How to Write the Perfect Cold Email — Transcript
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- 0:00hello hello hello welcome good morning
- 0:02good evening good afternoon wherever you
- 0:05are in the world we're so excited to
- 0:06have you here today as you can see I'm
- 0:08joined with a very special guest we have
- 0:11Sam McKenna in the house one of the
- 0:12world's greatest email copywriters and
- 0:15I'm gonna give people a few minutes to
- 0:17to trickle in but while we do I want to
- 0:20know in the chat what outbound response
- 0:23rates are you seeing right now what are
- 0:25you getting from your emails and your
- 0:26sequences how many people are getting
- 0:28back to you
- 0:31uh 6 170
- 0:3418 1.1 43% what are why why are you here
- 0:40you should be sending more emails we've
- 0:42got some 20s almost none some ones some
- 0:45fives 0.9 way down in the last few
- 0:48months um I'll call that out while
- 0:51people trickle in if you see a big drop
- 0:54in your email deliverability or your
- 0:56reply rates your open rates check out
- 0:58our webinars about email deliverability
- 1:01that could be what's causing the drop in
- 1:04performance but we have some incredible
- 1:06content today with Sam about how to get
- 1:09those numbers really really high up Tom
- 1:11out of 20,000 emails four or five
- 1:13responses we got problems Tom we got to
- 1:14fix that okay so we've got plenty of
- 1:17people here I am gonna get this started
- 1:20um everyone let's do it so I'm gonna run
- 1:23us through some housekeeping then I'm
- 1:26going to pass things over to Sam she's
- 1:28going to run you through her literally
- 1:29trademark method show me you know me for
- 1:32how to get anyone to reply to your cold
- 1:34emails I'm going to show you how to do
- 1:35it in Apollo those of you who have been
- 1:37to these webinars before no this is not
- 1:39thought leadership this is action
- 1:40leadership we're going to show you how
- 1:41to do it we're g to walk you through
- 1:44some examples of emails and then we'll
- 1:45do a Q&A at the end stay all the way
- 1:48through y'all this is um this is just
- 1:50jam-packed with actionable content here
- 1:54we are with how to write the perfect
- 1:55cold email um okay yes Robin asking a
- 2:00million people are asking are we
- 2:01recording it we are recording this
- 2:03webinar okay and I'll get to that in a
- 2:05second uh this webinar is sponsored by
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- 2:37question please try and drop it in the
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- 2:42if you're overwhelmed by the chat you
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- 2:53won't see the chat okay um if you try
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- 3:01webinar and you won't be able to come to
- 3:02Future ones so please don't spam the
- 3:04chat okay um all right everybody we're
- 3:08going to get this show on the road let's
- 3:09do it but before we do I want to share
- 3:12something with you on November 8th at
- 3:149:00 A.M Pacific time we have our first
- 3:17ever annual event it's called Olympus
- 3:20now why is this important at Olympus we
- 3:23are going to be revealing the brand new
- 3:26features coming to Apollo we have three
- 3:28huge new new features coming to Apollo
- 3:31that are game changers and we have a
- 3:33lineup of incredible speakers we have
- 3:35our CEO and our chief of product but we
- 3:37also have this guy Andrew huberman who's
- 3:39a neuroscience professor at Stanford
- 3:42University who's going to be talking
- 3:43about how to sell with science more
- 3:46successfully I'm going to run a quick
- 3:48poll before I pass it to Sam if you guys
- 3:50want to be the first to know about
- 3:52Olympus about the new features coming to
- 3:54Apollo if you want to do a live Q&A with
- 3:57Andrew huberman and also m cyel who
- 4:00leads y combinator the most successful
- 4:03startup incubator in the world who's
- 4:04going to be talking about how to take
- 4:05your company to 10 million in Revenue
- 4:07come to Olympus it's free so I'm going
- 4:09to run a poll really really really
- 4:12quickly um and if I can stop sharing my
- 4:15screen I'll be able to have it take over
- 4:16the screen so if you just say yes to
- 4:19this poll that should be on your screen
- 4:21right now I will register you for
- 4:23Olympus and it will get added to your
- 4:24calendar that's all you have to do so
- 4:26this is our first ever annual event
- 4:28please say yes if you're interested in
- 4:30seeing incredible new features from
- 4:31Apollo hearing from Andrew huberman
- 4:34Michael cbel and some other incredible
- 4:36speakers as well we'll send you more
- 4:37information I'm not going to run this
- 4:39for too long because we have a ton of
- 4:40content to get through I have a thousand
- 4:42yeses right now that's feeling pretty
- 4:44good want to see if we can get that to
- 4:462,000 and then Sam just has this
- 4:48incredible show me you know me method
- 4:50about email copyrighting and it's coming
- 4:52I promise I'm not gonna I'm not gonna
- 4:53hold that up too long we'll give this 10
- 4:56seconds and then we're going to move on
- 4:59and if you you stay to the end and you
- 5:00don't get to say yes right now I'll run
- 5:02the poll again don't worry about it okay
- 5:05five four
- 5:08three and that's all she wrote everybody
- 5:11okay so with no more further Ado I'm
- 5:14going to share my screen again and I'm
- 5:16gonna introduce the most incredible
- 5:18email copywriter I have ever met Sam
- 5:22McKenna um this is me you guys know me
- 5:24this is Sam McKenna I'm going to pass
- 5:26this over to Sam in one second Sam
- 5:27McKenna though guys she runs Sam sales
- 5:30Consulting she also formerly was the
- 5:33director of Enterprise sales at LinkedIn
- 5:36we all use LinkedIn Sam sold all of us
- 5:38on LinkedIn she's the best of the best
- 5:40she's going to take you through her show
- 5:41me you know me framework I'm going to
- 5:43stop sharing I'll give it to you Sam
- 5:45please take it away amazing thanks uh
- 5:48you guys so so great to meet you thank
- 5:50you everybody for joining us super
- 5:51stoked to be here we're gonna talk about
- 5:53a lot of stuff today right um
- 5:55specifically around cold emails and how
- 5:57to get this cooking a little bit better
- 5:59for you you guys so I'm going to pop
- 6:00into our slideshow Josh give me the
- 6:02thumbs up that you guys can see our
- 6:03slides we got the the goldcast infinite
- 6:06Mirror of Death oh the infinite mirrors
- 6:08of course hold on you guys we're gonna
- 6:10get this popping in just a second feel
- 6:12free to give me a hard time until then
- 6:15and then we should be good to go and you
- 6:17should see my slides now yeah yep there
- 6:19we go love it so show me you know me you
- 6:21guys for for those of you who don't know
- 6:23me I been in Enterprise sales for about
- 6:2416 years uh broken a ton of Records Was
- 6:27an individual contributor for seven EX
- 6:29leader for the rest and then started Sam
- 6:31sales an all women team can we give it
- 6:33up for all women and sales especially on
- 6:35October uh women in sales month a 14 we
- 6:38have over here um we've been in business
- 6:40for about four years we have almost 200
- 6:42clients we've done a great job we're
- 6:44tired s caffeine but man are we having a
- 6:47great time and part of what our
- 6:49foundation is based on is exactly this
- 6:51show me you know me if you can squint
- 6:53and see in the background on a while
- 6:55you'll also see that it is framed behind
- 6:56me along with a pineapple that is
- 6:58sometimes precariously position behind
- 6:59my head with the top coming out and
- 7:01Urgent bird gets the worm which is one
- 7:03of our philosophies we love urgency but
- 7:06let's talk about show me you know me why
- 7:08it matters why it's really important
- 7:10first of all it's just the art of
- 7:12knowing our buyers as humans what the
- 7:14company is that they do what Their
- 7:15vertical is and just digging into that
- 7:18and to me show me you know me is
- 7:20something that bleeds from every single
- 7:22touch point you have with your buyer the
- 7:24very first email you send all the way to
- 7:26when you've had them as a client for 20
- 7:28years the key that I want you guys to
- 7:30take away from this first and foremost
- 7:32is that we probably are going to be in
- 7:35sales for most of our career the
- 7:36majority of us are going to make a
- 7:38career out of this so think about the
- 7:40things that you do today and how is this
- 7:42going to impact you in a year from now
- 7:44in five years from now do the things
- 7:46today that help build a long game and
- 7:49really set you up for Success so show me
- 7:51your know me what do we know about our
- 7:52buyers how can we do a research how can
- 7:54we dig into what their compan is doing
- 7:56what's going on with them and really set
- 7:58ourselves up apart so to me this starts
- 8:01with our subject line and here's what I
- 8:03would say Focus Less on quantity and
- 8:06focus more on quality if you even send
- 8:09don't R your eyes me if you even send 20
- 8:12show me you know me emails in a week
- 8:14you're going to be off to a killer start
