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  1. 0:00"Sweetie, maybe start with the youth
  2. 0:02archery lane." My ex-fiancé said, loud
  3. 0:04and easy, like he was doing me a favor
  4. 0:06in front of everyone watching. "That
  5. 0:08compound bow is going to knock you flat
  6. 0:10on your back."
  7. 0:11I didn't answer. I didn't even look at
  8. 0:14him. I rolled my left shoulder once to
  9. 0:16settle my draw elbow, anchored my
  10. 0:18release hand to my jaw, picked a spot on
  11. 0:20the distant target the size of a dime,
  12. 0:22and let the arrow go.
  13. 0:24The thwack of carbon hitting the 12-ring
  14. 0:26at 70 yards landed a full second before
  15. 0:28the silence did. Every head on the
  16. 0:30outdoor archery range at Ridgecrest
  17. 0:32Sporting Club turned. Behind me, the
  18. 0:35chief range officer set down his
  19. 0:36clipboard, slowly like a man trying not
  20. 0:39to startle a deer. He looked at my form,
  21. 0:41looked at my ex, and said very quietly,
  22. 0:44"Dylan's son, do you know who that is?
  23. 0:45That's Ghost."
  24. 0:47My name is Anwyn Price. 20 months ago, I
  25. 0:49was just a woman with an unspoken
  26. 0:51apology she never got, and a modest
  27. 0:53diamond she gave back without a scene.
  28. 0:55Today, I serve as a freelance
  29. 0:57biomechanics consultant for a mid-size
  30. 0:59sporting goods manufacturer in Raleigh,
  31. 1:01where I spend most of my weeks analyzing
  32. 1:04arrow flight dynamics and limb stress
  33. 1:05tolerances on prototype recurves.
  34. 1:08Weekends I keep to myself. I have a
  35. 1:10small house, a vegetable garden, and a
  36. 1:12cat named Hendrix who judges me for
  37. 1:14nothing.
  38. 1:15I did not plan to spend that particular
  39. 1:17Saturday running into Dylan Hurst.
  40. 1:20Dylan was 34, broad-shouldered, and ran
  41. 1:23a moderately successful commercial
  42. 1:25landscaping company out of Wilmington
  43. 1:27that he described at dinner parties as a
  44. 1:29real estate adjacent enterprise because
  45. 1:32he hated the word lawn. He had a talent
  46. 1:34for positioning himself at the center of
  47. 1:36whatever room he was in, and he'd spent
  48. 1:38the 3 years we were together quietly
  49. 1:40repositioning me to the edges of it. I
  50. 1:43told myself it was ambition.
  51. 1:45Turned out it was just insecurity
  52. 1:47wearing a very convincing blazer.
  53. 1:49The charity shoot at Ridgecrest was
  54. 1:51organized by the county veterans
  55. 1:53outreach coalition. My colleague Bren
  56. 1:55had signed us both up 6 weeks prior. I
  57. 1:58drove out that morning not expecting
  58. 2:00much beyond an easy outdoor morning.
  59. 2:02Maybe some networking with sporting
  60. 2:04goods buyers and a paper bag of pulled
  61. 2:06pork at the lunch pavilion afterward. I
  62. 2:09showed up in my usual weekend clothes,
  63. 2:11dark jeans, a worn trail running jacket,
  64. 2:14and the battered green range bag I've
  65. 2:15had since I was 22.
  66. 2:17Dylan was already there when I arrived,
  67. 2:19standing at the far end of the covered
  68. 2:21pavilion in a brand new performance vest
  69. 2:25that still had the crease lines from the
  70. 2:26packaging. He had three men with him,
  71. 2:29all in pressed casual wear, all holding
  72. 2:31coffees, all nodding at whatever Dylan
  73. 2:33was saying with the polite synchronized
  74. 2:35energy of people who want something from
  75. 2:37him. I recognized the posture. I used to
  76. 2:40stand in that cluster, nodding along.
  77. 2:43He spotted me at the sign-in table.
  78. 2:45I watched his expression do that thing
  79. 2:47it used to do. A split second of
  80. 2:49something genuine, immediately covered
  81. 2:51over by the performed version of
  82. 2:53himself.
