6,337 Cold Emails Reveal What Actually Gets Replies (And Backlinks) — Transcript
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- 0:00This is a link building question SEOs
- 0:02keep asking. What makes link outreach
- 0:05actually get replies? This was asked on
- 0:07the SEO growth subreddit. I'm going to
- 0:09share the answers, then I'm going to
- 0:10share this magnificent post in the
- 0:13public relations subreddit with really
- 0:16solid advice about how to do cold
- 0:18outreach. And this is coming from
- 0:19somebody I do a lot of cold outreach.
- 0:21I'm very good at it. And seeing such a
- 0:24great breakdown, I just I feel like I
- 0:26have to share this. So this original
- 0:28post is this person asking, "I've been
- 0:29thinking about how much the outreach
- 0:32message itself affects response rates. A
- 0:34highly relevant prospect can still
- 0:36ignore an email if the message feels too
- 0:38generic or immediately looks like a mass
- 0:41outreach campaign." By the way, tell me
- 0:43if you have been through this cuz I'm
- 0:44sure that you have. Every even me and
- 0:47I'm legendary at messaging people, have
- 0:49still been like, "Why is this person
- 0:51ignoring me?" It can be very
- 0:52frustrating. In my own outreach, I found
- 0:54that keeping the message focused and
- 0:56making it clear why I'm reaching out
- 0:58seems to matter more than making it
- 1:00overly detailed. For those doing
- 1:02outreach regularly, what tends to make
- 1:04the biggest difference for you?
- 1:05Personalization, the offer itself, the
- 1:08subject line, or the follow-up process?
- 1:10Top comment on this, one of the best
- 1:12ways to build links is to provide
- 1:14something of value to the people you
- 1:16contact. Think about helping them, not
- 1:19asking for favors. If you want to link
- 1:21from somebody, send them a blog that
- 1:23doesn't just link back to your site.
- 1:25Instead, ensure it provides useful
- 1:28content and SEO value to their site as
- 1:30well. Too many dead links hurt a site,
- 1:33so if you find one and I have content on
- 1:35your own to serve as a relevant source
- 1:37of information, you can do more than ask
- 1:40them to insert your link. You can let
- 1:42them know about the problems that 404
- 1:44links can cause them, then pitch a
- 1:46replacement link as a solution that
- 1:48happens to also benefit you. The thing
- 1:50is you really need to, I would say
- 1:52personalization is incredibly important
- 1:54because people with websites or people
- 1:57who are somewhat popular, they get
- 1:59backlink requests all day. You need to
- 2:02stand out. This is another commenter who
- 2:04said, "Subject line gets it opened, but
- 2:06the first sentence decides if they keep
- 2:09reading." That's really true. If that
- 2:10first line is clearly a template, then
- 2:13it is over. That is true as well. The
- 2:15rest barely matters at that point. So
- 2:17many people use these terrible obvious
- 2:20templates. If you want to get your
- 2:22emails ignored, use a template. If you
- 2:23don't want to get your emails ignored,
- 2:25highly personalize your requests to the
- 2:28person you're messaging. I also like
- 2:30this angle of saying how detrimental 404
- 2:34links can be, even if you have to
- 2:36exaggerate it a little bit. The last
- 2:38comment on this before I share the
- 2:39public relations post is, "I would rank
- 2:42them like this. Offer is number one,
- 2:44then recipient, then timing, then copy.
- 2:47The fastest diagnostic is to group your
- 2:50last 50 emails by ask and count positive
- 2:53replies, not total replies. Can I write
- 2:56a guest post and please add my link are
- 2:59weak asks. A correction, missing source,
- 3:02or original statistic gives the editor a
- 3:04reason to act now. Improve the offer
- 3:07before the subject line." Somebody
- 3:09actually sent me an article that they
- 3:11wrote, and I didn't even respond to
- 3:13them, but I'm going to cover the article
- 3:14on this podcast and share the article or
- 3:17or I'm going to make I'm going to make a
- 3:18social media video about it. But the
- 3:20person wrote a very personalized message
- 3:23to me, and that actually caused me to
- 3:26click on their link in the email because
- 3:28it felt very relevant and appropriate to
- 3:31me. Person figured out what I like, what
- 3:33I don't like, sent me a catered email,
- 3:36and I said, "Okay, this is useful. I
- 3:38want I'm going to check this out." This
- 3:40is the public relations post that is so
- 3:42good. It's called "Breaking into PR is
- 3:45mostly a cold outreach problem. I
- 3:47analyzed the results from 6,337
- 3:50cold emails." Posting this because how
- 3:53do I break into PR with no contacts
- 3:55comes up here every week. The honest
- 3:58answer is it's a cold outreach problem
- 4:00more than a CV problem. The biggest one
- 4:03was length. All right, listen carefully.
- 4:05Please listen carefully. Emails under
- 4:07100 words got an 11.9%
- 4:11reply rate. The 100 to 200 word ones
- 4:14dropped to 1.9%
- 4:17and anything past 200 words was
- 4:20basically dead at 0.3%.