- 8:16think about all of those percentages you
- 8:18guys shared earlier how low your open
- 8:20and response rates are by the way
- 8:22industry average I saw a lot of
- 8:23questions about that industry average
- 8:25about 6% of an open rate and point 9% of
- 8:30a response rate we're not even getting a
- 8:31full percentage Point that's industry
- 8:33average but industry average isn't show
- 8:35me you know me an industry average is
- 8:37sending all the same stuff quick
- 8:39question Josh and Sam connect Josh and
- 8:41Sam with inequality signs in the middle
- 8:43what is that about right instead stand
- 8:46out and it starts with the show me and
- 8:48know me of your subject line now I want
- 8:50you guys to look at the one that's on
- 8:51the left on the right here running
- 8:53podcast plus Chicago Pizza raise your
- 8:56hand if that makes sense no nobody
- 8:58because it was written for the specific
- 9:00person that's receiving it so first and
- 9:02foremost we're going to think about how
- 9:04to create a subject line right to
- 9:06convince the person to even open up our
- 9:08email that show me you know me is pulled
- 9:11first from their LinkedIn profile and
- 9:13second if there's nothing on their
- 9:15LinkedIn profile it's literally a dust
- 9:16storm from like 2008 of when they last
- 9:18updated it go to the company website
- 9:21what are quotes that are going on where
- 9:23have they spoken on a podcast recently
- 9:25have they been mentioned an article are
- 9:27there quotes you can pull Have you
- 9:28listened to to this podcast today and
- 9:30you are desperate to get Josh's
- 9:32attention and you can pull a quote from
- 9:33that and throw it in your show me know
- 9:35me subject line so he will give you a
- 9:36meeting all of that stuff is relatively
- 9:39easy to find and yes it may take you 20
- 9:43or 30 minutes to write your first show
- 9:44me know me subject line and then the tie
- 9:46to it but give it a shot with 20 emails
- 9:49stick with it I promise you will get
- 9:51more efficient the goal is that we get
- 9:52around to five to seven minutes for
- 9:54creating each of these emails now before
- 9:56you tell me I've got a 100 of these to
- 9:58send every single day what I'm I going
- 9:59to do so you roll we'll talk about why
- 10:01this matters and how to do this a little
- 10:02bit more efficiently then let's think
- 10:05about beyond the subject line what's the
- 10:07next thing they look at it's the first
- 10:10sentence think about your own user
- 10:12experience in your inbox what pops up in
- 10:14Outlook if you guys are unfortunately
- 10:15still using Outlook if you're looking at
- 10:17your Gmail when you're looking at your
- 10:19phone you see two things well
- 10:21technically you see three the name of
- 10:22the person no one knows who we are the
- 10:24subject line and then the first sentence
- 10:27and those two things subject line and
- 10:28the sentence are what determines whether
- 10:31we get that email open or whether they
- 10:33move on the critical thing to keep in
- 10:35mind here is how do we show up in a
- 10:38different way two things I would tell
- 10:40you I know I saw in the chat earlier
- 10:42that some people put in I hope this
- 10:44finds you well if you do not already
- 10:46follow my future husband corporate bro
- 10:48on Instagram I highly recommend that you
- 10:49do that and also Google his hope this
- 10:52finds you well video it makes me shake
- 10:53laughing every time no matter how often
- 10:55I watch it but cut that stuff out that's
- 10:58what we normally see right we see two
- 11:00things hope this finds you well or we
- 11:02see people jump right into the sales
- 11:04pitch so I might email Josh and be like
- 11:06Josh companies like Apollo and our
- 11:08clients are using us and doing this
- 11:11jumping right into the sales pitch no
- 11:13better way to say this is a sales email
- 11:16and by putting that front and center or
- 11:17starting with a nicity happy Monday
- 11:20There's No Such Thing happy Tuesday hope
- 11:22this finds you well cut all of that out
- 11:24instead do two things number one start
- 11:27with who you are start with this line
- 11:28that you right here we have yet to be
- 11:31properly introduced but I'm Sam McKenna
- 11:33and I'm the CEO of Sam sales now some of
- 11:36you were probably thinking but wait I'm
- 11:37not supposed to introduce myself at the
- 11:39beginning of the email I was told to
- 11:40never use my name what am I supposed to
- 11:42do the thing I want you to consider is
- 11:44the combination of a show me you know me
- 11:47subject line plus the we have yet to be
- 11:49properly introduced it's so different
- 11:52you've done your research and it makes
- 11:54somebody think huh I don't know this
- 11:56person but they seem to know something
- 11:57about me and maybe we should have been
- 11:59introduced so that combination often the
- 12:02not gets you an open which is half the
- 12:05battle what do we write next that's
- 12:06forthcoming but just doing this I
- 12:09promise you I'd be stunned if every
- 12:12single one of you didn't get a pop in
- 12:14your open rates just as a starter now
- 12:17what do we do here in the first part of
- 12:20your email you're going to want to think
- 12:21about tying authentically right to what
- 12:24it is you said so somebody might email
- 12:26me and say Sam I see you went to FSU
- 12:29right maybe they write go nlls any nles
- 12:31fans out there it's okay if you're not
- 12:32any nles fans though no no one so
- 12:34somebody might write that in the subject
- 12:36line go NS plus apollo.io let's say and
- 12:39then they write in there and they're
- 12:40like Sam I see you went to FSU that's
- 12:43awesome go nolles want to buy your stuff
- 12:45and I'll be like no what about FSU you
- 12:48have to think about an authentic tie to
- 12:51whatever it is that you say put that
- 12:53there in the friend Center you can also
- 12:55add it directly as a PS if you want ps's
- 12:58are awesome to catch the eye and pull
- 13:00somebody down but after you do that make
- 13:02sure there's a beautiful transition what
- 13:05most people do is say sam so you went to
- 13:07FSU I had a great time I always went
- 13:09there I tailgated a memories of my dad
- 13:10it's so awesome hey do you want to buy
- 13:12my stuff no we have to transition while
- 13:16I could talk about FSU all day while I
- 13:18could go on about this forever while I
- 13:19have seven other things on your profile
- 13:21that I'd be so excited to talk to you
- 13:23about and connect with you on the real
- 13:25reason for my Outreach is XYZ now one
- 13:28thing I want to tell you to about the
- 13:29subject line and the website and finding
- 13:31information there you guys have surely
- 13:33heard the words compelling event use a
- 13:36compelling event what a great way to
- 13:38stand out on your subject line I sort of
- 13:41disagree and here's why when we think of
- 13:44compelling events we usually think of
- 13:45the lowest hanging fruit the laziest way
- 13:48for us to be able to get somebody's
- 13:49attention so maybe we get a Google alert
- 13:51and it says apollo.io raised $100
- 13:54million apollo.io raised $100 million
- 13:57let's hear it for Apollo amazing now if
- 13:59we email Josh and we say Josh congrats
- 14:03on your raise of $100 million guess what
- 14:04else he's going to get the exact same
- 14:06subject line from 4200 other people
- 14:09let's be different right so dig in a
- 14:11little deeper what can we find out about
- 14:13Apollo other than their fantastic Rays
- 14:16right think about that stuff super super
- 14:18huge as a way to stand out again
- 14:20connecting the dots on it what matters
- 14:22to us about that and then the transition
- 14:25one more thing I'm going to tell you
- 14:26guys let's use Tesla as an example if we
- 14:29remember some time ago Tesla had their
- 14:31fifth strike quarterly positive earnings
- 14:33and what does that mean Tesla got on the
- 14:35S&P 500 what does that mean everybody
- 14:37did sent Tesla an email congratulations
- 14:39on your S&P 500 wow riveting thank you
- 14:41so much no one's congratulated us so far
- 14:44instead we took a look we found that
- 14:46Tesla was doing these really cool popup
- 14:48shops throughout Europe and they were
- 14:50tying it to where in the world is K in
- 14:52San Diego three of you on the call might
- 14:54remember that show and that's fine but
- 14:56if you think about this instead of
- 14:58congrats on your S&P 500 we leveraged
- 15:01that sent it to 400 Global marketers and
- 15:04got a
- 15:0538% response rate not open response rate
- 15:10what a killer way to stand out so talk
- 15:13about that in subject line tie it
- 15:14authentically do your transition and
- 15:17then what's the challenge we're solving
- 15:19for our buyers look at the emails that
- 15:22you guys are sending today and here's
- 15:23what I want to ask you does your email
- 15:25say what your company does or does your
- 15:29email say the challenge you solve and
- 15:32why this is so important is I bet it
- 15:34says what your company does right we
- 15:37help modern organizations do XYZ we
- 15:39drive 3x pipeline for you in a Day cute