  83. 2:54He crossed the grass toward me before I
  84. 2:56could finish signing the liability
  85. 2:58waiver.
  86. 2:59"Anwin," he said with a warmth that was
  87. 3:01entirely for the audience behind him. "I
  88. 3:04didn't know you were into archery.
  89. 3:05That's cute."
  90. 3:07He glanced at my range bag, then at the
  91. 3:09sign-in sheet, then back at me. "You
  92. 3:11know this isn't a recreational day,
  93. 3:13right? This is the competitive bracket,
  94. 3:15the advanced civilian lane, seven-stage
  95. 3:17course of fire, mixed distances, timed
  96. 3:19rounds. You might want to ask one of the
  97. 3:21staffers to move you to the beginner
  98. 3:23walk-up course over by the picnic area.
  99. 3:26Probably safer."
  100. 3:28He said it with a smile that had exactly
  101. 3:30enough gentleness in it to be publicly
  102. 3:32undeniable.
  103. 3:33I picked up my pen. "Thanks for the
  104. 3:35heads-up, Dylan."
  105. 3:37I finished signing and walked to the
  106. 3:39equipment check station.
  107. 3:41Here is the thing that Dylan never
  108. 3:42learned about me,
  109. 3:44partly because he never actually
  110. 3:45listened when I talked about my work,
  111. 3:48and partly because I eventually stopped
  112. 3:50trying to explain it to him. From the
  113. 3:52age of 16 until I was 26, I trained as a
  114. 3:56competitive field archer under a
  115. 3:57regional coaching program in Virginia. I
  116. 4:00earned my first national ranking at 19.
  117. 4:02By the time I left active competition to
  118. 4:05pursue graduate work in biomechanics, I
  119. 4:07had placed top three at three
  120. 4:09consecutive national field championships
  121. 4:11and held a still standing facility
  122. 4:13record at the Quantico indoor range. The
  123. 4:16sporting goods consultancy hired me
  124. 4:18specifically because of that background.
  125. 4:20When they needed someone who could tell
  126. 4:22you exactly why a draw stops clean or
  127. 4:24goes sideways in the final inch of
  128. 4:26travel, they called me.
  129. 4:28In our relationship, I mentioned this
  130. 4:30history exactly twice. The first time,
  131. 4:33Dylan changed the subject to a project
  132. 4:35he was bidding on in Brunswick County.
  133. 4:37The second time he laughed and said,
  134. 4:40"You're telling me you used to be one of
  135. 4:41those serious bow people? That's kind of
  136. 4:44adorable." I stopped bringing it up
  137. 4:46after that.
  138. 4:47Now I unzipped my range bag at the
  139. 4:49equipment station and lifted out my
  140. 4:51recurve. A clean, minimal, no-frills
  141. 4:5348-lb competition draw that I had been
  142. 4:55shooting since I was 22. No sights, no
  143. 4:58stabilizers, no accessories beyond a
  144. 5:00basic arrow rest and a finger tab. The
  145. 5:03equipment volunteer, a young man with a
  146. 5:05lanyard and a volunteer badge that read
  147. 5:07Colt, looked at it for a moment.
  148. 5:10"Barebow class?" he asked.
  149. 5:12"Barebow class," I confirmed.
  150. 5:14Across the pavilion, I could see Dylan
  151. 5:17describing something to his investors
  152. 5:18with expansive hand gestures. He had a
  153. 5:21fistful of loaner arrows and hadn't yet
  154. 5:23figured out how the knocking point on
  155. 5:25his borrowed sight bow worked.
  156. 5:28The morning progressed through four
  157. 5:29stages without incident. I shot clean,
  158. 5:32moved quickly between stations, and
  159. 5:34didn't draw any particular attention to
  160. 5:36myself. At the fifth station, a kneeling
  161. 5:39shot across a 55-yd clearing to a
  162. 5:41full-size 3D elk target, I heard Dylan's
  163. 5:44voice cut across the line from three
  164. 5:45shooters over.
  165. 5:47"Can I see your scorecard?" he was
  166. 5:49saying to the volunteer scorekeeper in
  167. 5:51that firm. Just checking on things tone
  168. 5:54he used when he wanted to appear
  169. 5:55authoritative without being openly rude.
