"Stick to Beginner Lanes, Honey," My Ex Laughed at the Range. One Arrow Later, the Range Master W... — Transcript
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- 0:00"Sweetie, maybe start with the youth
- 0:02archery lane." My ex-fiancé said, loud
- 0:04and easy, like he was doing me a favor
- 0:06in front of everyone watching. "That
- 0:08compound bow is going to knock you flat
- 0:10on your back."
- 0:11I didn't answer. I didn't even look at
- 0:14him. I rolled my left shoulder once to
- 0:16settle my draw elbow, anchored my
- 0:18release hand to my jaw, picked a spot on
- 0:20the distant target the size of a dime,
- 0:22and let the arrow go.
- 0:24The thwack of carbon hitting the 12-ring
- 0:26at 70 yards landed a full second before
- 0:28the silence did. Every head on the
- 0:30outdoor archery range at Ridgecrest
- 0:32Sporting Club turned. Behind me, the
- 0:35chief range officer set down his
- 0:36clipboard, slowly like a man trying not
- 0:39to startle a deer. He looked at my form,
- 0:41looked at my ex, and said very quietly,
- 0:44"Dylan's son, do you know who that is?
- 0:45That's Ghost."
- 0:47My name is Anwyn Price. 20 months ago, I
- 0:49was just a woman with an unspoken
- 0:51apology she never got, and a modest
- 0:53diamond she gave back without a scene.
- 0:55Today, I serve as a freelance
- 0:57biomechanics consultant for a mid-size
- 0:59sporting goods manufacturer in Raleigh,
- 1:01where I spend most of my weeks analyzing
- 1:04arrow flight dynamics and limb stress
- 1:05tolerances on prototype recurves.
- 1:08Weekends I keep to myself. I have a
- 1:10small house, a vegetable garden, and a
- 1:12cat named Hendrix who judges me for
- 1:14nothing.
- 1:15I did not plan to spend that particular
- 1:17Saturday running into Dylan Hurst.
- 1:20Dylan was 34, broad-shouldered, and ran
- 1:23a moderately successful commercial
- 1:25landscaping company out of Wilmington
- 1:27that he described at dinner parties as a
- 1:29real estate adjacent enterprise because
- 1:32he hated the word lawn. He had a talent
- 1:34for positioning himself at the center of
- 1:36whatever room he was in, and he'd spent
- 1:38the 3 years we were together quietly
- 1:40repositioning me to the edges of it. I
- 1:43told myself it was ambition.
- 1:45Turned out it was just insecurity
- 1:47wearing a very convincing blazer.
- 1:49The charity shoot at Ridgecrest was
- 1:51organized by the county veterans
- 1:53outreach coalition. My colleague Bren
- 1:55had signed us both up 6 weeks prior. I
- 1:58drove out that morning not expecting
- 2:00much beyond an easy outdoor morning.
- 2:02Maybe some networking with sporting
- 2:04goods buyers and a paper bag of pulled
- 2:06pork at the lunch pavilion afterward. I
- 2:09showed up in my usual weekend clothes,
- 2:11dark jeans, a worn trail running jacket,
- 2:14and the battered green range bag I've
- 2:15had since I was 22.
- 2:17Dylan was already there when I arrived,
- 2:19standing at the far end of the covered
- 2:21pavilion in a brand new performance vest
- 2:25that still had the crease lines from the
- 2:26packaging. He had three men with him,
- 2:29all in pressed casual wear, all holding
- 2:31coffees, all nodding at whatever Dylan
- 2:33was saying with the polite synchronized
- 2:35energy of people who want something from
- 2:37him. I recognized the posture. I used to
- 2:40stand in that cluster, nodding along.
- 2:43He spotted me at the sign-in table.
- 2:45I watched his expression do that thing
- 2:47it used to do. A split second of
- 2:49something genuine, immediately covered
- 2:51over by the performed version of
- 2:53himself.
- 2:54He crossed the grass toward me before I
- 2:56could finish signing the liability
- 2:58waiver.
- 2:59"Anwin," he said with a warmth that was
- 3:01entirely for the audience behind him. "I
- 3:04didn't know you were into archery.
- 3:05That's cute."
- 3:07He glanced at my range bag, then at the
- 3:09sign-in sheet, then back at me. "You
- 3:11know this isn't a recreational day,
- 3:13right? This is the competitive bracket,
- 3:15the advanced civilian lane, seven-stage
- 3:17course of fire, mixed distances, timed
- 3:19rounds. You might want to ask one of the
- 3:21staffers to move you to the beginner
- 3:23walk-up course over by the picnic area.
- 3:26Probably safer."
- 3:28He said it with a smile that had exactly
- 3:30enough gentleness in it to be publicly
- 3:32undeniable.