- 15:41you and everybody else supposedly if it
- 15:44says what you do what we have to think
- 15:46about is that we make it too easy for
- 15:48the buyer to just say we already do
- 15:49that don't need you buy right instead
- 15:52think about how we can do something like
- 15:54this and let me give you guys an example
- 15:56right of something around LinkedIn sales
- 15:58Navigator so we might think of this like
- 16:00LinkedIn sales Navigator right this is
- 16:01the line of business that I used to
- 16:03support when I worked there I'm sure
- 16:04many of you guys use it if you want to
- 16:06learn how to use it better come to our
- 16:08website we have tons of content on it
- 16:10but here's the thing what most reps will
- 16:12say right when thinking of how to
- 16:13leverage sales Navigator still say
- 16:15something like hey we can help you
- 16:16leverage insights and data about your
- 16:18buyers at the right time and help your
- 16:20sellers we have a PO over that we have
- 16:22zoom info for that we have Google alerts
- 16:24for that we don't need you so we've got
- 16:25to think about the challenge if I was
- 16:28going to reach out to somebody let's say
- 16:29and I wanted to train them on LinkedIn
- 16:30sales Navigator like we often do I might
- 16:33say something like this given the modern
- 16:34sales organization you are I suspect
- 16:37your LinkedIn sales Navigator customer
- 16:38but also suspect your reps don't use it
- 16:40as much as you'd like or to the full
- 16:42breadth of its capability we also can
- 16:45make this assumption because we hear
- 16:46this from every single one of our
- 16:47customers we spent a 100,000 million
- 16:49trillion good billion dollars on
- 16:51LinkedIn sales Navigator in 5% of our
- 16:53buyers of our reps use it great so we
- 16:56know that's a challenge you know that
- 16:58the challenge your buyers have because
- 17:00you talk to them every day because you
- 17:01get on Discovery calls because hopefully
- 17:03your leadership team has identified here
- 17:05are the five things that our buyers go
- 17:06through and how we can solve them so I
- 17:08want you to think about do you surface a
- 17:11challenge that maybe they don't have or
- 17:13maybe they have but they don't know that
- 17:14they have or that they have and they
- 17:16know they have but then that's only half
- 17:19the battle what we have to think about
- 17:21that is the hidden or forthcoming
- 17:24objection think about what you're saying
- 17:26to your buyers we can help you we
- 17:28suspect you have a challenge and we can
- 17:29help you do it and they're going to say
- 17:31okay well so what we probably already
- 17:33have a solution for that or we've got
- 17:34something else that's coming up that can
- 17:35already solve
- 17:37that yeah Josh so sorry to interrupt you
- 17:41I am so riveted by this um we're getting
- 17:44a couple people asking if you can go a
- 17:45tiny bit slower and also to those of you
- 17:48feel like this is going too fast you
- 17:50will get the recording and you will be
- 17:52able to watch this at your own speed
- 17:54okay so uh there we have it back to you
- 17:59sorry to interrup here it comes no you
- 18:01got it no thanks you guys thanks for for
- 18:03noting that um we are pressed for time
- 18:05so I just wanted to make sure we get
- 18:06through everything but yes I will slow
- 18:08down a little um hey let's talk about
- 18:10just the value proposition a little bit
- 18:12more right so three things you can think
- 18:14about here one the hook what is a
- 18:17specific hook you can solve as a
- 18:19specific problem your buyer has again
- 18:21just think about that I might also in
- 18:23pitching sales Navigator I might say
- 18:25something like hey I bet that 6% of your
- 18:27inbound leads come in from people who
- 18:30change jobs and reach back out to you
- 18:32that's what industry average is like
- 18:34what happens to the
- 18:3694% get them to think what's a hook I
- 18:38can use what are their pain points and
- 18:41the other thing is we want to think
- 18:42about not gains people actually move
- 18:45much faster when we think about loss
- 18:47aversion right so thinking about
- 18:50customers turning thinking about
- 18:51employees um having going through
- 18:53attrition right and quitting don't think
- 18:56about we can help you get this we can
- 18:57help you build XYZ more pipeline think
- 19:00about how you can spin it to loss
- 19:01aversion instead they would tell you as
- 19:05you think about this challenge as you
- 19:07think about the value proposition you
- 19:09have if you look at this and you say I
- 19:12just don't know what it is that we do I
- 19:13don't know what resonates here's a
- 19:15really cool hack that you can use one go
- 19:18to your boss let's hope to God that they
- 19:21already know what those are and they can
- 19:22direct you but if they can see if your
- 19:25buyer exists in your organization so if
- 19:28I worked for a company and I sold two c
- 19:30I might go to my cro and I might just
- 19:32say hey this is the value proposition
- 19:34that I talk about what do you think also
- 19:37if you are a bdr or if you a junior AE
- 19:39and you're like I am not going to go
- 19:40talk to my super scary cro what an
- 19:43impact you would make by simply saying I
- 19:46love your feedback on something this is
- 19:48the tactic that I'm using this is the
- 19:50value proposition how would it resonate
- 19:52with you what is it that you think
- 19:53differently holy canoli you will stand
- 19:56out as the only person that does that
- 19:58but again if you've got if you're
- 19:59selling even not to AO SVP of sales CMO
- 20:03somebody in it go and talk to them build
- 20:06that value proposition with them what an
- 20:09amazing asset you will be to your team
- 20:12now again we want to think about the
- 20:14hidden or forthcoming objection if I
- 20:17reach out to Josh and I say Josh you
- 20:19guys have LinkedIn sales Navigator I'm
- 20:20sure you're not using it to the full
- 20:22breath of its capability we'd love to
- 20:24talk to you about it interested in
- 20:25learning more Josh is gonna say no I
- 20:28have a customer success manager for that
- 20:30we have a former LinkedIn rep that works
- 20:32here we're good I have to think about
- 20:35the butt right look at this cute cartoon
- 20:37I have to think about the butt that is
- 20:39forthcoming right what is it that's
- 20:41going to be an objection because I'll
- 20:43tell you you're buyers are not going to
- 20:45respond to that email they're not going
- 20:47to say but we have a CSN for that why
- 20:49one they just don't have the time to
- 20:51respond to you and 30 other people that
- 20:52have reached out the other thing is that
- 20:55they don't want to argue with you
- 20:56because what are we going to do we're
- 20:58going to hear that objection and we're
- 20:59going to say wait wait wait wait and
- 21:02we're going to respond and we're going
- 21:03to try to capture their attention
- 21:05instead just do that right then and
- 21:07there right think of what the most
- 21:09common objection is that you get to your
- 21:12technology your platform Your solution
- 21:13your analytics whatever it is that you
- 21:14sell what's the most common objection
- 21:17get at it in that email so I might say
- 21:20something like right while you do
- 21:22already have a CSM right I suspect you
- 21:24have a CSM that can support you I might
- 21:26say customer success manager in case
- 21:28they don't know what CSM is here's how
- 21:30I'm Different here's why we matter
- 21:32here's the impact that I can make that
- 21:35value statement there has to be the so
- 21:38what of what you do right you've got to
- 21:41get around that one way or the other and
- 21:42in the first email is the place to do it
- 21:45so let's just recap really quick we've
- 21:47got a subject line that says show me you
- 21:49know me the second component is our
- 21:51first sentence not hope this finds you
- 21:53well the next component is the
- 21:55transition into while I could talk about
- 21:57this all day
- 21:58the real reason for my Outreach is value
- 22:01proposition make sure that value
- 22:03proposition is a specific challenge that
- 22:06we know they have and then pause and
- 22:08just think if I send this what will they
- 22:11likely object to what will they say back
- 22:13if I could get everybody to respond and
- 22:15object what would they say pick the
- 22:17thing that is the most likely to happen
- 22:19right there might be seven different
- 22:20scenarios but pick the most broadest one
- 22:23and then write that in while you may
- 22:25already have a CRM in place while you
- 22:28may already have a Analytics tool in
- 22:31place for this here's why we're
- 22:32different and here's the so what of why
- 22:35you should care right and it's not that
- 22:38you have a great user interface it's not
- 22:39that you're cloud-based it's not that
- 22:41your Integrations are amazing you've got
- 22:43to get deeper than that and the so what
- 22:46is always going to have value
- 22:48proposition and so what will always need
- 22:50to be tied to that specific buyer
- 22:52Persona right let's think of the Tesla
- 22:55example again right think about those