  170. 5:58"I want to make sure the scoring
  171. 5:59brackets are separated out. The barebow
  172. 6:02group really shouldn't be scored against
  173. 6:03the sight equipped class.
  174. 6:05It's not a fair comparison."
  175. 6:08The scorekeeper, a patient older woman
  176. 6:10with reading glasses on a beaded chain,
  177. 6:12told him patiently that the field
  178. 6:14scoring categories were entirely
  179. 6:16separate and always had been.
  180. 6:18"Right, right." Dylan said. He looked up
  181. 6:21and saw me kneeling into position.
  182. 6:22Something shifted in his expression. The
  183. 6:24calculation kind of shift, not the
  184. 6:26feeling kind. "Hey, Anwen." he called
  185. 6:28across the safety tape. "Shooting
  186. 6:30barebow must be rough on us at 60-yard
  187. 6:32shot. No rangefinder, no pins. How do
  188. 6:35you even judge the distance?"
  189. 6:37He said it lightly. His investors
  190. 6:39watched, a few other shooters glanced
  191. 6:41over.
  192. 6:42I looked at the 3D elk. I found the spot
  193. 6:45on its near shoulder where the 10 ring
  194. 6:46sits tucked just behind the front leg. I
  195. 6:49picked a point of reference in the grass
  196. 6:51at 40 ft, used it to stack my gap,
  197. 6:53settled my breathing, and released.
  198. 6:56The arrow drove into the 11 ring, the
  199. 6:58tight gold center, a quarter inch left
  200. 7:00of the spine.
  201. 7:02Dylan didn't say anything after that,
  202. 7:04not immediately.
  203. 7:05We broke for lunch at a long wooden
  204. 7:07table under a canvas fly. The investors,
  205. 7:10I later learned one of them was a
  206. 7:12regional finance manager named Oliver
  207. 7:14Cross, the other two were builders from
  208. 7:16the Triad area, had positioned
  209. 7:18themselves around Dylan with the studied
  210. 7:20casualness of men evaluating a deal.
  211. 7:22Dylan was halfway through a story about
  212. 7:24a successful commercial rezoning project
  213. 7:26when Oliver Cross looked across the
  214. 7:28table at me with genuine curiosity.
  215. 7:32"You've been putting up clean cards all
  216. 7:33morning." Cross said. "You shoot
  217. 7:36competitively?"
  218. 7:37"I used to." I told him. "Mostly field
  219. 7:39and 3D. I work in equipment research
  220. 7:41now."
  221. 7:42Dylan set down his fork. She means she
  222. 7:45tests crossbow tensioners at a mid-size
  223. 7:47manufacturer, he said, with a light
  224. 7:49corrective smile directed mostly at
  225. 7:51Cross. It's a boutique company, nice
  226. 7:53little niche.
  227. 7:54I let it sit for a second.
  228. 7:57We designed the draw mechanics for three
  229. 7:59of the top five field recurves in last
  230. 8:01year's national championship lineup, I
  231. 8:03said, without any particular emphasis.
  232. 8:06One of our engineers holds the current
  233. 8:0870-m world record for compound barebow.
  234. 8:11Oliver Cross raised his eyebrows.
  235. 8:14Dylan laughed quickly. "Anwyn's modest
  236. 8:16about the scale."
  237. 8:17"She doesn't sound modest," Cross said,
  238. 8:20looking back at his lunch.
  239. 8:22After the break, we moved to the seventh
  240. 8:24and final stage, the showcase station,
  241. 8:26which the event organizers had set up as
  242. 8:29an optional challenge round. It was the
  243. 8:31one that drew a small crowd of
  244. 8:32spectators, a 90-yd unmarked distance
  245. 8:35shot to a narrow vertical target, a
  246. 8:38painted wooden silhouette of a running
  247. 8:40deer cut to 10 in wide, partially
  248. 8:42obscured behind a brush wall at an angle
  249. 8:45that required threading the arrow
  250. 8:46through a 6-in window in the natural
  251. 8:48cover. No rangefinder permitted, no
  252. 8:50coaching from the line. One arrow per
  253. 8:52archer.
