "911, what is your
- 23:37emergency?" "I'm at the second bridge
- 23:40pullout on the Spearfish Canyon Byway.
- 23:42We've got a flash flood. 15 riders, one
- 23:46injured, a leg maybe broken. We're on
- 23:48the old forest service road above the
- 23:50water."
- 23:51"Sir, stay where you are. Is this the
- 23:54group of motorcycles from Sturgis?"
- 23:57Douglas blinked rain from his eyes.
- 23:59"How did you know that?" "We received a
- 24:01call about 40 minutes ago. A woman gave
- 24:04us your exact location, the pullout, the
- 24:07number of riders, the time. A deputy is
- 24:104 minutes out. Sir, stay on the line."
- 24:14He could not speak for a moment.
- 24:16"What was her name?"
- 24:18"Anna Whitaker."
- 24:19Douglas lowered the phone and looked at
- 24:22the brown water that had been a bright
- 24:24creek 20 minutes before.
- 24:26He thought of a yellow coat in a gravel
- 24:28lot and his own hand on her shoulder.
- 24:31"Sweetheart."
- 24:33He thought of her voice, patient and
- 24:35clear. "Please read it, Douglas, before
- 24:38you go."
- 24:39He had promised.
- 24:41At the mouth of the canyon, 11 miles
- 24:43away, Anna stood in the middle of the
- 24:45road in her yellow rain jacket with both
- 24:47arms raised.
- 24:49Janet's Subaru was parked crooked across
- 24:51the northbound lane with its hazard
- 24:53lights flashing. Thunder cracked above
- 24:56them and the rain came down in gray
- 24:57ropes.
- 24:59A line of motorcycles was backing up
- 25:01along the shoulder. 30 riders at least.
- 25:04Stragglers who had left the rally late
- 25:06and had no idea what waited upstream.
- 25:10Some of them honked. One man leaned on
- 25:12his horn and shouted something Anna
- 25:15could not hear.
- 25:16"Please." Anna called. "Please don't go.
- 25:19The canyon is flooding. The water is
- 25:21coming."
- 25:22A rider swerved around her. Close enough
- 25:25that she felt the wind of him.
- 25:27Another slowed, stared at her, and shook
- 25:30his head. And she watched the same
- 25:32expression she had seen all her life
- 25:34settle over his face. The one that said,
- 25:37"She doesn't know what she's talking
- 25:39about."
- 25:40Her knees trembled. Her glasses were so
- 25:43wet she could barely see. She almost
- 25:46stepped aside. Then a white pickup truck
- 25:48skidded to the curb and Walt Haines got
- 25:51out.
- 25:52He had followed them from the diner
- 25:54after Linda had put down her towel and
- 25:56told him, in a voice he had never heard
- 25:59from her,
- 26:00that if he did not go after that girl,
- 26:02he would answer for it the rest of his
- 26:04life.
- 26:05He crossed the road with rain streaming
- 26:08off his vest, heavy and breathless.
- 26:11He did not take Anna by the elbow.
- 26:13He stood beside her instead and raised
- 26:15his reflective arms over his head.
- 26:18"Folks, listen up." Walt bellowed in the
- 26:21voice he used on rowdy crowds.
- 26:24"There is a flash flood in that canyon.
- 26:26Turn around. This young lady has been
- 26:28warning you since noon and she was
- 26:30right."
- 26:32Some of the riders hesitated. A few
- 26:34killed their engines.
- 26:36"Tell them, Anna." Walt said quietly.
- 26:39"Tell them what you told me."
- 26:41Anna took a shaky breath and she told
- 26:44them the dew point, the cloud over
- 26:46Wyoming, the creek turning brown, the
- 26:49way the water arrives all at once.
- 26:52She spoke slowly, setting each word down
- 26:55carefully, and this time, in the cold
- 26:58rain, with an old man beside her, they
- 27:00listened.
- 27:01One by one the engines shut off. One by
- 27:04one the riders turned their bikes. The
- 27:07first deputy's radio crackled from
- 27:09somewhere up the road. Anna heard it
- 27:11faintly through the storm. All riders at
- 27:14the second bridge accounted for. One
- 27:17injured, non-critical. Repeat, all
- 27:20accounted for.
- 27:21She sat down on the wet curb in her
- 27:23yellow coat and cried until her
- 27:25shoulders shook. Janet knelt beside her
- 27:28and held her, rain soaking through both
- 27:30of them, and neither of them said a
- 27:32word.
- 27:33The emergency room at Spearfish Regional
- 27:36Hospital smelled of floor wax and wet
- 27:38denim.
- 27:40By 6:00 that evening, the waiting area
- 27:42had filled with leather vests, dripping
- 27:45hair, and the particular silence of
- 27:47people who have come very close to
- 27:49something and are only now beginning to
- 27:51feel it. Tyler Boone lay behind a
- 27:54curtain with a splint on his shin and a
- 27:56bandage on his collarbone.
