10 TOEFL Email Topics and Examples — Transcript
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- 0:00Many TOEFL candidates lose points in the
- 0:02email task, not because they can't write
- 0:05in English, but because they are not
- 0:07prepared for the topics that come up.
- 0:10Here's the truth. Certain themes often
- 0:13come up again and again. If you prepare
- 0:15vocabulary, grammar structures, and key
- 0:18ideas for these topics in advance, you
- 0:21can be in a much stronger position on
- 0:23test day. We've helped thousands of
- 0:26students prepare this way through our
- 0:28TOEFL packages. With clear steps and
- 0:31strategic preparation, they've turned
- 0:33confusion into confidence. In this
- 0:36video, we'll go through 10 TOEFL email
- 0:38task topics. You will get useful
- 0:40vocabulary and sample phrases for each
- 0:43one. By the end, you'll know what to
- 0:45prepare for the email task. Let's get
- 0:48started. Topic number one is reporting a
- 0:51problem with campus facilities. In this
- 0:54type of task, you are given a scenario
- 0:56involving a problem at your university.
- 0:59Your goal is to communicate the issue
- 1:01clearly and request action. That purpose
- 1:05might be reporting a broken piece of
- 1:07equipment or describing a safety
- 1:09concern. It might also be explaining a
- 1:12maintenance issue that is affecting your
- 1:15daily life. To write a high-scoring
- 1:17response, you need to describe the
- 1:20problem in specific detail. You should
- 1:23also explain how it is affecting you and
- 1:26request that something be done about it.
- 1:29Vague descriptions like, "There is a
- 1:31problem." will not score well. Instead,
- 1:34use precise language that shows you can
- 1:37communicate clearly in a formal and
- 1:40polished way. Here is some useful
- 1:42vocabulary for this topic. Maintenance
- 1:45issue, affecting my ability to, I am
- 1:48writing to report, I would appreciate it
- 1:51if this could be resolved as soon as
- 1:53possible. For grammar, practice using
- 1:56present perfect tenses to explain how
- 1:59long the problem has been going on. For
- 2:01example, you can write, "The heating
- 2:04system in my apartment has not been
- 2:06working properly for the past week, and
- 2:09the temperature inside has been
- 2:11consistently cold despite my attempts to
- 2:14adjust the thermostat." You can also use
- 2:17result clauses to explain the impact of
- 2:20the problem. For example, "The situation
- 2:23has made it difficult to study
- 2:25effectively as the noise from the
- 2:27construction work starts early in the
- 2:29morning and lasts throughout the day."
- 2:32Strong responses explain both the
- 2:35problem and its consequences clearly and
- 2:38in detail. The second topic is making a
- 2:42request or asking for permission. In
- 2:45these tasks, you need to explain a
- 2:47situation that requires special
- 2:50approval. You must make your request
- 2:52clearly and give a good reason for it.
- 2:55That purpose might be asking to
- 2:57reschedule an exam or requesting an
- 3:00extension on an assignment. It might
- 3:03also be asking to be absent from a class
- 3:06for an important reason. High-scoring
- 3:08responses in this category are polite,
- 3:11well-structured, and specific. Explain
- 3:14your situation clearly. Additionally,
- 3:17show that you understand you are asking
- 3:20for something that requires the other
- 3:22person's consideration. Here is some key
- 3:25vocabulary for this topic. "I am writing
- 3:28to request. I would be grateful if you
- 3:31could. Due to I would like to ask
- 3:34whether it would be possible to. I look
- 3:36forward to your response." For grammar,
- 3:39practice using modal verbs to make
- 3:41polite requests. For example, "I would
- 3:45be very grateful if you could allow me
- 3:47to submit the assignment one day late as
- 3:50I have been dealing with a medical this
- 3:52week. You can also use conditional
- 3:54sentences to show flexibility. You could
- 3:57write, "If it would be possible to
- 4:00reschedule the exam, I would be happy to
- 4:02take it at whatever time works best for
- 4:05you."
- 4:05These structures help your email sound
- 4:08polished and courteous. Topic number
- 4:10three is complaining about a service or
- 4:13situation. These tasks ask you to
- 4:16express dissatisfaction with something,
- 4:19explain why it is a problem, and request
- 4:22that action be taken. For example, you
- 4:25might be writing to complain about noise
- 4:28in a dormitory, or to report poor
- 4:30service at a campus department. In other
- 4:33cases, you could be expressing concern
- 4:36about a policy that is affecting
- 4:38students. The key to scoring well on
- 4:41this topic is to be clear and polished.
- 4:45Do not sound rude or emotional. Instead,
- 4:48present the facts, explain the impact,
- 4:51and request a specific solution. Here is
- 4:54some useful vocabulary for this topic.