  254. 8:54Most shooters passed on it. The
  255. 8:55volunteer coordinator announced
  256. 8:57cheerfully that it was purely for fun,
  257. 8:59no score implications, just for bragging
  258. 9:02rights and a small donation to the
  259. 9:04Veterans Coalition from any archer who
  260. 9:06hit clean.
  261. 9:07Dylan had been quiet for most of the
  262. 9:09walk between stations. I could see him
  263. 9:11working on something internally.
  264. 9:14He stepped up to me while I was chalking
  265. 9:15my fingers at the tab station.
  266. 9:18"You know what?" he said, with the
  267. 9:20practiced easy tone he used for things
  268. 9:22he had decided in advance. "Why don't we
  269. 9:24make it interesting? You hit that
  270. 9:26silhouette clean, I'll write a personal
  271. 9:28check for $5,000 to the Coalition right
  272. 9:31here."
  273. 9:32He pulled his checkbook from his vest
  274. 9:34pocket, already holding his pen, already
  275. 9:36making it a performance for Cross and
  276. 9:38the other two behind him. But if you
  277. 9:40miss, you acknowledge to everyone here
  278. 9:43that you've been running up the score on
  279. 9:44borrowed luck today. That barebow class
  280. 9:47doesn't belongs in the same bracket as
  281. 9:49the rest of the field.
  282. 9:51The coordinator looked uncomfortable. A
  283. 9:53few observers shuffled.
  284. 9:55I looked at the target through the
  285. 9:57brush. 90 yd, partial concealment. The
  286. 10:00arrow had to enter at a 12° angle to
  287. 10:02clear the blind. The wind was coming
  288. 10:04light and consistent from the northwest,
  289. 10:07maybe 6 mph, which in barebow field
  290. 10:10shooting you account for entirely by
  291. 10:12feel and hold.
  292. 10:13I looked back at Dylan.
  293. 10:15"Make it $7,500," I said, "and you
  294. 10:18donate it regardless of outcome."
  295. 10:20Dylan blinked. Cross made a small sound
  296. 10:23that might have been a laugh.
  297. 10:24"That's not how a bet works," Dylan
  298. 10:26said.
  299. 10:27"Then it's not a bet," I said. "It's a
  300. 10:29challenge. If I miss, you still donate
  301. 10:32because the coalition exists whether I
  302. 10:34embarrass myself or not. If I hit, you
  303. 10:36donate because you made a public offer
  304. 10:38at a charity event and a man like you
  305. 10:40follows through on public offers."
  306. 10:42Oliver Cross looked at Dylan with a
  307. 10:44specific expression of a man who is
  308. 10:46watching an investment thesis fall
  309. 10:48apart.
  310. 10:49Dylan's jaw set. "7,500."
  311. 10:52I stepped up to the shooting line. The
  312. 10:54range went quiet the way it does when
  313. 10:56something real is about to happen.
  314. 10:59I found the window in the brush. I
  315. 11:01picked the center line of the wooden
  316. 11:02silhouette, a narrow painted rib line at
  317. 11:0590 yd. I estimated the drop. The wind
  318. 11:08held steady. I picked my gap reference
  319. 11:10off the grass at 30 yd, stacked it, held
  320. 11:12a hair into the breeze. I exhaled
  321. 11:15halfway and released at the bottom of
  322. 11:16the breath.
  323. 11:18The arrow traveled 92 yd in just over
  324. 11:20half a second.
  325. 11:22It passed through the brush window
  326. 11:23without touching a leaf, drove through
  327. 11:25the painted center of the silhouette's
  328. 11:2710 ring.
  329. 11:28And the wooden panel shattered with the
  330. 11:30impact.
  331. 11:31The chief range officer, a retired
  332. 11:34master sergeant named Kowalski, who had
  333. 11:36the flat eyes of a man who had seen
  334. 11:37everything and was impressed by almost
  335. 11:39nothing, lowered his binoculars very
  336. 11:42slowly. He said nothing for three full
  337. 11:44seconds. Then he turned around and
  338. 11:46looked at Dylan.
  339. 11:47"Son," Kowalski said, "that's a clean
  340. 11:50center hit, and that archer just cleared
  341. 11:52a partial obstruction shot at unmarked
  342. 11:5490 yards with no assists on a single
  343. 11:57arrow barebow. You want to tell me about
  344. 11:59borrowed luck again?"