- 22:57things what is a Tesla what what do they
- 22:59do they're an electric car okay what's
- 23:02the benefit of that oh you don't have to
- 23:04get gas it's good for the environment
- 23:06whatever else and then we've got to
- 23:08think about the so what and when we
- 23:10think about that so what we have to
- 23:12think about the buyer Persona my so what
- 23:14for a 24y old that doesn't commute a lot
- 23:16is going to be very different than my so
- 23:18what for a 49-year-old dad of three who
- 23:21is usually late in the mornings getting
- 23:23his kids to daycare or whatever it may
- 23:25be I've got to think about who that
- 23:26buyer is so I can I a here's why you
- 23:29should give a darn I was so I cancourse
- 23:31here's why you should give a about
- 23:33this particular thing right and then the
- 23:37close how do we end this so first of all
- 23:40think about the call to action we don't
- 23:42want to say can I book five minutes with
- 23:44you 15 to 20 minutes Tuesday at two
- 23:46o'clock instead solicit for interest up
- 23:50for a chat interested in learning more
- 23:52don't specifically ask for time now the
- 23:54other thing is we want to think about a
- 23:56calendar link and I know Josh and are
- 23:58going to have a little Spar on this just
- 24:00a touch but here's the thing I would say
- 24:02when you think about your calendar
- 24:04length right when I send out a calendar
- 24:06link what am I doing in outbound email
- 24:09specifically I'm saying hey you book the
- 24:12time with me right here's the link to my
- 24:14calendar you do the work it's really
- 24:17presumptuous the other thing that I'm
- 24:19doing I want you guys to think about
- 24:21like this in a real world dating
- 24:22scenario let's say I walk up let's say I
- 24:24say Josh at a bar can't do this we're
- 24:27both married and have kiddos right but
- 24:28let's say I see joshh at a bar I'm like
- 24:30hey you're super cute do you want to go
- 24:31for drink sometime and Josh is like
- 24:33totally would love to and I'm like
- 24:35awesome here's my calendar link for you
- 24:38to book that date with me Josh should be
- 24:40like what in the actual hell just
- 24:41happened I'd be like I know I'll see
- 24:43myself out so think about this right if
- 24:45you really want to do a great mix you've
- 24:47got this great calendar feature with an
- 24:49apollo.io but use that in conjunction
- 24:52when first of all when somebody responds
- 24:54and says we'd love to meet I cannot wait
- 24:56to hear buy your product and you're like
- 24:57I know it's cuz I wrote you an amazing
- 24:59email but when you do that say here are
- 25:01times I'm available I would love to see
- 25:04when you're free and if it's easier
- 25:05here's my calendar link right so let's
- 25:07think about the buyer first now if
- 25:10you're really going to do it the Sam
- 25:11sales way I actually wouldn't send the
- 25:12calendar link and here's why I don't
- 25:15want that buyer first of all have to
- 25:16pull up two screens right they're going
- 25:18to look at my calendar theirs back to
- 25:20mine maybe other people's pay the B the
- 25:22other thing is I just don't want them to
- 25:24work around my internal schedules right
- 25:27they're going to my one in on my
- 25:28forecast call my 17th massage of the
- 25:31week just me just kidding they're going
- 25:33to work through all of that right and I
- 25:35just want to say hey I'm Different tell
- 25:37me when you're free and I'll book time
- 25:39with you rarely do we have to chase and
- 25:43rarely does somebody say 17 times but do
- 25:46not align with mine so just a little
- 25:48something to be different there final
- 25:50thing how do you close um there's some
- 25:52really good memes that are not so safe
- 25:54for work that talk about how what it
- 25:56means when you sign with best and then
- 25:58there's some some really other good ones
- 26:00um out there with other signatures but
- 26:02here's what I would say don't use
- 26:03sincerely don't use best if you get it
- 26:05best for me I actually did sign an email
- 26:07best this morning I was pretty excited
- 26:09about it if you get it best for me it
- 26:10means we're not on good terms right now
- 26:12so think about that um otherwise just
- 26:14use thanks and cheers whether you use
- 26:17thank you thanks cheers totally up to
- 26:19you also exclamation points or not what
- 26:22do we do the thing to think about for
- 26:24you is whatever is authentic to you if I
- 26:28was my authentic self I would have 17
- 26:30exclamation points at the end of my
- 26:32chairs would that terrify everybody yeah
- 26:34am I gonna do I am 100% that person that
- 26:37has to go back in my emails and delete
- 26:38my exclamation points which I still feel
- 26:40rude when I do it but alas right just
- 26:42make sure it's authentic to you whatever
- 26:44language you use in your emails however
- 26:46you close however you greet whatever it
- 26:48is make sure it fits who you are as a
- 26:50human we sometimes see people who use
- 26:52humor and emails and then they join the
- 26:54calls and they're not funny so make sure
- 26:57is authentic to whoever you are right
- 27:00get after it there and then let's talk
- 27:03about apollo.io Josh do we want to go
- 27:06through our emails or do we want to go
- 27:08through a demo we are gonna jump into
- 27:11Apollo and I'm gonna show you all how
- 27:13did do this in real time using Apollo
- 27:17how to write a show me you know me email
- 27:19how to find somebody that's worthy of
- 27:21getting a show me you know me email
- 27:22we're going to go through it together
- 27:24first of all we're not done guys we're
- 27:26going to come back and say is going to
- 27:28walk through some examples of show me
- 27:30you know me emails that actually got
- 27:33responses and booked meetings with high
- 27:34value prospects so stick around through
- 27:36my demo portion but as you all know I
- 27:39don't want this to just be about uh
- 27:41thought leadership for you I want this
- 27:43to be about uh action for you as well so
- 27:46we're going to get into Apollo and you
- 27:49guys should be able to see this screen
- 27:51right now I'm trying I I've heard you in
- 27:54previous webinars uh you guys all want
- 27:57the screen to be bigger so I'm trying to
- 28:00execute on that now the screen is bigger
- 28:03um I'm going to hide my face as well so
- 28:06it'll be even bigger than that actually
- 28:08I'm having trouble doing that Janet can
- 28:10you
- 28:11uh yeah it doesn't matter okay and uh
- 28:14bear with me this is live I'm gonna have
- 28:16to jump through a few different Windows
- 28:17okay so the first thing I want to do you
- 28:20guys is I'm going to come into Apollo
- 28:21and I'm going to go into my search Tab
- 28:23and to save us some time I've built
- 28:25what's called a saved search so if if
- 28:27you're in Apollo and you're often doing
- 28:30your prospecting and you're looking for
- 28:32the same kind of people you can just hit
- 28:34this save filter after you do a search
- 28:37and it's going to save your searches so
- 28:38you have some searches here that you've
- 28:40saved in the past and I've done one it's
- 28:42called VP of Ops retail I'm going to
- 28:44click on it now I want to give you guys
- 28:45some context for this example one of you
- 28:47reached out to me on LinkedIn yesterday
- 28:49I may mispronounced your name Leela or
- 28:51Leila Laya I'm not sure I'm sorry uh and
- 28:55you asked hey can you show an example of
- 28:58selling to somebody other than a saleson
- 29:00how do you sell to somebody in retail so
- 29:03for my example guys I chose VP of
- 29:05operations in the United States or
- 29:08Canada with between 500 and 2,000
- 29:10employees at the company who works in
- 29:12retail that's what I'm looking for okay
- 29:15and that's my list so what I'm going to
- 29:18do now is I've returned this great list
- 29:20of all these VPS of operations and I
- 29:23found somebody yesterday that I was
- 29:25really interested in I've already saved
- 29:26them and it's this person Jim Rose okay
- 29:30so if I click into Jim's name I get this
- 29:32page and I can see that Jim is the
- 29:34president of op Vice President of
- 29:36Operations at Pilot now I'm actually
- 29:38familiar with pilot if you're not in the
- 29:40United States uh pilot has a large chain
- 29:44of gas stations all across the country
- 29:46so I know something about this company
- 29:48I've interacted with them before um but
- 29:50I want to actually go take a look at
- 29:52Jim's LinkedIn and this is where things
- 29:54get tricky I have to stop sharing my
- 29:57screen screen and share a different
- 29:59window so we can see Jim's LinkedIn
- 30:01because yall want that big screen size
- 30:02so here we go all right so I then went
- 30:05to Jim's LinkedIn okay and I found Jim
- 30:08on LinkedIn and immediately I started
- 30:11scrolling down and I can see that he's
- 30:13actually fairly active on LinkedIn um if
- 30:16I refresh this it should give me his
- 30:18post history I'm hoping yeah so he's
- 30:21fairly active he posted last week two
- 30:23weeks ago a month ago and I click into
- 30:25the first post and I see that there are