- 3:33I picked up my pen. "Thanks for the
- 3:35heads-up, Dylan."
- 3:37I finished signing and walked to the
- 3:39equipment check station.
- 3:41Here is the thing that Dylan never
- 3:42learned about me,
- 3:44partly because he never actually
- 3:45listened when I talked about my work,
- 3:48and partly because I eventually stopped
- 3:50trying to explain it to him. From the
- 3:52age of 16 until I was 26, I trained as a
- 3:56competitive field archer under a
- 3:57regional coaching program in Virginia. I
- 4:00earned my first national ranking at 19.
- 4:02By the time I left active competition to
- 4:05pursue graduate work in biomechanics, I
- 4:07had placed top three at three
- 4:09consecutive national field championships
- 4:11and held a still standing facility
- 4:13record at the Quantico indoor range. The
- 4:16sporting goods consultancy hired me
- 4:18specifically because of that background.
- 4:20When they needed someone who could tell
- 4:22you exactly why a draw stops clean or
- 4:24goes sideways in the final inch of
- 4:26travel, they called me.
- 4:28In our relationship, I mentioned this
- 4:30history exactly twice. The first time,
- 4:33Dylan changed the subject to a project
- 4:35he was bidding on in Brunswick County.
- 4:37The second time he laughed and said,
- 4:40"You're telling me you used to be one of
- 4:41those serious bow people? That's kind of
- 4:44adorable." I stopped bringing it up
- 4:46after that.
- 4:47Now I unzipped my range bag at the
- 4:49equipment station and lifted out my
- 4:51recurve. A clean, minimal, no-frills
- 4:5348-lb competition draw that I had been
- 4:55shooting since I was 22. No sights, no
- 4:58stabilizers, no accessories beyond a
- 5:00basic arrow rest and a finger tab. The
- 5:03equipment volunteer, a young man with a
- 5:05lanyard and a volunteer badge that read
- 5:07Colt, looked at it for a moment.
- 5:10"Barebow class?" he asked.
- 5:12"Barebow class," I confirmed.
- 5:14Across the pavilion, I could see Dylan
- 5:17describing something to his investors
- 5:18with expansive hand gestures. He had a
- 5:21fistful of loaner arrows and hadn't yet
- 5:23figured out how the knocking point on
- 5:25his borrowed sight bow worked.
- 5:28The morning progressed through four
- 5:29stages without incident. I shot clean,
- 5:32moved quickly between stations, and
- 5:34didn't draw any particular attention to
- 5:36myself. At the fifth station, a kneeling
- 5:39shot across a 55-yd clearing to a
- 5:41full-size 3D elk target, I heard Dylan's
- 5:44voice cut across the line from three
- 5:45shooters over.
- 5:47"Can I see your scorecard?" he was
- 5:49saying to the volunteer scorekeeper in
- 5:51that firm. Just checking on things tone
- 5:54he used when he wanted to appear
- 5:55authoritative without being openly rude.
- 5:58"I want to make sure the scoring
- 5:59brackets are separated out. The barebow
- 6:02group really shouldn't be scored against
- 6:03the sight equipped class.
- 6:05It's not a fair comparison."
- 6:08The scorekeeper, a patient older woman
- 6:10with reading glasses on a beaded chain,
- 6:12told him patiently that the field
- 6:14scoring categories were entirely
- 6:16separate and always had been.
- 6:18"Right, right." Dylan said. He looked up
- 6:21and saw me kneeling into position.
- 6:22Something shifted in his expression. The
- 6:24calculation kind of shift, not the
- 6:26feeling kind. "Hey, Anwen." he called
- 6:28across the safety tape. "Shooting
- 6:30barebow must be rough on us at 60-yard
- 6:32shot. No rangefinder, no pins. How do
- 6:35you even judge the distance?"
- 6:37He said it lightly. His investors
- 6:39watched, a few other shooters glanced
- 6:41over.
- 6:42I looked at the 3D elk. I found the spot
- 6:45on its near shoulder where the 10 ring
- 6:46sits tucked just behind the front leg. I
- 6:49picked a point of reference in the grass
- 6:51at 40 ft, used it to stack my gap,
- 6:53settled my breathing, and released.
- 6:56The arrow drove into the 11 ring, the
- 6:58tight gold center, a quarter inch left
- 7:00of the spine.
- 7:02Dylan didn't say anything after that,
- 7:04not immediately.
- 7:05We broke for lunch at a long wooden
- 7:07table under a canvas fly. The investors,
- 7:10I later learned one of them was a
- 7:12regional finance manager named Oliver
- 7:14Cross, the other two were builders from
- 7:16the Triad area, had positioned
- 7:18themselves around Dylan with the studied
- 7:20casualness of men evaluating a deal.