- 4:23That's about a sixfold gap and it runs
- 4:26against the usual advice to write a
- 4:29proper considered email. The short ones
- 4:31read like a real person asking one clear
- 4:34thing. The long ones read like someone
- 4:37trying to prove they belong. 60 to 90
- 4:40words was the sweet spot. I'm going to
- 4:41say this again. I'm going to make a
- 4:43short-form video about this. This is
- 4:44huge. Cold outreach emails under 100
- 4:47words got an 11.9% reply rate. 100 to
- 4:51200 words drops all the way down to only
- 4:551.9% reply rate. Anything past 200 words
- 4:59gets a 0.3%
- 5:02reply rate. If you receive a lot of
- 5:04emails, you know that's true. Your eyes
- 5:06glaze over if you see a lot of words. If
- 5:09you see one or two or three sentences,
- 5:12you're a lot more likely to read it.
- 5:13Next paragraph in this, who you email
- 5:15mattered nearly as much. People wrote to
- 5:18directors and managers roughly three
- 5:20times more often than CEOs and founders
- 5:23and that's the right instinct. At any
- 5:25firm past about 50 people, the team lead
- 5:28is the one who actually decides, not the
- 5:30CEO and not a generic press or careers
- 5:33inbox. One reply from the person who'd
- 5:36actually manage you beats 50
- 5:37applications into a portal. Going
- 5:40straight to the top only really paid off
- 5:42at very small shops. That makes sense
- 5:45too because the small organizations are
- 5:47the ones where the CEOs will be more
- 5:50involved in the day-to-day. But if it's
- 5:53big, yeah, you got to reach the right
- 5:55person. Follow-ups did more than I
- 5:57expected. A single email landed about
- 6:004.1% replies. Adding one follow-up a few
- 6:04days later took it to 6.6%."
- 6:07Oh, wow. So, roughly a 60% lift from one
- 6:10extra message. "Two follow-ups was the
- 6:13ceiling at around 6.9%."
- 6:16Anything past that just irritates
- 6:18people, which any PR person who's been
- 6:20chased by a bad sales rep already knows.
- 6:23God, this is such a good post. Two
- 6:26follow-ups is the max. "Subject lines
- 6:29went the same as bodies. Shorter one,
- 6:31under 30 characters, opened at 83.7%
- 6:35against 69.5%
- 6:38for the long ones. And putting an actual
- 6:40number in the subject was the single
- 6:42best performing pattern we saw. Timing,
- 6:45for what it's worth, favored Tuesday and
- 6:47Wednesday over Thursday and Friday." Oh
- 6:50my gosh, so tactical, so actionable.
- 6:53Something else, you know, if if you're
- 6:54subscribed to my newsletter, you'll
- 6:56notice that I always do one-word subject
- 6:58lines. I learned from the first 1,000
- 7:01newsletter, which is about AB testing.
- 7:03This person AB tested a bunch of
- 7:05different tactics for newsletter
- 7:07marketing. And he found that one-word
- 7:10subject lines worked the best. And so, I
- 7:12adopted that, and I AB tested against
- 7:15one-word, two-word, three-word. One-word
- 7:16subject lines worked the best for my
- 7:19newsletter. "Keep your subject lines for
- 7:21cold outreach short." I'll also
- 7:23recommend using a tool like Yesware to
- 7:26track email opens. Yesware is the one
- 7:28that I use, so for me it's top of mind,
- 7:30but there's plenty of great ones to see
- 7:32if people are actually opening your
- 7:34email. Something else that Yesware shows
- 7:36is really cool, and other ones I'm sure
- 7:38can do this, too, is if somebody
- 7:40forwards my email to somebody, I'll see
- 7:42it opened in all these different places
- 7:45by all these different devices. And I
- 7:47know if I hit a chord with the language
- 7:50that I used. But it's also useful
- 7:52because if somebody isn't opening your
- 7:55email, maybe it's going to spam or
- 7:56something, then you know to try them on
- 7:58a different platform. You know, before
- 8:00recommendation algorithms became so
- 8:03popular, so the recommendation
- 8:04algorithms on YouTube or TikTok or
- 8:06Instagram, I still went viral many, many
- 8:09times. And it was always from making the
- 8:13right pitch in the right place. Well,
- 8:15the right content and then pitching it
- 8:17correctly in the right place. So, in
- 8:192012, me and some friends, we walked
- 8:22another friend through Times Square with
- 8:25fake bodyguards and fake paparazzi, and
- 8:28we wanted to see if we can could
- 8:29convince everybody in Times Square that
- 8:31my friend was an A-list movie star
- 8:33celebrity. This format got super copied
- 8:36after us. Lots of people did this after
- 8:39us. We made the video, and then it was
- 8:41up to me to make it go viral. I said
- 8:42like, how to make this go viral? I
- 8:44shared it on the video subreddit back in
- 8:472012, which is one of the biggest
- 8:49subreddits on Reddit, videos just our
- 8:51videos. And I said something like, my
- 8:53friend walked through Times Square with
- 8:56fake bodyguards and fake paparazzi to
- 8:58see if we could convince people that he
- 9:01was an A-list celebrity. This is what
- 9:03happened. I didn't say that I was
- 9:05involved because I didn't want it to
- 9:06look like first-party promotion, which
- 9:09does a lot worse. I said, my friend, and
- 9:11I gave this interesting story, and I put
- 9:13it in the right place. And then the
- 9:14video, it was crazy. A couple hours
- 9:17later, it was number one on all of
- 9:18Reddit. This was when the front page of
- 9:20Reddit really meant something. And then,
- 9:222 days later, we were going on all the
- 9:24biggest TV shows in the United States.