- 30:28he he's really writing about his team
- 30:29and he's got these great pictures of him
- 30:31with people who work for him and he has
- 30:3330,000 team members 850 locations and
- 30:36one and a half million guests every day
- 30:39I thought okay that's interesting I've
- 30:41just learned something about his company
- 30:42I've learned a little bit about him um
- 30:44and I can use some of this in my email
- 30:46here in a minute I also if I go back to
- 30:49his profile I keep scrolling down and I
- 30:51can see that he went to Buffalo State
- 30:53University I don't know anything about
- 30:56Buffalo State University
- 30:58so I Googled what is the mascot of
- 31:00Buffalo State and I figured all right
- 31:02it's this Benji the Bengal no idea but I
- 31:04figured that out right now okay I got
- 31:06Benji Le Bengal I also don't know where
- 31:08Buffalo State University is so I put it
- 31:11into Google Maps and I searched for it
- 31:14and I found that Buffalo State
- 31:15University is actually right on the
- 31:17border of the United States and Canada
- 31:19and this is where I I got I was like
- 31:21okay I'm curious where is the closest
- 31:24Pilot Flying Jay gas station to Buffalo
- 31:28State University and I actually figured
- 31:29out that it's in Canada it's not in the
- 31:31United States so I thought all right
- 31:33this is something there's something
- 31:34coming together here uh so I kind of
- 31:38have enough information to pull this
- 31:41together but there's one more thing that
- 31:43I did I went to their website I went to
- 31:44the Pilot Flying Jay website and I
- 31:47started scrolling down and I found that
- 31:49they don't call themselves gas stations
- 31:51they call themselves Travel Centers okay
- 31:54so now I feel like I have enough to do a
- 31:56show me you know know me and I'm going
- 31:58to go back to my Apollo and I'm going to
- 32:01try and put one together
- 32:03so here we go I'm in Apollo I've got Jim
- 32:07right here now what I can do is I can
- 32:10just click add the sequence add contact
- 32:12to sequence and I'm going to add him to
- 32:14a show me you know me sequence that I
- 32:16made yesterday and I'm going to walk you
- 32:17guys through that sequence it's right
- 32:20here okay so this sequence is pretty
- 32:22straightforward I've only added three
- 32:24steps but you can add many more the
- 32:26first one is a manual email the second
- 32:28one is a phone call two days later the
- 32:31third one is just a automatic email that
- 32:33follows up I'm going to start with that
- 32:36so you can see what that looks like this
- 32:37is just very simple if you've been to my
- 32:39previous cold call or cold email webinar
- 32:41you'll have seen this before it just
- 32:42says Hey first name just wanted to see
- 32:44if I'm barking up the wrong tree this is
- 32:46my follow-up email y'all but now I'm
- 32:48going to show you my show me you know me
- 32:49email so I wrote this yesterday it took
- 32:51me about 15 minutes uh but this is where
- 32:53it came together Benji the Bengals
- 32:55favorite Flying J day okay so what I
- 32:59said was hey Jim we haven't met yet but
- 33:01I'm Josh and I run the couponing program
- 33:03at coupons to go the person who asked me
- 33:05to do a demo like this works at a
- 33:06couponing company I just made this up
- 33:08okay I drive across the country often
- 33:11for work and when I can I stop at Pilot
- 33:13Flying Jay that's what we call flattery
- 33:14friends but then remember from their
- 33:16website they don't call themselves gas
- 33:17stations they call themselves Travel
- 33:19Centers so I added that y'all have hands
- 33:21down the best experience of any travel
- 33:23center okay when I saw you went to
- 33:26Buffalo I wanted to drop you a line of
- 33:28some Flying Jay trivia this is where my
- 33:30Google Maps sleuthing comes in I say
- 33:32here it is the closest Pilot Flying Jay
- 33:34to Buffalo state is in what country and
- 33:36then I continue I said while that
- 33:38percolates this is what Sam calls the
- 33:40transition uh the real reason I'm
- 33:42reaching out is to chat about coupons to
- 33:44go my guess is if you could find a way
- 33:46to both Delight Pilots one and a half
- 33:47million daily customers got that from
- 33:49his LinkedIn and increase the per
- 33:51transaction Revenue by 20% or more made
- 33:53that up you do it but it's hard to get
- 33:55that kind of impact at your scale that's
- 33:57what we do while you already have some
- 33:59awesome coupons uh we've already helped
- 34:01your competitors I call this fomo break
- 34:04their quarterly sales targets if you're
- 34:06up for a chat I'd love to talk this is
- 34:08my email okay now you'll notice I did
- 34:11not include in this email a link to my
- 34:14calendar like Sam said but Apollo does
- 34:19have some incredible absolutely
- 34:22incredible calendar uh features in the
- 34:26Apollo meetings platform and I want to
- 34:27show you guys what that actually looks
- 34:29like and when and how to use that so
- 34:32give me a second to find it and I'm
- 34:34seeing people are saying hey that email
- 34:36was too long and you're probably like
- 34:38what the hell Josh I came to your last
- 34:39webinar and you said to keep every email
- 34:41super short well I want to tell you guys
- 34:43something about that right sometimes
- 34:45you're not going to be able to do show
- 34:47me you know me um in my experience
- 34:50there's just you're going to go to their
- 34:51LinkedIn there is nothing you're going
- 34:52to go to their company site there is
- 34:54nothing in that case I gave you guys a a
- 34:56lot of tools in my previous webinar for
- 34:58what to do there but when you do have
- 35:01something to to that you can write about
- 35:02you can craft an email for show me you
- 35:04know me um I want you guys to to do that
- 35:06for your highest value prospects and
- 35:09when you do that Sam gets about 25%
- 35:12reply rate for her emails okay so I want
- 35:15to show you guys what to do when someone
- 35:17replies so I've already showed you how
- 35:18to write a show meun know me email using
- 35:20Apollo now what do you do when someone
- 35:22responds and says that they're
- 35:23interested well first what we're going
- 35:25to do is we're going to go into the
- 35:26engage tab of Apollo and we're going to
- 35:28go to meetings if you're familiar with
- 35:31Kenly chili Piper any of those tools you
- 35:34can cancel your subscription because
- 35:36Apollo has that in the Apollo platform
- 35:38today this is brand new it just came out
- 35:41and most of you haven't seen it before
- 35:43when you land on land on this for the
- 35:45first time it's going to ask you to
- 35:47connect your calendar now I've already
- 35:49done that when you connect your calendar
- 35:51you can then create a meeting type now
- 35:53those of you who are sdrs this is Magic
- 35:55for you okay there's different types of
- 35:57meetings we can have in the calendar one
- 35:59of them is for a single host so that
- 36:00would be like me setting up meetings for
- 36:02myself but if I'm an SDR I could also do
- 36:05multihost so let's say I have one SDR
- 36:07who's supporting two or three account
- 36:09Executives I can choose a multihost
- 36:11setup which would allow me to send one
- 36:14calendar link and it would rotate
- 36:16between those a account exacts I support
- 36:18based on who's available first I could
- 36:21also do around Robin okay around Robin
- 36:23just puts my account Executives in order
- 36:25so if I'm supporting Bobby and Johnny
- 36:28Bobby will get the first meeting Johnny
- 36:29will get the second one okay and then
- 36:31it'll go back and forth back and forth
- 36:33the last meeting type is incredibly
- 36:35powerful if you have inbound leads guys
- 36:37if you're getting leads coming to your
- 36:38website you can actually use Apollo to
- 36:41Route those people to a calendar where
- 36:45they can book a meeting right from your
- 36:46website you don't have to then you know
- 36:48go into Salesforce or HubSpot find the
- 36:50lead email them add them to a sequence
- 36:52all of that you can just do it straight
- 36:54from Apollo with the inbound router form
- 36:57I'm not going to spend a ton of time on
- 36:59that because I want to show you how to
- 37:00do this and show me you know me okay so
- 37:02this is Apollo meetings makes it really
- 37:04easy for your prospects to book time
- 37:06with you and to uh reschedule if needed
- 37:09but here's what you do let's say you
- 37:10send a show me you know me and you get
- 37:12an email back that's like this yes I'm
- 37:14interested when can we talk I can hit
- 37:16reply and this is where the magic for me
- 37:18like really blows my mind I can hit
- 37:21meetings because I've connected Gmail to
- 37:24Apollo and I can literally plug in
- 37:27my calendar link to my email in like two
- 37:29clicks now I've written a template for
- 37:31this and it looks like this that's great
- 37:33I'd love to chat when is convenient for
- 37:35you now you'll notice my first thing in
- 37:38the email I didn't say click my calendar
- 37:40I actually asked when's convenient for
- 37:42you right I want to serve my buyer and
- 37:44make it as easy for them as possible but
