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  1. 0:00Many TOEFL candidates lose points in the
  2. 0:02email task, not because they can't write
  3. 0:05in English, but because they are not
  4. 0:07prepared for the topics that come up.
  5. 0:10Here's the truth. Certain themes often
  6. 0:13come up again and again. If you prepare
  7. 0:15vocabulary, grammar structures, and key
  8. 0:18ideas for these topics in advance, you
  9. 0:21can be in a much stronger position on
  10. 0:23test day. We've helped thousands of
  11. 0:26students prepare this way through our
  12. 0:28TOEFL packages. With clear steps and
  13. 0:31strategic preparation, they've turned
  14. 0:33confusion into confidence. In this
  15. 0:36video, we'll go through 10 TOEFL email
  16. 0:38task topics. You will get useful
  17. 0:40vocabulary and sample phrases for each
  18. 0:43one. By the end, you'll know what to
  19. 0:45prepare for the email task. Let's get
  20. 0:48started. Topic number one is reporting a
  21. 0:51problem with campus facilities. In this
  22. 0:54type of task, you are given a scenario
  23. 0:56involving a problem at your university.
  24. 0:59Your goal is to communicate the issue
  25. 1:01clearly and request action. That purpose
  26. 1:05might be reporting a broken piece of
  27. 1:07equipment or describing a safety
  28. 1:09concern. It might also be explaining a
  29. 1:12maintenance issue that is affecting your
  30. 1:15daily life. To write a high-scoring
  31. 1:17response, you need to describe the
  32. 1:20problem in specific detail. You should
  33. 1:23also explain how it is affecting you and
  34. 1:26request that something be done about it.
  35. 1:29Vague descriptions like, "There is a
  36. 1:31problem." will not score well. Instead,
  37. 1:34use precise language that shows you can
  38. 1:37communicate clearly in a formal and
  39. 1:40polished way. Here is some useful
  40. 1:42vocabulary for this topic. Maintenance
  41. 1:45issue, affecting my ability to, I am
  42. 1:48writing to report, I would appreciate it
  43. 1:51if this could be resolved as soon as
  44. 1:53possible. For grammar, practice using
  45. 1:56present perfect tenses to explain how
  46. 1:59long the problem has been going on. For
  47. 2:01example, you can write, "The heating
  48. 2:04system in my apartment has not been
  49. 2:06working properly for the past week, and
  50. 2:09the temperature inside has been
  51. 2:11consistently cold despite my attempts to
  52. 2:14adjust the thermostat." You can also use
  53. 2:17result clauses to explain the impact of
  54. 2:20the problem. For example, "The situation
  55. 2:23has made it difficult to study
  56. 2:25effectively as the noise from the
  57. 2:27construction work starts early in the
  58. 2:29morning and lasts throughout the day."
  59. 2:32Strong responses explain both the
  60. 2:35problem and its consequences clearly and
  61. 2:38in detail. The second topic is making a
  62. 2:42request or asking for permission. In
  63. 2:45these tasks, you need to explain a
  64. 2:47situation that requires special
  65. 2:50approval. You must make your request
  66. 2:52clearly and give a good reason for it.
  67. 2:55That purpose might be asking to
  68. 2:57reschedule an exam or requesting an
  69. 3:00extension on an assignment. It might
  70. 3:03also be asking to be absent from a class
  71. 3:06for an important reason. High-scoring
  72. 3:08responses in this category are polite,
  73. 3:11well-structured, and specific. Explain
  74. 3:14your situation clearly. Additionally,
  75. 3:17show that you understand you are asking
  76. 3:20for something that requires the other
  77. 3:22person's consideration. Here is some key
  78. 3:25vocabulary for this topic. "I am writing
  79. 3:28to request. I would be grateful if you
  80. 3:31could. Due to I would like to ask
  81. 3:34whether it would be possible to. I look
  82. 3:36forward to your response." For grammar,
  83. 3:39practice using modal verbs to make
  84. 3:41polite requests. For example, "I would
  85. 3:45be very grateful if you could allow me
  86. 3:47to submit the assignment one day late as
  87. 3:50I have been dealing with a medical this
  88. 3:52week. You can also use conditional
  89. 3:54sentences to show flexibility. You could
  90. 3:57write, "If it would be possible to
  91. 4:00reschedule the exam, I would be happy to
  92. 4:02take it at whatever time works best for
  93. 4:05you."