- 9:27Good Morning America, we were literally
- 9:29on stage at Good Morning America. We're
- 9:31flown out to Los Angeles to be on the
- 9:33Jeff Probst Show. We were on The Today
- 9:35Show, being written up everywhere.
- 9:37Another time, me and a different friend,
- 9:40we did this crazy driving stunt in New
- 9:43York City. We made a video about it, we
- 9:45put it on YouTube, and it sat dormant
- 9:47for a year. Crazy stunt, crazy thing
- 9:49that we did, sat dormant for a year,
- 9:51nobody paid attention to it. Then a year
- 9:54later, this was in 2009 or 2010, I
- 9:57learned, "Oh, if you do something
- 9:58noteworthy, you got to tell the right
- 10:00people." because there were no
- 10:01recommendation algorithms at the time.
- 10:03So, I emailed journalists and tip
- 10:06inboxes at auto blogs, and we got picked
- 10:09up by Jalopnik, which was the biggest
- 10:11and might still be the biggest auto
- 10:13blog, and we were put on their front
- 10:15page for 2 days because what we did was
- 10:17noteworthy. I pitched it in a short way
- 10:20to the right people, and then we went
- 10:21viral from that. Or, this was in 2018,
- 10:24me and my friends, we made the first
- 10:26video game in blockchain. I've talked
- 10:27about that before. We created this genre
- 10:29called play-to-earn in blockchain.
- 10:31Nobody had made video games in
- 10:32blockchain up until this point, a real
- 10:34video game. How was I going to spread
- 10:36this? I found the top crypto YouTube
- 10:39channels, and I sent them short emails
- 10:42explaining what we did, very short, and
- 10:44one of the biggest crypto ones picked it
- 10:47up because people need interest and
- 10:49content to share, to report on, and if
- 10:52you make it easy for them to share it
- 10:54and report on it, and you share why it
- 10:56is relevant to them specifically, they
- 10:59will pick it up. You know, I do this
- 11:01show every day, I make videos for social
- 11:03media every day, I constantly need good
- 11:06content to share. People send me
- 11:08templates, I ignore them. People send me
- 11:10long emails, I ignore them. Somebody
- 11:12sends me a one to two sentence email
- 11:14with a link to something I'm interested
- 11:16in, very good chance I'm going to pick
- 11:18that up and share it. The same principle
- 11:20applies. And you can get tons of
- 11:22backlinks without just recommending to
- 11:25fix broken links, and this is a
- 11:26replacement, or we built a generic
- 11:29mortgage calculator, something like
- 11:31that. You can do cool things, find the
- 11:33people who care about it, send them
- 11:35really concise emails with a concise
- 11:37subject line, personalize emails, and
- 11:40have cold outreach work for you. And
- 11:43that, ladies and gentlemen, is
- 11:45everything that I got for you on this
- 11:48episode of the show. I've been doing
- 11:51marketing and SEO for a long time. I
- 11:53found the method of search engine
- 11:55optimization that works best for sales,
- 11:58for getting paying customers, users,
- 12:00warm leads calling you on the phone, and
- 12:01I share that in my SEO course compact
- 12:04keywords compactkeywords.com.
- 12:06It's about how to find the keywords
- 12:07people are searching when they are
- 12:08looking to convert, when they are
- 12:10looking to buy, to use something, to
- 12:12make a call. How to target these
- 12:14keywords with conversion-based SEO
- 12:16landing pages, how to structure your
- 12:18site for these pages, 2 hours on tons of
- 12:20different link-building methods,
- 12:21examples in every niche, templates,
- 12:24Google Docs, Google Sheets, step-by-step
- 12:26breakdowns, everything is in this
- 12:28course. You're going to love it. Again,
- 12:30that's at compactkeywords.com, and this
- 12:32is episode 1,194
- 12:35of the podcast. 1,194
- 12:39days in a row doing this show. I'm
- 12:40recording this on a lovely Saturday
- 12:43morning here in New York City, my home,
- 12:46with a mostly finished cup of coffee,
- 12:48and I'm feeling so good. I hope you're
- 12:50feeling good, too. If you watch this on
- 12:51YouTube, thank you so much for watching.
- 12:53If you listened on Spotify or Apple
- 12:55Podcasts, thank you so much for
- 12:57listening, and I will talk to you again
- 12:59tomorrow. Bye now.
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