- 37:46here's where the calendar link comes in
- 37:48PS if it's easier here's a link to my
- 37:51calendar and then using the meetings
- 37:52tool all I need to do is click this copy
- 37:55scheduling link I can highlight this a
- 37:57little bit and you could save the
- 37:58template to do this but I wanted to show
- 38:00you guys this bam there's a link to my
- 38:02calendar it was all right there it was
- 38:04in my Gmail I didn't have to do anything
- 38:05else and this email just says if nothing
- 38:07on here works for you let me know and I
- 38:08can move stuff around okay I want to
- 38:10show you guys one more thing before we
- 38:12go into some more show me you know me
- 38:13examples and we're doing the Q&A you can
- 38:17also choose times from your Calender and
- 38:21embed those times in your email so I
- 38:24wouldn't do this for a cold Outreach I
- 38:26would do this when I'm working a deal
- 38:28I'm trying to get the second third
- 38:29fourth meeting set up something like
- 38:32this it embeds the available times right
- 38:34into the email I think that's pretty
- 38:35cool that's super Nifty so that was my
- 38:38demo of how to do show me you know me in
- 38:41Apollo and I am going to run a poll
- 38:44right now where you guys have a few
- 38:47different options for what you can do
- 38:49okay if you want uh I'm going to run it
- 38:51just give me one second
- 38:54okay um can you guys see the PO
- 38:57poll yeah I think yeah okay now this
- 39:01poll if you guys are curious the
- 39:03meetings Apollo meetings I just showed
- 39:04you is available for everyone um in
- 39:07Apollo you only get six meeting Types on
- 39:09the basic plan if you want more than
- 39:10that you do have to pay um but I'm
- 39:13running a poll right now if you guys
- 39:15want to talk to somebody about Apollo or
- 39:17you want to get more training for Apollo
- 39:19reply to this poll okay uh it's not
- 39:22letting me open the poll though Janet do
- 39:24you know why that might be
- 39:27um that's weird you can reply to the
- 39:29poll you have four different options for
- 39:31the poll
- 39:33and yeah the poll's not opening I'm
- 39:35gonna I'm gonna come right back I'm
- 39:37gonna refresh my computer because maybe
- 39:39it's
- 39:50me can you hear me Sam there's nothing
- 39:52like doing live right do
- 39:55live
- 39:58oh he left us
- 40:01again while we wait for Josh to come
- 40:04back here he is I'm back you're
- 40:08back oh this is so
- 40:11weird there we go there we go the poll's
- 40:14open okay so we give you four different
- 40:16options in previous webinars you only
- 40:18had two if you're new to Apollo and you
- 40:20want to buy it or get a demo say yes to
- 40:22the first option if you're an existing
- 40:24customer and you want to upgrade your
- 40:25plan to get more from Apollo with our
- 40:27custom or Pro options say yes to the
- 40:29second option if you don't want to buy
- 40:31more Apollo but you need more training
- 40:33say yes to the third option I have
- 40:35created with my team something called
- 40:37Apollo Academy where I've made Deep dive
- 40:40videos showing you how to use every
- 40:42single component of the Apollo platform
- 40:44if you say yes to that I'm going to send
- 40:46you a link to Apollo Academy but if you
- 40:48love me you'll say yes to the first or
- 40:51second option people uh people around
- 40:53here care about those so I'm not going
- 40:55to run this for too too long I'm just
- 40:56going to leave this running for about a
- 40:59couple minutes and while we do that I'm
- 41:00going to take some Q&A but then guys
- 41:03don't leave because we're gonna go
- 41:05through the show me you know me methods
- 41:06with Sam and I'm going to give you an
- 41:08option to get in touch with her as well
- 41:10this is going to be super valuable I
- 41:12promise okay thanks for bearing with me
- 41:14guys it was uh that was pretty crazy so
- 41:16some questions for the Q&A um you're
- 41:19asking does it work without Outlook too
- 41:21yes Apollo meetings Works without
- 41:22Outlook so no worries there you can
- 41:25connect your outlook to the meetings you
- 41:26can connect your Google calendar to
- 41:28meetings as well uh Sam this one's for
- 41:30you really quickly and guys I'm just
- 41:32going to leave this Poll for another 30
- 41:34seconds so uh say yes if you you know if
- 41:36you got them smoke them say yes if you
- 41:37want it Sam for you how do you apply
- 41:39show me you know me to cold B Toc emails
- 41:43business to Consumer is that something
- 41:45you've ever seen oh yes um I think can
- 41:48be also a little bit challenging but
- 41:50just think about what the consumer cares
- 41:51about using that as your showman you
- 41:53know me can be easy so if they're
- 41:55thinking about what whatever that might
- 41:56be how do they get more Instagram
- 41:58followers or how to do XYZ for their
- 42:00small Mom and Pop Shop um let's say if
- 42:02there's a single single location or
- 42:04insurance or financial advisoring
- 42:07advisoring advisory um just think about
- 42:09what they care about cut through the
- 42:11noise just by talking about something
- 42:12that's specific to them your subject
- 42:14line if it's valuable to them right and
- 42:16it's not just the generic stuff will
- 42:18really help awesome all right guys I'm
- 42:21going to close this poll thank you for
- 42:23those of you who voted uh I'll run it
- 42:25again at the very end if we have time
- 42:27but Sam if you want to share your screen
- 42:29you can take us through some show me you
- 42:30know me examples uh right now let's get
- 42:33into it yeah let's talk about this
- 42:35really quick right so I think just a few
- 42:37things I want to mention um questions
- 42:40that I saw popping up so how do we
- 42:42decide who is worth our time for this
- 42:45and I would tell you this is where I
- 42:46would say don't think about quality or
- 42:49quantity again think about quality and
- 42:50go higher whoever you're currently
- 42:53reaching out to I challenge you reach
- 42:54out to one title of above that two
- 42:57titles above that most of us when we
- 42:59send emails we're comfortable reaching
- 43:01out to our boss's title right so maybe
- 43:03that's a manager senior manager whatever
- 43:05and then the skip level so perhaps the
- 43:07director but when we start to get a
- 43:09senior director SVP C we get super
- 43:12nervous don't get nervous the higher you
- 43:15go in title and the bigger the company
- 43:17the more spam they get every single day
- 43:20so 20 30 40 emails I'm not kidding every
- 43:24single day there's an executive we
- 43:25talked who says they spend 30 minutes of
- 43:27their day 30 this is a company called
- 43:29service now if you guys know them spends
- 43:3230 minutes of their day deleting crappy
- 43:34email in their inbox not even spam so
- 43:37easy way to stand out go higher you will
- 43:39stand out so much more effectively the
- 43:41second thing that I would just say is
- 43:42how do you scale this you don't scale
- 43:44this just put in the effort so take a
- 43:46look at this in the email that we've got
- 43:48here subject line day Phillips plus
- 43:50LinkedIn plus Sam sales makes absolutely
- 43:53no sense to you guys as it should not it
- 43:56only makes sense to the person that gets
- 43:58it so think about reading through this
- 44:00email talk about the things that we've
- 44:01talked about right transition challenge
- 44:03value proposition the close it's all
- 44:06there now as you look at this and as we
- 44:08think about the length right just like
- 44:11Josh talked about shorter versus better
- 44:13some of you guys asked what's the
- 44:14lavender score love the friends over at
- 44:16lavender what I would tell you is while
- 44:19everybody is saying shorter shorter
- 44:21shorter is better 150 words making sure
- 44:24you have a a good lavender score based
- 44:26on length write it as the letter F I
- 44:29never understand that one really long
- 44:31sentence one shorter sentence in a close
- 44:33what don't forget these are human beings
- 44:36that we're reaching out to first and
- 44:37foremost and the second thing is if
- 44:39they're getting 20 of your emails right
- 44:42they're getting 20 emails from people
- 44:44just like you every single day imagine
- 44:46if they said yes to really short emails
- 44:48imagine if you said hey saw you guys
- 44:50just had a series raise suspect that you
- 44:52are ready to increase hiring that's
- 44:54exactly what we do for your compe
- 44:55editors worth worth a chat no we already
- 44:59have a recruiter for that why should I
- 45:00talk to you when you think about that we
- 45:03have to get an executive to spend 13
- 45:06seconds 16 seconds to read our email and
- 45:09decide whether or not time with us is
- 45:11going to be well spent the only time
- 45:13that's going to happen is let's say
- 45:14their recruiter just quit let's say they
- 45:16have a bleeding gushing issue that needs
- 45:18to be resolved right now that's when
- 45:19they're going to respond but that's like
- 45:213% of our buyers so we have to think
- 45:24about teaching them something giving
- 45:25them some kind of hypop hypothesis
- 45:27showing them a challenge that they may