- 7:22Dylan was halfway through a story about
- 7:24a successful commercial rezoning project
- 7:26when Oliver Cross looked across the
- 7:28table at me with genuine curiosity.
- 7:32"You've been putting up clean cards all
- 7:33morning." Cross said. "You shoot
- 7:36competitively?"
- 7:37"I used to." I told him. "Mostly field
- 7:39and 3D. I work in equipment research
- 7:41now."
- 7:42Dylan set down his fork. She means she
- 7:45tests crossbow tensioners at a mid-size
- 7:47manufacturer, he said, with a light
- 7:49corrective smile directed mostly at
- 7:51Cross. It's a boutique company, nice
- 7:53little niche.
- 7:54I let it sit for a second.
- 7:57We designed the draw mechanics for three
- 7:59of the top five field recurves in last
- 8:01year's national championship lineup, I
- 8:03said, without any particular emphasis.
- 8:06One of our engineers holds the current
- 8:0870-m world record for compound barebow.
- 8:11Oliver Cross raised his eyebrows.
- 8:14Dylan laughed quickly. "Anwyn's modest
- 8:16about the scale."
- 8:17"She doesn't sound modest," Cross said,
- 8:20looking back at his lunch.
- 8:22After the break, we moved to the seventh
- 8:24and final stage, the showcase station,
- 8:26which the event organizers had set up as
- 8:29an optional challenge round. It was the
- 8:31one that drew a small crowd of
- 8:32spectators, a 90-yd unmarked distance
- 8:35shot to a narrow vertical target, a
- 8:38painted wooden silhouette of a running
- 8:40deer cut to 10 in wide, partially
- 8:42obscured behind a brush wall at an angle
- 8:45that required threading the arrow
- 8:46through a 6-in window in the natural
- 8:48cover. No rangefinder permitted, no
- 8:50coaching from the line. One arrow per
- 8:52archer.
- 8:54Most shooters passed on it. The
- 8:55volunteer coordinator announced
- 8:57cheerfully that it was purely for fun,
- 8:59no score implications, just for bragging
- 9:02rights and a small donation to the
- 9:04Veterans Coalition from any archer who
- 9:06hit clean.
- 9:07Dylan had been quiet for most of the
- 9:09walk between stations. I could see him
- 9:11working on something internally.
- 9:14He stepped up to me while I was chalking
- 9:15my fingers at the tab station.
- 9:18"You know what?" he said, with the
- 9:20practiced easy tone he used for things
- 9:22he had decided in advance. "Why don't we
- 9:24make it interesting? You hit that
- 9:26silhouette clean, I'll write a personal
- 9:28check for $5,000 to the Coalition right
- 9:31here."
- 9:32He pulled his checkbook from his vest
- 9:34pocket, already holding his pen, already
- 9:36making it a performance for Cross and
- 9:38the other two behind him. But if you
- 9:40miss, you acknowledge to everyone here
- 9:43that you've been running up the score on
- 9:44borrowed luck today. That barebow class
- 9:47doesn't belongs in the same bracket as
- 9:49the rest of the field.
- 9:51The coordinator looked uncomfortable. A
- 9:53few observers shuffled.
- 9:55I looked at the target through the
- 9:57brush. 90 yd, partial concealment. The
- 10:00arrow had to enter at a 12° angle to
- 10:02clear the blind. The wind was coming
- 10:04light and consistent from the northwest,
- 10:07maybe 6 mph, which in barebow field
- 10:10shooting you account for entirely by
- 10:12feel and hold.
- 10:13I looked back at Dylan.
- 10:15"Make it $7,500," I said, "and you
- 10:18donate it regardless of outcome."
- 10:20Dylan blinked. Cross made a small sound
- 10:23that might have been a laugh.
- 10:24"That's not how a bet works," Dylan
- 10:26said.
- 10:27"Then it's not a bet," I said. "It's a
- 10:29challenge. If I miss, you still donate
- 10:32because the coalition exists whether I
- 10:34embarrass myself or not. If I hit, you
- 10:36donate because you made a public offer
- 10:38at a charity event and a man like you
- 10:40follows through on public offers."
- 10:42Oliver Cross looked at Dylan with a
- 10:44specific expression of a man who is
- 10:46watching an investment thesis fall
- 10:48apart.
- 10:49Dylan's jaw set. "7,500."
- 10:52I stepped up to the shooting line. The
- 10:54range went quiet the way it does when
- 10:56something real is about to happen.
- 10:59I found the window in the brush. I
- 11:01picked the center line of the wooden
- 11:02silhouette, a narrow painted rib line at
- 11:0590 yd. I estimated the drop. The wind
- 11:08held steady. I picked my gap reference
- 11:10off the grass at 30 yd, stacked it, held
- 11:12a hair into the breeze. I exhaled
- 11:15halfway and released at the bottom of
- 11:16the breath.