  345. 12:00Dylan's mouth was a straight line. His
  346. 12:03investors were not looking at him.
  347. 12:05Oliver Cross stepped around Dylan and
  348. 12:07extended a hand to me.
  349. 12:09"Ms. Price, I have to ask, have you ever
  350. 12:11done any clinics or professional
  351. 12:13instruction? We're putting together a
  352. 12:15youth development initiative through our
  353. 12:17regional outdoors grant. Two dozen young
  354. 12:20women between 12 and 17. We've been
  355. 12:22looking for someone to run the technical
  356. 12:24side of a six-week marksmanship camp."
  357. 12:27I shook his hand. "Send me the program
  358. 12:30outline. I'm glad to look at it."
  359. 12:32Cross pulled out a card. Dylan took one
  360. 12:34small stiff step toward us.
  361. 12:36"The 7,500," he said quietly, "checkbook
  362. 12:39open." His hand was not entirely steady.
  363. 12:42Kowalski stepped between us and took the
  364. 12:44check directly. He looked at it, folded
  365. 12:46it once, and tucked it into his vest
  366. 12:48pocket. "This goes to camp equipment for
  367. 12:50the youth program," he said. "I'll make
  368. 12:53sure Oliver has the tax receipt by end
  369. 12:55of month." He looked at Dylan with a
  370. 12:57complete absence of warmth. "You're
  371. 12:59welcome to watch the closing ceremony
  372. 13:01from the spectator's area.
  373. 13:03Equipment return is at the far pavilion,
  374. 13:05and I'd appreciate you clearing the
  375. 13:07active range line."
  376. 13:09It wasn't a request.
  377. 13:11Dylan looked at me one last time. I
  378. 13:13don't know what he expected to see.
  379. 13:15Anger, maybe, or satisfaction, or some
  380. 13:17version of the woman who used to quietly
  381. 13:19absorb his recasting of her into
  382. 13:21something smaller and more convenient.
  383. 13:23He didn't find any of it. I was just
  384. 13:25standing in the grass with my range bag
  385. 13:27on my shoulder talking to Oliver Cross
  386. 13:30about program logistics completely
  387. 13:32finished. He walked away across the
  388. 13:34field toward the parking lot. I watched
  389. 13:37him go for exactly 1 second before
  390. 13:39turning back to the conversation. I
  391. 13:41broke down my recurve at the equipment
  392. 13:43station afterward with the same
  393. 13:45methodical attention I bring to
  394. 13:46everything. Unstring, limb check, wipe
  395. 13:49the riser, pack it even and clean.
  396. 13:52Kowalski came over while I was rolling
  397. 13:53my spare tabs into the side pocket. "You
  398. 13:56still training?" he asked. "Here and
  399. 13:59there." I said. "Mostly I teach form
  400. 14:01clinics out of a club in Cary on
  401. 14:03alternate Sundays."
  402. 14:04He nodded deliberate and approving.
  403. 14:07"Good." he said. "Skills like that
  404. 14:09belong somewhere they can do something."
  405. 14:11The drive home was quiet and easy. I had
  406. 14:14the windows down. The road through the
  407. 14:16Piedmont was all open fields and late
  408. 14:18afternoon light and the smell of turned
  409. 14:20soil from the farms off the highway.
  410. 14:23I have thought about that afternoon
  411. 14:24exactly once since it happened and only
  412. 14:27because Oliver Cross followed up 3 days
  413. 14:29later with a program outline for the
  414. 14:31youth camp. We ran the first session in
  415. 14:33August. 12 girls ages 12 to 16. A
  416. 14:37Tuesday evening clinic on breathing,
  417. 14:39anchor, and release. By the end of the
  418. 14:41first hour, two of them were putting
  419. 14:43arrows consistently inside the eight
  420. 14:45ring at 30 m.
  421. 14:47That is what I thought about on the
  422. 14:48drive home. Not Dylan's face. Not the
  423. 14:51check. Not the exact angle of Kowalski's
  424. 14:54expression. When he said son like it
  425. 14:56meant something permanent. Just the
  426. 14:58girls learning to be still and the clean
  427. 15:00sound of an arrow finding exactly where
  428. 15:03it was supposed to go.

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