How to Organize a Persuasive Speech or Presentation — Transcript
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- 0:00Hello again, friends. I'm Alex Lion and
- 0:02this is Communication Coach. In an
- 0:04earlier video, we talked about how to
- 0:06organize a presentation, intro, body,
- 0:09conclusion. And in the body, we talked
- 0:11about ways to structure your main
- 0:14points. Some of the ways were more
- 0:15informative, like the chronological
- 0:17order or the topical order. I mentioned
- 0:20in that video the persuasive style of
- 0:23organizing your main points, problem,
- 0:24solution, benefit. And it deserves a
- 0:27little bit of unpacking. So, let's go to
- 0:30the computer and look at some examples
- 0:32to get a better handle on this.
- 0:38I'd like to start by comparing
- 0:40persuasive presentations to informative
- 0:42presentations, which are meant to share
- 0:44information or teach the listeners
- 0:47something. If you've ever sat in on a
- 0:49how-to speech or watched a how-to video,
- 0:51well, that's informative. In contrast,
- 0:53persuasive presentations are meant to
- 0:55convince listeners. You're literally
- 0:57trying to move their opinion or even
- 1:00their behavior from point A to point B.
- 1:03So, at the end of your presentation, you
- 1:04want your listeners to do something or
- 1:06think something differently than what
- 1:08they did at the beginning.
- 1:10They're organized much the same way as
- 1:11informative presentations. They have an
- 1:13introduction, a body, and conclusion,
- 1:16but there are some changes in each of
- 1:17these sections. In the introduction,
- 1:19you're going to have your four essential
- 1:20main points that I've talked about in
- 1:22other videos.
- 1:23Just like an informative presentation,
- 1:25you have an attention grabber, where you
- 1:26start off with that nice story or a few
- 1:28statistics or some rhetorical questions
- 1:30to get the ball rolling.
- 1:32Number two, you tell your audience
- 1:34directly what's in it for them. Tell
- 1:35them why they should listen to your
- 1:37message, what they're going to gain by
- 1:39listening to it by the end. The third
- 1:41and the fourth point are different than
- 1:42they are in an informative presentation.
- 1:44The main point of the thesis in an
- 1:46informative presentation is going to be
- 1:48pretty straightforward about what you're
- 1:49saying. In a persuasive presentation,
- 1:51you're going to be straightforward, but
- 1:52you're going to give an argument. You're
- 1:54not just going to tell them something or
- 1:55teach them something. You want to show
- 1:58them that they have a need, that there
- 2:00is a problem that they may or may not be
- 2:02aware of that you are going to clarify
- 2:05so that later in the presentation when
- 2:06you get to your solution, they're much
- 2:08more willing to be persuaded by it. So,
- 2:11the main point or the thesis, you don't
- 2:13really tell them much about the
- 2:14solution. For example, you can if you're
- 2:15talking about retirement planning,
- 2:17this thesis would sound something like
- 2:19this. By the time most people get to
- 2:21retirement age, they do not have the
- 2:23money to support themselves.
- 2:26Now, there there's there's an argument
- 2:28that you're going to then carve out and
- 2:30explain in detail in the body of the
- 2:32presentation.
- 2:33Similarly, the previous statement is
- 2:35going to emphasize the problem but just
- 2:38imply a solution. So, the previous
- 2:40statement might sound like this. We're
- 2:41going to talk about some of the key
- 2:43problems around retirement planning and
- 2:46then we'll talk about something you can
- 2:48do about it.
- 2:49So, there are something you can do about
- 2:51it of the preview but you're only
- 2:52implying the solution. So, again in the
- 2:54preview, you emphasize the problem half
- 2:56of the equation. In the body points,
- 2:59just like an informative presentation,
- 3:00you're going to have three main body
- 3:02points with the relevant details below
- 3:04each of those. Instead of just having a
- 3:06first, second, third, however, in a
- 3:08persuasive presentation, you have to
- 3:10organize it this way.
- 3:12Problem, solution, benefit. I cannot
- 3:16emphasize this enough. If you've ever
- 3:18been convinced by any commercial or
- 3:20marketing or presentation, it is very
- 3:23likely that it had these three main
- 3:25elements and very likely in this order.
- 3:27For example, if you're watching a
- 3:29commercial on television about
- 3:31mattresses, I almost guarantee they're
- 3:33going to talk about the problem first.
- 3:35They're going to show someone that can't
- 3:36sleep on their lousy old mattress.
- 3:39They're exhausted at work and they're
- 3:41really be clear on the problem. Then
- 3:43they'll tell you about their mattress,
- 3:45their solution, and then by the end,
- 3:47they'll show somebody sleeping easy on
- 3:49that brand new mattress. Problem,
- 3:51solution, benefits. This is the classic
- 3:54foundation, the persuasive arc that
- 3:56you're going to see in almost all
- 3:58persuasive presentations.