- 11:18The arrow traveled 92 yd in just over
- 11:20half a second.
- 11:22It passed through the brush window
- 11:23without touching a leaf, drove through
- 11:25the painted center of the silhouette's
- 11:2710 ring.
- 11:28And the wooden panel shattered with the
- 11:30impact.
- 11:31The chief range officer, a retired
- 11:34master sergeant named Kowalski, who had
- 11:36the flat eyes of a man who had seen
- 11:37everything and was impressed by almost
- 11:39nothing, lowered his binoculars very
- 11:42slowly. He said nothing for three full
- 11:44seconds. Then he turned around and
- 11:46looked at Dylan.
- 11:47"Son," Kowalski said, "that's a clean
- 11:50center hit, and that archer just cleared
- 11:52a partial obstruction shot at unmarked
- 11:5490 yards with no assists on a single
- 11:57arrow barebow. You want to tell me about
- 11:59borrowed luck again?"
- 12:00Dylan's mouth was a straight line. His
- 12:03investors were not looking at him.
- 12:05Oliver Cross stepped around Dylan and
- 12:07extended a hand to me.
- 12:09"Ms. Price, I have to ask, have you ever
- 12:11done any clinics or professional
- 12:13instruction? We're putting together a
- 12:15youth development initiative through our
- 12:17regional outdoors grant. Two dozen young
- 12:20women between 12 and 17. We've been
- 12:22looking for someone to run the technical
- 12:24side of a six-week marksmanship camp."
- 12:27I shook his hand. "Send me the program
- 12:30outline. I'm glad to look at it."
- 12:32Cross pulled out a card. Dylan took one
- 12:34small stiff step toward us.
- 12:36"The 7,500," he said quietly, "checkbook
- 12:39open." His hand was not entirely steady.
- 12:42Kowalski stepped between us and took the
- 12:44check directly. He looked at it, folded
- 12:46it once, and tucked it into his vest
- 12:48pocket. "This goes to camp equipment for
- 12:50the youth program," he said. "I'll make
- 12:53sure Oliver has the tax receipt by end
- 12:55of month." He looked at Dylan with a
- 12:57complete absence of warmth. "You're
- 12:59welcome to watch the closing ceremony
- 13:01from the spectator's area.
- 13:03Equipment return is at the far pavilion,
- 13:05and I'd appreciate you clearing the
- 13:07active range line."
- 13:09It wasn't a request.
- 13:11Dylan looked at me one last time. I
- 13:13don't know what he expected to see.
- 13:15Anger, maybe, or satisfaction, or some
- 13:17version of the woman who used to quietly
- 13:19absorb his recasting of her into
- 13:21something smaller and more convenient.
- 13:23He didn't find any of it. I was just
- 13:25standing in the grass with my range bag
- 13:27on my shoulder talking to Oliver Cross
- 13:30about program logistics completely
- 13:32finished. He walked away across the
- 13:34field toward the parking lot. I watched
- 13:37him go for exactly 1 second before
- 13:39turning back to the conversation. I
- 13:41broke down my recurve at the equipment
- 13:43station afterward with the same
- 13:45methodical attention I bring to
- 13:46everything. Unstring, limb check, wipe
- 13:49the riser, pack it even and clean.
- 13:52Kowalski came over while I was rolling
- 13:53my spare tabs into the side pocket. "You
- 13:56still training?" he asked. "Here and
- 13:59there." I said. "Mostly I teach form
- 14:01clinics out of a club in Cary on
- 14:03alternate Sundays."
- 14:04He nodded deliberate and approving.
- 14:07"Good." he said. "Skills like that
- 14:09belong somewhere they can do something."
- 14:11The drive home was quiet and easy. I had
- 14:14the windows down. The road through the
- 14:16Piedmont was all open fields and late
- 14:18afternoon light and the smell of turned
- 14:20soil from the farms off the highway.
- 14:23I have thought about that afternoon
- 14:24exactly once since it happened and only
- 14:27because Oliver Cross followed up 3 days
- 14:29later with a program outline for the
- 14:31youth camp. We ran the first session in
- 14:33August. 12 girls ages 12 to 16. A
- 14:37Tuesday evening clinic on breathing,
- 14:39anchor, and release. By the end of the
- 14:41first hour, two of them were putting
- 14:43arrows consistently inside the eight
- 14:45ring at 30 m.
- 14:47That is what I thought about on the
- 14:48drive home. Not Dylan's face. Not the
- 14:51check. Not the exact angle of Kowalski's
- 14:54expression. When he said son like it
- 14:56meant something permanent. Just the
- 14:58girls learning to be still and the clean
- 15:00sound of an arrow finding exactly where
- 15:03it was supposed to go.
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