- 45:29not know how to solve may not even know
- 45:31that they have the longer so long as it
- 45:33is personalized and it cuts the meat in
- 45:35an efficient way really works let me
- 45:38give you an actual example of this check
- 45:41this out this is how I got a meeting
- 45:43with the chief Revenue
- 45:45officer a couple weeks ago um of a
- 45:48company that was recently acquired for
- 45:50over $2
- 45:52billion and the cool part about this
- 45:54email is that it took me eight it took
- 45:56me 18 minutes to get a response 18
- 45:59minutes now I've changed some of the
- 46:01names and things in here but check this
- 46:02out Hugh is Australian plus pipeline
- 46:04diving in quotation marks plus Sam sales
- 46:07H is Australian what is that from that's
- 46:08from a post that this cro recently made
- 46:12one of his buddies is Australian and the
- 46:14guy actually the cro said I hate the
- 46:16lack of personalization out there nobody
- 46:18seems to care about who I am and what I
- 46:20do and then his friend Hugh was like oh
- 46:23yeah let's talk about really bad show me
- 46:24youi and people just say hey I see
- 46:27you're from Australia want to buy your
- 46:28stuff no so I put that in to be funny
- 46:31pipeline diving was something that the
- 46:32person mentioned his post and might also
- 46:34be something that this cro mentioned in
- 46:36an article in a podcast and something
- 46:37where he was cited in his content and a
- 46:40comment in somebody else's this stuff is
- 46:41out there and then Sam sales he has
- 46:43absolutely no idea what the hell that is
- 46:45most likely right and so instead I add
- 46:48that on as my final thing he says I know
- 46:50who Hue is I know what pipeline diving
- 46:52is and it's in quotes right signaling
- 46:54that he's talked about it and then
- 46:55here's my start hey Josh hopeing my mix
- 46:58of facetiousness reue plus listening to
- 47:00your feedback on today's post were
- 47:02enough to earn me an open he got the
- 47:04open and when he responded he said it
- 47:05did and a meeting here's my EA to help
- 47:08us book Time Boom Hugh and actually go
- 47:10back so I'm I'm tying the Hue piece
- 47:13right I'm qualifying how I know this
- 47:14person particularly if the cro is
- 47:17friends with Hugh trusts Hugh's opinion
- 47:20what a great way for me to qualify
- 47:21myself and then I talked about his
- 47:23company I've known your company name for
- 47:25ever having met your CEO in the early
- 47:27days was recently part of your XYZ
- 47:29marketing campaign what I haven't been
- 47:30successful in yet is earning your
- 47:32company's business and how we can help
- 47:33your teams grow and flourish so I'm just
- 47:35being transparent and honest and using a
- 47:37little self-deprecating humor here and
- 47:39then I'm saying in thinking about your
- 47:41post and your upcoming board meeting
- 47:43which he mentioned two media things come
- 47:45to mind right you guys are going to roll
- 47:48your eyes and get tired and yawn just
- 47:50reading the rest of this email holy crap
- 47:52it's long but he read the whole thing
- 47:55and he became prepared for our call and
- 47:57I specifically identified how I can be
- 48:00of help and I also put a link or two
- 48:02which you probably can't see in here
- 48:03very well I put a link or two to say
- 48:05here's my content here's something that
- 48:07I talked about right I'm convincing him
- 48:09to give me
- 48:10time using this email not only did I get
- 48:13the cro of this company to take a
- 48:15meeting with me I also got the HUD of
- 48:17social media of Nike to respond to a
- 48:20meeting with me and then we also cut
- 48:22through the noise of the chief legal
- 48:23officer of Tory bir in an in an email
- 48:27just using that using some great show me
- 48:29you know me and getting a response from
- 48:31the chief legal officer of a 3.4 billion
- 48:33doll company in 10 hours don't focus on
- 48:37scale don't focus on quantity focus on
- 48:40quality go a little bit higher right
- 48:42Adam I'm with you huge ass paragraph and
- 48:44it's only the second part of the email
- 48:46there's more where that came from at the
- 48:47beginning right but man does this work I
- 48:51will tell you too just a quick note on
- 48:53my background it brok in 13 different
- 48:55sales records in my career I've never
- 48:56made a cool call don't yell at me you
- 48:59can really do this right in a quality
- 49:02way if you just go and think about
- 49:04things in a different way think about
- 49:06how low the bar is in sales right and
- 49:08you can really make impact and what I'm
- 49:10guessing Here's the final thing I'll
- 49:12I'll land on and then we'll look at one
- 49:14more email we're gonna have to jump to
- 49:16the we're gonna have to skip the last
- 49:17one Sam to make sure get another sorry
- 49:21no just the last point that I would make
- 49:22here is that if you get an open and if
- 49:25you get response here's what's going to
- 49:26happen a lot of those responses are
- 49:28going to be awesome personalization
- 49:30thanks for the not thanks for cutting
- 49:31through the noise we're not interested
- 49:33I'm not the right person now's not the
- 49:34right time a freaking usually isuse a
- 49:37different word amazing here's why
- 49:40because now instead of a yes or a no or
- 49:42rather being in a maybe we're getting to
- 49:43a yes or no we're opening the door we
- 49:46can now connect with them on LinkedIn we
- 49:47can respond please for the love of God
- 49:49respond and say thank you thank you so
- 49:51much for your response I really
- 49:52appreciate it then we can use language
- 49:54to ask who the right person is not to be
- 49:56presumptuous and be like who is instead
- 49:58right use some crafty language we can
- 50:00talk about that another time but there's
- 50:02so much that you can do just by getting
- 50:04response first and foremost lead with
- 50:06gratitude second connect on LinkedIn
- 50:08okay Josh I am done talking you guys
- 50:10probably thought that would never
- 50:11happened but here we are I love that no
- 50:14you're getting so much love right now
- 50:15Sam and everybody if you want more
- 50:18you're in luck because Sam runs a
- 50:21consulting company to help sales teams
- 50:24do this on your own
- 50:26I'm going to run this Poll for a couple
- 50:28minutes if you would like Sam to reach
- 50:29out to your team about resources and
- 50:32training say yes to that poll and if
- 50:34that wasn't enough Sam has on her
- 50:37website what are called Sam shorts there
- 50:39are short training videos that she has
- 50:41made she's offered a discount exclusive
- 50:43to Apollo
- 50:45users uh and I'm going to send you guys
- 50:47a link where you can do that right now
- 50:50we have 10 minutes left in the webinar
- 50:52while I run this poll I'm going to try
- 50:54and take your Q Q&A so I've seen a lot
- 50:57of questions about the scalability of
- 50:59this and Sam you've talked about it's
- 51:01not scalable and I just want to address
- 51:02that from my perspective yeah guys this
- 51:06is what you do for your highest value
- 51:08prospects where closing the deal doesn't
- 51:11just get you to quota it crushes your
- 51:13quota so I gave you an example of Jim
- 51:16Rose from Pilot that is a multi-billion
- 51:18dollar company if I was selling
- 51:20couponing and there's a one and a half
- 51:22million person customer base every
- 51:24single day and I Clos the deal with
- 51:27pilot I don't need volume right the fact
- 51:30is this is a method for big deals
- 51:32ideally or like these are just not just
- 51:35big deals these are your most important
- 51:37leads so I would recommend and Sam tell
- 51:40me what you think spend 80% of your time
- 51:43doing show me you know me on the 20% of
- 51:46your leads that are most valuable to you
- 51:49and then spend 20% of your time doing uh
- 51:53more automated personalized at skill
- 51:55emails like we covered in my last
- 51:56webinar with the remainder of your leads
- 51:58what what do you think about something
- 51:59like that Sam totally totally agree and
- 52:01the cool part is right when you spend
- 52:03that 80% on the top 20% your open rates
- 52:06and your replies are going to pop you're
- 52:08going to be able to put your feet up but
- 52:09don't that's when the stuff starts
- 52:10cooking is you really want to keep your
- 52:12foot on the gas right forget 3x and 4x
- 52:14and 5x of your pipeline keep going but
- 52:16you're going to see such an instant
- 52:18notice I bet if you guys apply this
- 52:20sometime this week oh my God you're all
- 52:23going to see responses you're going to
- 52:24see some win within the next week give
- 52:26it a
- 52:26shot love that okay I'm going to run the
- 52:28poll for 30 more seconds so if you guys
- 52:30want to get if you want Sam to get in
- 52:32touch with you say yes you only have 30
- 52:34seconds to do it and then because you've
- 52:36stayed to the end I have a super secret
- 52:37poll I'm going to run for something
- 52:39Apollo related get you access to
- 52:42something before anybody else so I need
- 52:44to save time for that so that's time
- 52:45clock uh clock is ticking okay um Sam