- 4:00And each of these sections will be
- 4:01developed with all the relevant
- 4:03supporting details to round them out.
- 4:06In terms of an example, let's talk about
- 4:08retirement planning. Let's stick with
- 4:09that one. The problem, according to this
- 4:12presentation, you might say for example
- 4:14that most people are retiring poor. By
- 4:17the time they get to the retirement age
- 4:19that they have hoped for, they are just
- 4:21not financially prepared to support
- 4:23themselves very well. And you would hit
- 4:26this very hard. This is the key. Once
- 4:29you've really convinced them that
- 4:31there's a problem, they'll be
- 4:33more ready to listen to your solution.
- 4:35In this case, we're recommending that
- 4:36they begin
- 4:37an individual retirement account,
- 4:39sometimes called an IRA, or if their
- 4:41employer has one, you're recommending
- 4:43that they start a 401k. And maybe the
- 4:45employer even matches. And then in the
- 4:46solution, you describe what it would
- 4:48take to get that rolling. And then the
- 4:51last step to really seal the deal, you
- 4:53emphasize the benefits. So, financial
- 4:55freedom and independence and
- 4:57in all of these, you would give
- 4:58statistics and stories and quotations in
- 5:00whatever order made sense,
- 5:02so they were all fully supported. And if
- 5:05you can put these three points together,
- 5:08it's very likely that your listeners
- 5:10will care much more about your solution
- 5:13and the benefits. If, however, you leave
- 5:15off the problem and just say, "Hey, I
- 5:17want to sell you a mattress." Or "Why
- 5:19don't you sign up for our 401k program
- 5:21here at work?"
- 5:23The first thing they're going to ask
- 5:24themselves is, "Why?" And so, if you
- 5:26miss the problem, if you don't hit this
- 5:28hard enough, they're probably not going
- 5:29to be very motivated to move from point
- 5:32A to point B in their beliefs and or
- 5:35their behaviors.
- 5:37In terms of proportion and
- 5:40time and energy devoted to this, you
- 5:42really want to emphasize that problem.
- 5:44On an outline, you might see much more
- 5:45support for the problem section of the
- 5:48presentation and then you're going to of
- 5:50course be thorough and detailed about
- 5:52the solution and the benefit, but you
- 5:53really have to hit that problem hard.
- 5:55When you get to the conclusion, it's
- 5:56very similar to an informative
- 5:58presentation. You signal the end. You
- 5:59say in conclusion or in summary or
- 6:02whatever your favorite way of
- 6:04of bringing it in for a landing is. Then
- 6:06you have your key takeaway where you
- 6:08circle back to the thesis, that main
- 6:11message you've been driving through the
- 6:12whole presentation. And the third step
- 6:14is a little different than an
- 6:15informative conclusion in that you have
- 6:17to have a call to action. If this is a
- 6:19persuasive presentation, then you have
- 6:21to ask them to take that first key step
- 6:25that in the solution that you've
- 6:26outlined above. So let's say you're
- 6:27going to ask them to sign up for the
- 6:29company
- 6:30401k. Well, now you pull out the forms
- 6:32it takes to begin that process and you
- 6:34say, "Look, you can I want you to start
- 6:36it right now while we're here. Put your
- 6:37name on there, put your address on
- 6:38there, and let's start this paperwork."
- 6:40Now, you don't want to be manipulative.
- 6:42I'm a big believer in ethics and
- 6:44communication. You don't want to
- 6:45pressure people unnecessarily, but a lot
- 6:47of times they they're like, "Yeah, let's
- 6:48do this. I I'm ready to start. I'm
- 6:50convinced. I want to start my own
- 6:52retirement account. How do I do it?"
- 6:54Well, this is where you give them the
- 6:55opportunity to do it by putting in the
- 6:57clear call to action, that first step.
- 7:00And then the clincher is where you
- 7:01finish with a nice story or a statistic
- 7:03or something that echoes the attention
- 7:06grabber you did in the opening of the
- 7:08presentation. So, that's how you
- 7:10organize a persuasive presentation. It
- 7:13builds on the same basic foundation of
- 7:15an informative presentation, but it adds
- 7:16a lot of other steps, especially that
- 7:19problem solution benefit arc in terms of
- 7:21how you organize the main points. So, I
- 7:23would love to hear your comments and
- 7:24your questions below. What are your
- 7:26thoughts on how to best put together a
- 7:28persuasive presentation? What are some
- 7:30other elements that I may have left out?
- 7:31I'd love to hear what you've got to say
- 7:33below. So, thanks. God bless and I'll
- 7:35see you next time.
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