  94. 4:05These structures help your email sound
  95. 4:08polished and courteous. Topic number
  96. 4:10three is complaining about a service or
  97. 4:13situation. These tasks ask you to
  98. 4:16express dissatisfaction with something,
  99. 4:19explain why it is a problem, and request
  100. 4:22that action be taken. For example, you
  101. 4:25might be writing to complain about noise
  102. 4:28in a dormitory, or to report poor
  103. 4:30service at a campus department. In other
  104. 4:33cases, you could be expressing concern
  105. 4:36about a policy that is affecting
  106. 4:38students. The key to scoring well on
  107. 4:41this topic is to be clear and polished.
  108. 4:45Do not sound rude or emotional. Instead,
  109. 4:48present the facts, explain the impact,
  110. 4:51and request a specific solution. Here is
  111. 4:54some useful vocabulary for this topic.
  112. 4:57I'm writing to express my concern about
  113. 5:00this situation has been affecting. I
  114. 5:03would like to request. I hope this
  115. 5:06matter can be resolved promptly.
  116. 5:08For grammar, use past and present tenses
  117. 5:11together to show that the problem has
  118. 5:14been ongoing. You can write, "The noise
  119. 5:17from the nearby renovation work began
  120. 5:19two weeks ago and has continued every
  121. 5:22morning since then, making it difficult
  122. 5:25to sleep before my early classes." You
  123. 5:28can also use contrast structures to keep
  124. 5:31a balanced tone.
  125. 5:32While I understand that construction
  126. 5:35projects are sometimes necessary, I
  127. 5:38believe it would be reasonable to limit
  128. 5:41the working hours to a time that does
  129. 5:43not interfere with student sleep and
  130. 5:46study schedules. This kind of structure
  131. 5:49shows that you can express a complaint
  132. 5:51respectfully. Social conventions refer
  133. 5:54to how well your email follows the
  134. 5:57expected rules of politeness, register,
  135. 6:00and tone for the given situation. This
  136. 6:02approach can help you score higher in
  137. 6:04the social conventions category. Here is
  138. 6:07another topic, thanking [snorts] someone
  139. 6:09for help or support. In these tasks, you
  140. 6:13write to a person such as a friend,
  141. 6:15classmate, or professor to express
  142. 6:18gratitude for something they did for
  143. 6:20you.
  144. 6:21You could be writing to thank a
  145. 6:23classmate for covering your shift or to
  146. 6:25express appreciation to a professor for
  147. 6:28their support during a difficult
  148. 6:30semester. In some cases, you might be
  149. 6:33acknowledging a friend who helped you
  150. 6:34get through a challenging time. Although
  151. 6:37this type of email may seem simple,
  152. 6:40high-scoring responses go beyond just
  153. 6:43saying thank you. They give specific
  154. 6:46details about what the person did and
  155. 6:48explain how it made a difference. They
  156. 6:50also often offer something in return or
  157. 6:53express a desire to return the favor.
  158. 6:56Here is some key vocabulary for this
  159. 6:58topic. I wanted to take a moment to
  160. 7:01thank you for Your support meant a great
  161. 7:04deal to me. I truly appreciate. I hope I
  162. 7:07can return the favor someday.
  163. 7:10For grammar, use past tenses to describe
  164. 7:13what happened and what the person did.
  165. 7:16For example, when I was struggling to
  166. 7:18understand the material before the exam,
  167. 7:21you took the time to sit down with me
  168. 7:23and explain the concepts clearly, and
  169. 7:26that made a real difference to my
  170. 7:27performance.