- 27:59The doctor said the leg was broken in
- 28:01two places, clean breaks, the kind that
- 28:04heal. Another 5 minutes in that water,
- 28:07he said, and it would have been a very
- 28:09different conversation.
- 28:11Tyler stared at the ceiling tiles for a
- 28:13long time after that.
- 28:15When Douglas came in, the younger man
- 28:17did not make a joke. He did not try to.
- 28:21"I laughed at her," Tyler said. His
- 28:23voice was hoarse.
- 28:25"I told her to take a ride around the
- 28:27block. She was trying to save my life
- 28:30and I laughed at her."
- 28:31"Yeah," Douglas said.
- 28:34"So did I. Not with my mouth, with the
- 28:36way I talked to her."
- 28:38Tyler turned his face toward the wall.
- 28:41"What do I do?"
- 28:43"You say it to her," Douglas said, "and
- 28:46then you keep showing it. That's the
- 28:48only apology that counts."
- 28:50In the corridor, Carl Ridgeway sat with
- 28:53his elbows on his knees and his big
- 28:56hands hanging between them. He had
- 28:58called every one of the 14 Iron Brothers
- 29:01wives and girlfriends and mothers. He
- 29:03had told each of them the same thing.
- 29:05Everyone was safe. He had not told them
- 29:08why. When Douglas sat beside him, Carl
- 29:11did not look up.
- 29:13"My app said clear." Carl said, "All
- 29:16day, 0%. I had the whole sky in my
- 29:19pocket and I trusted it over a woman
- 29:21standing right in front of me telling me
- 29:23what she could see."
- 29:25"Because she looked different." Douglas
- 29:28said quietly, "And talked different. And
- 29:30we decided that meant she didn't know
- 29:32anything."
- 29:33"30 years I've been president of that
- 29:35club. I've given speeches about
- 29:37brotherhood."
- 29:38Carl rubbed his face. "We don't get to
- 29:41say that word until we can say it about
- 29:43everybody."
- 29:45The automatic doors hissed open at a
- 29:47quarter past six. Janet Odum came
- 29:50through first, her library badge still
- 29:52clipped to her blouse, her gray streak
- 29:54dark with rain.
- 29:56Behind her walked Anna, still in the
- 29:58yellow jacket, still carrying the little
- 30:00black radio, with Walt Haynes and Linda
- 30:02Pruitt a step behind like two people who
- 30:05did not know whether they were allowed
- 30:06to be there.
- 30:08The room went quiet.
- 30:0914 bikers rose to their feet. Nobody had
- 30:12asked them to. Douglas crossed the
- 30:14waiting room slowly. He felt the weight
- 30:16of every step. In his hand he held the
- 30:19folded note, soaked and creased. Its
- 30:22blue marker bled at the edges, but still
- 30:25legible. He stopped in front of her.
- 30:28"Anna." She looked up at him. Her
- 30:30glasses were fogged. "Is Tyler okay?"
- 30:34"He's going to be fine because of you."
- 30:37Douglas swallowed.
- 30:39"I owe you an apology, and it's a big
- 30:42one.
- 30:43This morning, I read the front of your
- 30:45note and called you sweetheart. I patted
- 30:47you on the shoulder like you were a kid.
- 30:50You asked me to read the back, and I
- 30:52promised I would, and I didn't. Not
- 30:54until the water was already coming.
- 30:57Anna turned the radio over in her hands.
- 31:00"A lot of people read the front," she
- 31:02said. The words were not angry. That was
- 31:05what made them land so hard. She said
- 31:08them the way someone states the weather,
- 31:10a fact she had measured a hundred times.
- 31:13"People read the front of me, too," she
- 31:16continued. "They see Down syndrome. They
- 31:18see a girl in a yellow coat. They don't
- 31:21read the back."
- 31:23She looked up.
- 31:24"It's okay.
- 31:26I am used to it.
- 31:27But I wanted you to read the back,
- 31:29Douglas.
- 31:30That's all I wanted.
- 31:32I did not want to be right.
- 31:34I wanted you to be safe." Douglas's eyes
- 31:38burned. He held out the note.
- 31:40She took it, smoothed it flat against
- 31:43her knee, and tucked it into her
- 31:45notebook beside the others.
- 31:47"You gave me a gift," he said.
- 31:49"I didn't know how to open it."
- 31:52Then Carl Ridgway did something nobody
- 31:54in the room expected.
- 31:56He stepped forward, took off his Iron
- 31:58Brothers cap, and held it against his
- 32:00chest.
- 32:01"Miss Whittaker," he said in that gravel
- 32:03truck voice, "I want to say something in
- 32:05front of everybody. I laughed at you
- 32:07today. I let my men laugh at you. I told
- 32:10them a phone app knew more than you did.
- 32:12I was wrong, and I am sorry."
- 32:15One by one, the others said it, too.