- 4:57I'm writing to express my concern about
- 5:00this situation has been affecting. I
- 5:03would like to request. I hope this
- 5:06matter can be resolved promptly.
- 5:08For grammar, use past and present tenses
- 5:11together to show that the problem has
- 5:14been ongoing. You can write, "The noise
- 5:17from the nearby renovation work began
- 5:19two weeks ago and has continued every
- 5:22morning since then, making it difficult
- 5:25to sleep before my early classes." You
- 5:28can also use contrast structures to keep
- 5:31a balanced tone.
- 5:32While I understand that construction
- 5:35projects are sometimes necessary, I
- 5:38believe it would be reasonable to limit
- 5:41the working hours to a time that does
- 5:43not interfere with student sleep and
- 5:46study schedules. This kind of structure
- 5:49shows that you can express a complaint
- 5:51respectfully. Social conventions refer
- 5:54to how well your email follows the
- 5:57expected rules of politeness, register,
- 6:00and tone for the given situation. This
- 6:02approach can help you score higher in
- 6:04the social conventions category. Here is
- 6:07another topic, thanking [snorts] someone
- 6:09for help or support. In these tasks, you
- 6:13write to a person such as a friend,
- 6:15classmate, or professor to express
- 6:18gratitude for something they did for
- 6:20you.
- 6:21You could be writing to thank a
- 6:23classmate for covering your shift or to
- 6:25express appreciation to a professor for
- 6:28their support during a difficult
- 6:30semester. In some cases, you might be
- 6:33acknowledging a friend who helped you
- 6:34get through a challenging time. Although
- 6:37this type of email may seem simple,
- 6:40high-scoring responses go beyond just
- 6:43saying thank you. They give specific
- 6:46details about what the person did and
- 6:48explain how it made a difference. They
- 6:50also often offer something in return or
- 6:53express a desire to return the favor.
- 6:56Here is some key vocabulary for this
- 6:58topic. I wanted to take a moment to
- 7:01thank you for Your support meant a great
- 7:04deal to me. I truly appreciate. I hope I
- 7:07can return the favor someday.
- 7:10For grammar, use past tenses to describe
- 7:13what happened and what the person did.
- 7:16For example, when I was struggling to
- 7:18understand the material before the exam,
- 7:21you took the time to sit down with me
- 7:23and explain the concepts clearly, and
- 7:26that made a real difference to my
- 7:27performance.
- 7:29You can also use present perfect tenses
- 7:32to connect the past event to a current
- 7:34feeling. For example, I've been meaning
- 7:37to write to you ever since the exam
- 7:39results came back because I believe your
- 7:42help was a big part of why I did so
- 7:45well. These details make the email feel
- 7:48natural and well-developed. Now, here is
- 7:51an important point. Many TOEFL
- 7:54candidates think that knowing a few
- 7:56writing topics is enough to achieve a
- 7:58strong result. But it is not enough. To
- 8:01do well in TOEFL writing, you need to
- 8:03understand what the examiner is looking
- 8:06for. For example, you need to use
- 8:08advanced grammar correctly and
- 8:11understand what makes a high-scoring
- 8:13answer. That's exactly what we teach in
- 8:16our TOEFL packages. Our students get
- 8:19step-by-step guidance on how to write
- 8:21strong answers, so they feel confident
- 8:24and ready on test day. They learn how
- 8:27the TOEFL examiners assess their
- 8:29performance and what they need to do to
- 8:31meet the scoring criteria. Our TOEFL
- 8:34packages include lessons for all tasks,
- 8:38sample answers, templates, practice
- 8:41tests, and much more. If you're serious
- 8:44about achieving the TOEFL score you
- 8:46need, click the link below to learn
- 8:48more. Topic number five is writing about
- 8:52a housing or accommodation issue. It
- 8:55usually involves writing to a housing
- 8:57office, a residence hall manager, or a
- 8:59landlord. Common scenarios include
- 9:02reporting a broken appliance or
- 9:04describing a problem with a shared
- 9:06facility. You might also find yourself
- 9:09explaining a situation that makes your
- 9:12accommodation uncomfortable to live in.
- 9:14These tasks require you to be specific
- 9:18about what the problem is and how long
- 9:20it has been going on. You must also
- 9:23explain the effect it is having on your
- 9:25daily life. Responses that lack detail
- 9:28will not score well. Here is some useful
- 9:32vocabulary for this topic. I am
- 9:34contacting you regarding a problem in my
- 9:36apartment. The issue has been ongoing
- 9:40for This has made it difficult to I
- 9:43would appreciate it if this could be
- 9:45attended to as soon as possible. For
- 9:47grammar, use the present perfect
- 9:50continuous tense to describe an ongoing
- 9:53problem. For example, the plumbing in my
- 9:56bathroom has been making a loud knocking
- 9:59sound for the past several days. And the
- 10:02noise is loud enough to wake me up at
- 10:04night. You can also use conditional
- 10:07sentences to request action politely.