  171. 7:29You can also use present perfect tenses
  172. 7:32to connect the past event to a current
  173. 7:34feeling. For example, I've been meaning
  174. 7:37to write to you ever since the exam
  175. 7:39results came back because I believe your
  176. 7:42help was a big part of why I did so
  177. 7:45well. These details make the email feel
  178. 7:48natural and well-developed. Now, here is
  179. 7:51an important point. Many TOEFL
  180. 7:54candidates think that knowing a few
  181. 7:56writing topics is enough to achieve a
  182. 7:58strong result. But it is not enough. To
  183. 8:01do well in TOEFL writing, you need to
  184. 8:03understand what the examiner is looking
  185. 8:06for. For example, you need to use
  186. 8:08advanced grammar correctly and
  187. 8:11understand what makes a high-scoring
  188. 8:13answer. That's exactly what we teach in
  189. 8:16our TOEFL packages. Our students get
  190. 8:19step-by-step guidance on how to write
  191. 8:21strong answers, so they feel confident
  192. 8:24and ready on test day. They learn how
  193. 8:27the TOEFL examiners assess their
  194. 8:29performance and what they need to do to
  195. 8:31meet the scoring criteria. Our TOEFL
  196. 8:34packages include lessons for all tasks,
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  198. 8:41tests, and much more. If you're serious
  199. 8:44about achieving the TOEFL score you
  200. 8:46need, click the link below to learn
  201. 8:48more. Topic number five is writing about
  202. 8:52a housing or accommodation issue. It
  203. 8:55usually involves writing to a housing
  204. 8:57office, a residence hall manager, or a
  205. 8:59landlord. Common scenarios include
  206. 9:02reporting a broken appliance or
  207. 9:04describing a problem with a shared
  208. 9:06facility. You might also find yourself
  209. 9:09explaining a situation that makes your
  210. 9:12accommodation uncomfortable to live in.
  211. 9:14These tasks require you to be specific
  212. 9:18about what the problem is and how long
  213. 9:20it has been going on. You must also
  214. 9:23explain the effect it is having on your
  215. 9:25daily life. Responses that lack detail
  216. 9:28will not score well. Here is some useful
  217. 9:32vocabulary for this topic. I am
  218. 9:34contacting you regarding a problem in my
  219. 9:36apartment. The issue has been ongoing
  220. 9:40for This has made it difficult to I
  221. 9:43would appreciate it if this could be
  222. 9:45attended to as soon as possible. For
  223. 9:47grammar, use the present perfect
  224. 9:50continuous tense to describe an ongoing
  225. 9:53problem. For example, the plumbing in my
  226. 9:56bathroom has been making a loud knocking
  227. 9:59sound for the past several days. And the
  228. 10:02noise is loud enough to wake me up at
  229. 10:04night. You can also use conditional
  230. 10:07sentences to request action politely.
  231. 10:10For example, if a maintenance technician
  232. 10:13could come to inspect the issue this
  233. 10:15week, I would be very grateful.
  234. 10:18Combining specific details with polite
  235. 10:20formal language can help you score
  236. 10:23higher on this topic. Let's move on to
  237. 10:25topic number six. Inviting someone or
  238. 10:29responding to an invitation. In these
  239. 10:32tasks, you write to a friend or
  240. 10:34classmate to invite them to an event or
  241. 10:36activity or to respond to an invitation
  242. 10:39they sent you. Your purpose is social
  243. 10:42and informal. In some cases, you might
  244. 10:45need to invite a friend to a study group
  245. 10:47or suggest a weekend outing. In others,
  246. 10:50you might be responding to an invitation
  247. 10:52to a celebration or social event. The
  248. 10:55tone for this type of email is friendly
  249. 10:58and casual, so you do not need to use
  250. 11:01formal sentence structures. However, you
  251. 11:03should still write in complete sentences
  252. 11:06and make sure your email is well
  253. 11:08organized. The TOEFL examiner will still
  254. 11:10be assessing your grammar range and
  255. 11:12vocabulary, so do not fall into the
  256. 11:15habit of writing too simply. Here is
  257. 11:17some key vocabulary for this topic. I'd
  258. 11:20love it if you could join us. It would
  259. 11:23be great to see you there. I was
  260. 11:25wondering if you're free. Let me know if
  261. 11:28this works for you. For grammar,
  262. 11:31practice using modal verbs and question
  263. 11:33forms to make invitations sound natural.