- 32:17Tyler said it from his gurney when they
- 32:19wheeled him out, his voice breaking.
- 32:21Walt Haynes said it standing awkwardly
- 32:23in his wet uniform, turning his hat
- 32:26around and around in his hands. "Thirty
- 32:28years I've told folks to stay out of the
- 32:30way. I never once asked you why you were
- 32:33standing there. I'm sorry, Anna."
- 32:35Linda did not say anything at all.
- 32:37She wrapped her arms around Anna, and
- 32:39the two of them stood together in the
- 32:41middle of the waiting room while Linda's
- 32:42shoulders shook.
- 32:44Janet watched, and her own face was wet.
- 32:47For 29 years, she had braced for the day
- 32:50the world would be cruel to her
- 32:52daughter. She had not prepared for the
- 32:54day it would be sorry.
- 32:56It turned out to be harder to take and
- 32:58far more beautiful.
- 33:00The next morning, the rally lot behind
- 33:02Linda's diner looked the way it always
- 33:04did, gravel and chrome and sunlight.
- 33:08But when Anna came across it with her
- 33:09mother, the riders stopped what they
- 33:11were doing, dozens of them.
- 33:14Bikers who had never heard her name the
- 33:15day before stood in a long loose line
- 33:18along the fence, helmets in their hands.
- 33:21Carl met her at the dumpsters where she
- 33:23always stood. He had a small paper bag.
- 33:27"The Iron Brothers voted last night," he
- 33:29said, "unanimous. It's not much, but"
- 33:33He handed her the bag. Inside was a
- 33:35leather patch stitched in yellow thread
- 33:38on black, Skywatch,
- 33:40Anna Whitaker.
- 33:42"You're not a member, not officially.
- 33:44We'd have to change the bylaws.
- 33:47But we'd like it if you'd ride with us
- 33:49someday, as long as you promise not to
- 33:51tell me what the weather's doing."
- 33:53Anna laughed, a real laugh, high and
- 33:56startled. "I will always tell you."
- 34:00"I know you will," Carl said. "That's
- 34:03why we're giving you the patch."
- 34:05Janet signed Anna up for the National
- 34:07Weather Service Spotter class in Rapid
- 34:09City that fall.
- 34:11Anna passed with the highest score in
- 34:14the room.
- 34:15Her instructor, a retired meteorologist
- 34:18with a clipped white beard, held up her
- 34:20notebook in front of 30 students and
- 34:22said,
- 34:24"This is what disciplined observation
- 34:26looks like."
- 34:27She received her Spotter ID in the mail
- 34:30in November.
- 34:31She taped it above her bed next to a
- 34:33photograph of her father squinting up at
- 34:36a thundercloud with a clipboard in his
- 34:38hand. The county dispatcher, who had
- 34:41taken her call that afternoon, a woman
- 34:43named Dorothy Pike, sent a short letter
- 34:46to the Lawrence County Courier.
- 34:49It was printed in full. "Many callers
- 34:52that day gave us noise," she wrote. "One
- 34:55caller gave us coordinates, a time, and
- 34:57a count. I have worked dispatch for 19
- 35:00years, and I have never received a
- 35:02better report. I would like to know why
- 35:05it took a flood for the rest of us to
- 35:06listen."
- 35:08By the following August, Anna had a
- 35:10folding table in the lot behind Linda's
- 35:12Diner.
- 35:13Walt Haynes had set it up himself,
- 35:16grumbling, and then spent 20 minutes
- 35:18adjusting the umbrella over it.
- 35:20A hand-painted sign hung from the front,
- 35:23"Anna's Sky Report, free. Ask me before
- 35:26you ride."
- 35:28A line of riders formed every morning,
- 35:30men and women in vests and chaps,
- 35:32waiting their turn to hear her read the
- 35:34day.
- 35:35She still left notes on windshields.
- 35:38Now they said, "Have a safe ride" on the
- 35:41front and on the back, in careful blue
- 35:43letters, the day's forecast, the creek
- 35:45levels, and the hours to watch the sky.
- 35:48Riders tucked them into their vests like
- 35:50charms. Nobody threw one away.
- 35:53On the first morning of the rally,
- 35:55Douglas Hollis rolled his Road King into
- 35:57the lot, killed the engine, and found a
- 36:00small white square tucked under his
- 36:03wiper.
- 36:04He stood there a moment with it in his
- 36:06hand, a 53-year-old man with an eagle on
- 36:09his forearm and a daughter coming up
- 36:11from Denver to meet the girl he talked
- 36:13about on Sunday calls.
- 36:16This time, before he did anything else,
- 36:18he turned it over and read the back. It
- 36:21said, "Clear until 4:00.
- 36:24Storm west of the hills by supper.
- 36:27Ride safe, Douglas. You can stay. He
- 36:30laughed, wiped his eyes with his thumb,
- 36:32and crossed the gravel to the folding
- 36:34table to say good morning to his friend.
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