- 10:10For example, if a maintenance technician
- 10:13could come to inspect the issue this
- 10:15week, I would be very grateful.
- 10:18Combining specific details with polite
- 10:20formal language can help you score
- 10:23higher on this topic. Let's move on to
- 10:25topic number six. Inviting someone or
- 10:29responding to an invitation. In these
- 10:32tasks, you write to a friend or
- 10:34classmate to invite them to an event or
- 10:36activity or to respond to an invitation
- 10:39they sent you. Your purpose is social
- 10:42and informal. In some cases, you might
- 10:45need to invite a friend to a study group
- 10:47or suggest a weekend outing. In others,
- 10:50you might be responding to an invitation
- 10:52to a celebration or social event. The
- 10:55tone for this type of email is friendly
- 10:58and casual, so you do not need to use
- 11:01formal sentence structures. However, you
- 11:03should still write in complete sentences
- 11:06and make sure your email is well
- 11:08organized. The TOEFL examiner will still
- 11:10be assessing your grammar range and
- 11:12vocabulary, so do not fall into the
- 11:15habit of writing too simply. Here is
- 11:17some key vocabulary for this topic. I'd
- 11:20love it if you could join us. It would
- 11:23be great to see you there. I was
- 11:25wondering if you're free. Let me know if
- 11:28this works for you. For grammar,
- 11:31practice using modal verbs and question
- 11:33forms to make invitations sound natural.
- 11:36For example, I was wondering if you'd be
- 11:39free this Saturday to join a small study
- 11:42group we're putting together for the
- 11:44economics exam. It would be great to
- 11:46have you there. You can also use
- 11:49conditional sentences. You can write,
- 11:52"If you're able to make it, I can send
- 11:54you all the details about where we're
- 11:56meeting and what time." These structures
- 11:59help your email sound natural and
- 12:01appropriate for an informal context.
- 12:03Topic number seven is providing
- 12:06information or giving an explanation. In
- 12:09these tasks, you write to explain a
- 12:11situation, report on something that has
- 12:14happened, or give someone important
- 12:16details they need. You might be writing
- 12:19to a professor to explain a scheduling
- 12:21conflict. In other cases, you might
- 12:24write to a university department to
- 12:26provide information about your academic
- 12:29situation. These emails require clarity
- 12:33above all. The person reading your email
- 12:36needs to understand the situation
- 12:38quickly. So, avoid vague or overly
- 12:41complicated sentences. Get to the point
- 12:44clearly and provide enough detail to
- 12:47make the situation easy to understand.
- 12:50Here is some useful vocabulary for this
- 12:52topic. "I'm writing to inform you that I
- 12:56wanted to let you know about The
- 12:58situation is as follows. Please find the
- 13:01details below." For grammar, use a
- 13:04variety of sentence structures to keep
- 13:07the email interesting while remaining
- 13:09clear. For example, you can write, "I am
- 13:13writing to let you know that I will not
- 13:15be able to attend the group meeting on
- 13:17Thursday as I have a scheduled
- 13:19appointment that conflicts with that
- 13:21time." You can also use relative clauses
- 13:25is add detail without making sentences
- 13:28too long. You could write, "The
- 13:30appointment, which was arranged by my
- 13:32doctor several weeks ago, cannot easily
- 13:36be rescheduled."
- 13:37When you write clearly and use a variety
- 13:40of sentence structures, your email can
- 13:43score higher. By the way, if you want
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- 13:51We only make videos that you actually
- 13:53want to watch. Another topic in the
- 13:56email task is offering advice or making
- 13:59a suggestion. In these tasks, you write
- 14:02to a friend or classmate who is dealing
- 14:04with a problem or facing a decision, and
- 14:07you offer helpful advice or ideas. This
- 14:11could mean writing to someone who is
- 14:13struggling to manage their workload or
- 14:15explaining strategies to help a friend
- 14:18who is finding it hard to adjust to
- 14:20university life. It might also involve
- 14:23advising someone on how to approach a
- 14:26difficult personal situation. These
- 14:28tasks are informal, but they still
- 14:31require well-developed responses. Do not
- 14:34simply list a few pieces of advice.