  264. 11:36For example, I was wondering if you'd be
  265. 11:39free this Saturday to join a small study
  266. 11:42group we're putting together for the
  267. 11:44economics exam. It would be great to
  268. 11:46have you there. You can also use
  269. 11:49conditional sentences. You can write,
  270. 11:52"If you're able to make it, I can send
  271. 11:54you all the details about where we're
  272. 11:56meeting and what time." These structures
  273. 11:59help your email sound natural and
  274. 12:01appropriate for an informal context.
  275. 12:03Topic number seven is providing
  276. 12:06information or giving an explanation. In
  277. 12:09these tasks, you write to explain a
  278. 12:11situation, report on something that has
  279. 12:14happened, or give someone important
  280. 12:16details they need. You might be writing
  281. 12:19to a professor to explain a scheduling
  282. 12:21conflict. In other cases, you might
  283. 12:24write to a university department to
  284. 12:26provide information about your academic
  285. 12:29situation. These emails require clarity
  286. 12:33above all. The person reading your email
  287. 12:36needs to understand the situation
  288. 12:38quickly. So, avoid vague or overly
  289. 12:41complicated sentences. Get to the point
  290. 12:44clearly and provide enough detail to
  291. 12:47make the situation easy to understand.
  292. 12:50Here is some useful vocabulary for this
  293. 12:52topic. "I'm writing to inform you that I
  294. 12:56wanted to let you know about The
  295. 12:58situation is as follows. Please find the
  296. 13:01details below." For grammar, use a
  297. 13:04variety of sentence structures to keep
  298. 13:07the email interesting while remaining
  299. 13:09clear. For example, you can write, "I am
  300. 13:13writing to let you know that I will not
  301. 13:15be able to attend the group meeting on
  302. 13:17Thursday as I have a scheduled
  303. 13:19appointment that conflicts with that
  304. 13:21time." You can also use relative clauses
  305. 13:25is add detail without making sentences
  306. 13:28too long. You could write, "The
  307. 13:30appointment, which was arranged by my
  308. 13:32doctor several weeks ago, cannot easily
  309. 13:36be rescheduled."
  310. 13:37When you write clearly and use a variety
  311. 13:40of sentence structures, your email can
  312. 13:43score higher. By the way, if you want
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  315. 13:51We only make videos that you actually
  316. 13:53want to watch. Another topic in the
  317. 13:56email task is offering advice or making
  318. 13:59a suggestion. In these tasks, you write
  319. 14:02to a friend or classmate who is dealing
  320. 14:04with a problem or facing a decision, and
  321. 14:07you offer helpful advice or ideas. This
  322. 14:11could mean writing to someone who is
  323. 14:13struggling to manage their workload or
  324. 14:15explaining strategies to help a friend
  325. 14:18who is finding it hard to adjust to
  326. 14:20university life. It might also involve
  327. 14:23advising someone on how to approach a
  328. 14:26difficult personal situation. These
  329. 14:28tasks are informal, but they still
  330. 14:31require well-developed responses. Do not
  331. 14:34simply list a few pieces of advice.
  332. 14:36Instead, explain your reasoning, provide
  333. 14:40examples, and show that you have thought
  334. 14:42carefully about the other person's
  335. 14:44situation. Here is some key vocabulary
  336. 14:47for this topic. I think one thing that
  337. 14:50might help is, "You might want to
  338. 14:53consider based on my own experience." I
  339. 14:56hope this is useful. For grammar, use
  340. 15:00conditional sentences to frame your
  341. 15:02advice in a helpful and non-forceful
  342. 15:05way. For example, you can write, "If you
  343. 15:09find it hard to stay focused during long
  344. 15:11study sessions, you might want to try
  345. 15:14breaking your work into shorter blocks
  346. 15:16with short breaks in between. I found
  347. 15:19that it really helps with
  348. 15:20concentration." You can also use the
  349. 15:23present perfect tense to draw on your
  350. 15:26own experience. You can write, "I've
  351. 15:29been in a similar situation before, and
  352. 15:31one thing that worked well for me was
  353. 15:34creating a weekly schedule so I could
  354. 15:36see what I needed to get done."