- 52:49Brian is asking what is your approach to
- 52:52video messaging the show me you know me
- 52:54approach
- 52:56um you guys for all the love that I have
- 52:58for every video platform out there I
- 52:59think it has a time and place much like
- 53:01the calendar like um and I would say
- 53:03don't use it in prospecting here's why
- 53:05what do you guys normally see when you
- 53:06see a video that comes through you see
- 53:08something like this somebody is
- 53:10literally holding up a sign and they're
- 53:11like Josh I made you a video what I
- 53:14think of when I see that is I feel like
- 53:15somebody's been kidnapped and I need to
- 53:17come up with Ransom money right like
- 53:19it's the weirdest thing so here's what I
- 53:21would say instead use your vide
- 53:23strategically when your proposals to
- 53:24connect send followups um and thank yous
- 53:27I love using video when I have a larger
- 53:29more complex proposal where I know I
- 53:31probably am not going to get um in front
- 53:33of the buying committee and I just want
- 53:34to say hey everybody I'm Sam Kenna
- 53:36here's what I'm doing blah blah blah let
- 53:37me run you 30 seconds or three minutes
- 53:39usually through the proposal and then I
- 53:41send that off especially when I can't
- 53:44get access to the buying committee which
- 53:45we always not all sometimes cannot um I
- 53:48want to make sure they see my enthusiasm
- 53:50my personality my hand gestures for
- 53:51better or worse um but otherwise I say
- 53:53no on video prospec
- 53:55um and I think people also feel guilted
- 53:57into responding um and then they know
- 54:00that when they when they look at your
- 54:02video um that you're going to see
- 54:04exactly how much time they spend on it
- 54:05so not my jam stick to text use video
- 54:08else place other places elsewhere I El
- 54:12Place new word El Place what's up today
- 54:14okay we're gonna continue taking your
- 54:16questions but real quick I'm running
- 54:17this poll guys we are launching a super
- 54:20secret new AI assisted home feature
- 54:23which basically what this is going to do
- 54:24it's going to use a to help you work
- 54:26through your tasks from your sequences I
- 54:28need people to participate in the beta
- 54:30of that this is not you cannot find this
- 54:32anywhere else this is only for people
- 54:33who came to the webinar if you're
- 54:35interested in participating in the beta
- 54:37uh there's no cost just say yes and our
- 54:39team will get in touch with you if
- 54:40you're the right fit so I'm just going
- 54:42to run that Poll for another minute or
- 54:43two and we're g to take a couple more
- 54:45questions Joel is asking can you
- 54:47retarget a list for people who've opened
- 54:49and viewed your message multiple times
- 54:50but have not yet replied you can Joel uh
- 54:53Apollo lets you do that using a feature
- 54:55called plays if you go to the Apollo
- 54:57website there's a webinar section we ran
- 54:59a webinar on plays also if you go to
- 55:03apollo.io academy I have videos on how
- 55:05to build plays in the Apollo Academy so
- 55:09um if you want more info on that find me
- 55:11on LinkedIn you guys can connect with me
- 55:13there um okay I am gonna run a couple
- 55:16more uh questions by you Sam that's um
- 55:20why do you use pluses in your subject
- 55:22line this is from Harry does it not work
- 55:26I think it's kind of funky so my my
- 55:27subject clients will always be a little
- 55:29funky um I think when it just sets you
- 55:31apart it's not what people typically get
- 55:34I also use uh hyphens at the end so I
- 55:36might say today's meeting thank you
- 55:38something like that and I use space
- 55:39hyphen just a little funkiness to set
- 55:41you apart one more thing I will tell you
- 55:44let's say this is the ninth email you've
- 55:46sent someone right you're going through
- 55:47your sequence all is great and let's say
- 55:49all of a sudden a awesome call to action
- 55:51comes up you guys are hosting a really
- 55:53cool webinar you want to invite them to
- 55:54an executive Round Table you're hosting
- 55:56an executive dinner or something at a
- 55:58football game or something like that
- 55:59that you want to invite them to you're
- 56:00going to be in their City think about
- 56:02what you can do before the re and put
- 56:05your call to action your compelling
- 56:06issue before the re so you might say in
- 56:09Atlanta this week not sweet you know
- 56:11this Thursday something like that put
- 56:13that before the re it looks really weird
- 56:15holy hell will you get an open and
- 56:17probably a lot of
- 56:18responses I love that um for those of
- 56:21you who are not connected with me on
- 56:23LinkedIn yet I'm my LinkedIn is on the
- 56:25bottom as a ticker I post about every
- 56:26webinar and every new course we make on
- 56:28Apollo Academy so you guys can find me
- 56:30there um okay I've had a lot of
- 56:33questions Sam about so we talked about
- 56:35the first email but they want to know
- 56:37what do you do next what's the follow-up
- 56:39Cadence what happens then okay here is
- 56:41my mega mega trick for you so number one
- 56:43do your research today carve out the
- 56:45rest of your time and do it today and
- 56:47then send out your your email to your
- 56:50high futin prospects Thursday and Friday
- 56:52when does the second email come out
- 56:54right you're probably not going to get a
- 56:56response to that first one but here's
- 56:57what you're going to get for the second
- 56:58one send your second email less than 48
- 57:01hours after your first one that means I
- 57:03have to work on the weekend no it
- 57:05doesn't that's what you have sequences
- 57:06for so just set it to go out less than
- 57:0848 hours 44 hours 43 and a half hours
- 57:11and then that second email should look
- 57:13like this it should have no new
- 57:15information in it you already hopefully
- 57:18killed it in your first email so if you
- 57:20do a reply all do it with the same
- 57:23subject line less than 48 in it after
- 57:25the first one and just say hey Josh
- 57:27wanted to pop in and see if you'd had a
- 57:29chance to read my email below I would
- 57:31still be grateful for appreciative of
- 57:34the chance to chat with you about how
- 57:36Sam sales can support apollo.io if
- 57:38you're up for a chat let me know super
- 57:40short there's your 150 words friends
- 57:42that would get a good lavender score use
- 57:44that super short super simple and here's
- 57:46what you're here's what you're going to
- 57:47do one you're giving them no new
- 57:49information because you already sold
- 57:50them the first time they read your email
- 57:52they just got busy and distracted so
- 57:54let's hope that that's the case second
- 57:55email comes out when on the weekends
- 57:57when are they working on the weekends
- 57:59Executives work an average of almost
- 58:01seven hours it blows on the weekends so
- 58:04check that 41.6 yes Sam hours um use
- 58:08that right and then just send them that
- 58:10quick short note following up what I
- 58:12think is also just really cool I'm going
- 58:14to give you one more side practice here
- 58:16as you guys work in your LinkedIn uh
- 58:19connection requests which to me come
- 58:20around the fourth touch use in your
- 58:23connection request one make sure there's
- 58:25a custom script in there but two use a
- 58:27word for your really really top tier
- 58:29people that you may not normally work
- 58:31use so maybe you say hey if you're ever
- 58:33up for a chat for your top tier people
- 58:35use the word conversation instead and
- 58:37here's the cool bonus on the weekends
- 58:39yes this is where you do have to work
- 58:40for a wipping hour on the weekends pull
- 58:42up your LinkedIn DM do a search for the
- 58:45word conversation pull up any message
- 58:47that you've sent back and forth with an
- 58:49executive that you really care about and
- 58:50use that as a touch point to nurture
- 58:53them send them an article send them
- 58:55something tell them why you think it's
- 58:56valuable and just say I hope it is for
- 58:58you too and that's it the unbelievable
- 59:00amount of times that you will get a
- 59:01dialogue going with a really valuable
- 59:03executive on the weekends by
- 59:05shortcutting your way to those
- 59:07conversations and nurturing them is
- 59:09unbelievable if you just look for what
- 59:11we call Bubble hunting look for the
- 59:13green dots next to the person's face see
- 59:15who's online right now and hit them up
- 59:16when they're not distracted and when
- 59:18they're
- 59:19online that was amazing and we are out
- 59:23of time everybody so thank you all so
- 59:25much for coming uh we really appreciate
- 59:28it we've gone right to the top of the
- 59:29hour we have more webinars coming so if
- 59:33you like them uh you're in luck because
- 59:35we'll keep doing them as always thank
- 59:37you so much for your time for spending
- 59:39an hour with us Sam thank you for
- 59:41sharing your wisdom with us from the
- 59:43bottom of my heart I appreciate you all
- 59:45and we will be seeing you next time
- 59:47thanks everybody thank you thanks
- 59:53guys
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