- 14:36Instead, explain your reasoning, provide
- 14:40examples, and show that you have thought
- 14:42carefully about the other person's
- 14:44situation. Here is some key vocabulary
- 14:47for this topic. I think one thing that
- 14:50might help is, "You might want to
- 14:53consider based on my own experience." I
- 14:56hope this is useful. For grammar, use
- 15:00conditional sentences to frame your
- 15:02advice in a helpful and non-forceful
- 15:05way. For example, you can write, "If you
- 15:09find it hard to stay focused during long
- 15:11study sessions, you might want to try
- 15:14breaking your work into shorter blocks
- 15:16with short breaks in between. I found
- 15:19that it really helps with
- 15:20concentration." You can also use the
- 15:23present perfect tense to draw on your
- 15:26own experience. You can write, "I've
- 15:29been in a similar situation before, and
- 15:31one thing that worked well for me was
- 15:34creating a weekly schedule so I could
- 15:36see what I needed to get done."
- 15:39This combination of personal experience
- 15:42and specific suggestions makes for a
- 15:44natural, high-scoring response.
- 15:47Topic number nine is applying for a
- 15:49position or asking about an opportunity.
- 15:52In these tasks, you write to a
- 15:54supervisor, coordinator, or hiring
- 15:57manager to express interest in a job,
- 16:00internship, or work-study program. Your
- 16:03goal is to ask for more information
- 16:05about a position. You might also explain
- 16:08why you're interested or ask about the
- 16:11application process. These emails need
- 16:14to be formal in tone. Don't use casual
- 16:17language or contractions. The examiner
- 16:20is looking for appropriate social
- 16:22conventions. So, the formality and
- 16:24structure of your email will affect your
- 16:26score. Here is some useful vocabulary
- 16:29for this topic. I am writing to express
- 16:32my interest in, I would like to inquire
- 16:35about, I believe I would be a strong
- 16:38candidate because I would be grateful
- 16:41for the opportunity to discuss this
- 16:43further. For grammar, use present tenses
- 16:46to describe your current qualifications
- 16:49and past tenses to refer to your
- 16:52relevant experience.
- 16:53For example, I am currently in my second
- 16:57year of a degree in business
- 16:58administration, and I have previously
- 17:01worked as a student volunteer at the
- 17:03university's career center. You can also
- 17:06use modal verbs to express enthusiasm
- 17:09and interest like, "I would welcome the
- 17:12opportunity to contribute to your team,
- 17:14and would be happy to provide any
- 17:16further information you may require.
- 17:19This kind of language demonstrates that
- 17:21you can write clearly with confidence
- 17:24and a polished tone.
- 17:26Topic number 10 is apologizing for a
- 17:28mistake or inconvenience. In these
- 17:31tasks, you need to acknowledge what
- 17:34happened, explain it briefly, express
- 17:37regret, and offer a solution or next
- 17:40step. The tone will depend on who you
- 17:43are writing to. If you are writing to a
- 17:45professor or campus administrator, your
- 17:48email should be formal. If you are
- 17:50writing to a friend or classmate, a
- 17:52warmer and more personal tone is
- 17:55appropriate. Regardless of the tone, the
- 17:57key to scoring well on apology emails is
- 18:01to be direct and take responsibility
- 18:03clearly. Do not spend too much time
- 18:06explaining excuses without acknowledging
- 18:10the impact on the other person. Here is
- 18:12some key vocabulary for this topic. I am
- 18:15writing to sincerely apologize for. I
- 18:18take full responsibility for. I
- 18:21understand that this may have caused
- 18:23inconvenience. I would like to make it
- 18:26up to you. For grammar, use past tenses
- 18:29to describe what happened and past
- 18:32perfect tenses to give background
- 18:34context. For example, you can write, "I
- 18:38am writing to apologize for missing the
- 18:40group presentation yesterday. I had set
- 18:43an alarm for the wrong time. And by the
- 18:45time I realized my mistake, the session
- 18:47had already ended." You can also use
- 18:50conditional sentences to propose a
- 18:52solution. For example, "If it would be
- 18:55helpful, I could prepare a short written
- 18:58summary of my contribution to the
- 19:00project and share it with the professor
- 19:02directly." Take ownership clearly and
- 19:05offer a concrete solution. That's it.
- 19:08These are 10 topics for the TOEFL email
- 19:11task. If you want expert guidance for
- 19:13your TOEFL preparation, check out our
- 19:16TOEFL packages using the link below. Our
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- 19:21sample answers, templates, practice
- 19:24tests, and other useful resources to
- 19:26help you feel confident on test day. I
- 19:29hope you like this video. Don't forget
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- 19:41they can improve their TOEFL score, too.
- 19:43See you in the next video.
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