  355. 15:39This combination of personal experience
  356. 15:42and specific suggestions makes for a
  357. 15:44natural, high-scoring response.
  358. 15:47Topic number nine is applying for a
  359. 15:49position or asking about an opportunity.
  360. 15:52In these tasks, you write to a
  361. 15:54supervisor, coordinator, or hiring
  362. 15:57manager to express interest in a job,
  363. 16:00internship, or work-study program. Your
  364. 16:03goal is to ask for more information
  365. 16:05about a position. You might also explain
  366. 16:08why you're interested or ask about the
  367. 16:11application process. These emails need
  368. 16:14to be formal in tone. Don't use casual
  369. 16:17language or contractions. The examiner
  370. 16:20is looking for appropriate social
  371. 16:22conventions. So, the formality and
  372. 16:24structure of your email will affect your
  373. 16:26score. Here is some useful vocabulary
  374. 16:29for this topic. I am writing to express
  375. 16:32my interest in, I would like to inquire
  376. 16:35about, I believe I would be a strong
  377. 16:38candidate because I would be grateful
  378. 16:41for the opportunity to discuss this
  379. 16:43further. For grammar, use present tenses
  380. 16:46to describe your current qualifications
  381. 16:49and past tenses to refer to your
  382. 16:52relevant experience.
  383. 16:53For example, I am currently in my second
  384. 16:57year of a degree in business
  385. 16:58administration, and I have previously
  386. 17:01worked as a student volunteer at the
  387. 17:03university's career center. You can also
  388. 17:06use modal verbs to express enthusiasm
  389. 17:09and interest like, "I would welcome the
  390. 17:12opportunity to contribute to your team,
  391. 17:14and would be happy to provide any
  392. 17:16further information you may require.
  393. 17:19This kind of language demonstrates that
  394. 17:21you can write clearly with confidence
  395. 17:24and a polished tone.
  396. 17:26Topic number 10 is apologizing for a
  397. 17:28mistake or inconvenience. In these
  398. 17:31tasks, you need to acknowledge what
  399. 17:34happened, explain it briefly, express
  400. 17:37regret, and offer a solution or next
  401. 17:40step. The tone will depend on who you
  402. 17:43are writing to. If you are writing to a
  403. 17:45professor or campus administrator, your
  404. 17:48email should be formal. If you are
  405. 17:50writing to a friend or classmate, a
  406. 17:52warmer and more personal tone is
  407. 17:55appropriate. Regardless of the tone, the
  408. 17:57key to scoring well on apology emails is
  409. 18:01to be direct and take responsibility
  410. 18:03clearly. Do not spend too much time
  411. 18:06explaining excuses without acknowledging
  412. 18:10the impact on the other person. Here is
  413. 18:12some key vocabulary for this topic. I am
  414. 18:15writing to sincerely apologize for. I
  415. 18:18take full responsibility for. I
  416. 18:21understand that this may have caused
  417. 18:23inconvenience. I would like to make it
  418. 18:26up to you. For grammar, use past tenses
  419. 18:29to describe what happened and past
  420. 18:32perfect tenses to give background
  421. 18:34context. For example, you can write, "I
  422. 18:38am writing to apologize for missing the
  423. 18:40group presentation yesterday. I had set
  424. 18:43an alarm for the wrong time. And by the
  425. 18:45time I realized my mistake, the session
  426. 18:47had already ended." You can also use
  427. 18:50conditional sentences to propose a
  428. 18:52solution. For example, "If it would be
  429. 18:55helpful, I could prepare a short written
  430. 18:58summary of my contribution to the
  431. 19:00project and share it with the professor
  432. 19:02directly." Take ownership clearly and
  433. 19:05offer a concrete solution. That's it.
  434. 19:08These are 10 topics for the TOEFL email
  435. 19:11task. If you want expert guidance for
  436. 19:13your TOEFL preparation, check out our
  437. 19:16TOEFL packages using the link below. Our
  438. 19:19packages include step-by-step guidance,
  439. 19:21sample answers, templates, practice
  440. 19:24tests, and other useful resources to
  441. 19:26help you feel confident on test day. I
  442. 19:29hope you like this video. Don't forget
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